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Author Topic: My attempt at "Child is Father of the Man"  (Read 2507 times)
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« on: December 22, 2011, 04:09:03 PM »
I've been teasing this but I've finally gotten the courage to post an attempt. Can't be any worse then the time someone on Youtube said I sounded like "A gay man in the Vienna Boys choir"  LOL

http://soundcloud.com/andrewhersh/cifotm-my-attempt

Just wanted to know what you guys think. All constructive criticism welcome.
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« Reply #1 on: December 22, 2011, 04:25:47 PM »
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« Reply #2 on: December 22, 2011, 04:31:11 PM »
The baby must be frozen from the horror  Undecided

Knew this was a bad idea.  Razz
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« Reply #3 on: December 22, 2011, 04:51:17 PM »
It's not BAD, but it's not... fantastic.

try adding more reverb and blending the vocals better :D
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« Reply #4 on: December 22, 2011, 05:01:52 PM »
Quote from: FatherOfTheMan on December 22, 2011, 04:51:17 PM
It's not BAD, but it's not... fantastic.

try adding more reverb and blending the vocals better :D

Yeah not adding reverb was a big mistake. I don't know how to do it in audacity and garage band hates me lol.
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« Reply #5 on: December 22, 2011, 05:12:52 PM »
Wow.
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I, I love the colorful clothes she wears, and she's already working on my brain. I only looked in her eyes, but I picked up something I just can't explain. I, I bet I know what she’s like, and I can feel how right she’d be for me. It’s weird how she comes in so strong, and I wonder what she’s picking up from me. I hope it’s good, good, good, good vibrations, yeah!!
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« Reply #6 on: December 25, 2011, 09:21:03 AM »
Quote from: FatherOfTheMan on December 22, 2011, 04:51:17 PM
It's not BAD, but it's not... fantastic.

try adding more reverb and blending the vocals better :D

^This - also, try to get more on the beat with each part, they sound like they're dragging behind the track a bit.
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« Reply #7 on: December 26, 2011, 01:19:27 AM »
It sounds like you're barely singing, more like speaking. Don't be afraid, just go for it!

Backing track sounds great!  Cheesy
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« Reply #8 on: December 26, 2011, 01:18:39 PM »
Quote from: Aegir on December 26, 2011, 01:19:27 AM
It sounds like you're barely singing, more like speaking. Don't be afraid, just go for it!

Backing track sounds great!  Cheesy

Thanks, I made it myself  LOL

Should I attempt it again? I'm worried I may do worse  Tongue
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