Piper Of Your Dreams (Demo)

[Too Much Sugar]

Hey, whatdoyaknow?  I do more than Beach Boys covers! 

Either way, here is a song I wrote about a month ago, entitled "Piper Of Your Dreams." Everything you hear is me, from the composition to the recording and the production. Nonetheless, it's just merely a demo, so I know a lot of things aren't top notch (it was all written and recorded within a couple of hours, which explains things), but I thought it could be helpful to hear your comments on what's here so far, so I hope you listen and enjoy it! Thanks!

So, here it is: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=910733&songID=7907985

Link 2, if the other one doesn't work: http://www.icompositions.com/music/song.php?sid=119441

Enjoy!

[the captain]

I like it, Matthew. Creepy, in a good way, and reminiscent to my ears of some Paul McCartney in ways I can't put my finger on. My quibble/recommendation would be that I'd love to hear you sing out more often, rather than shiftiing into the falsetto so quickly. My guess (though I could be wrong) is that you could push your natural range higher if you sang more forcefully, and at times I think the song warrants that. But it's often in some transitional periods, and I know it can be tricky to bounce back and forth.

While your covers are always fun to hear, I'd love to keep hearing originals. I know everyone here likes putting up BBs tunes (presumably to drum up interest and get others to listen), I'm always interested in (and sometimes impressed by) our members' original music.

[matt-zeus]

Nice song and quite dark too. I like the restrained vocal, it suits the mood of the song. The melody is lovely.

[Rocker]

I like this very much too. Like your voice and the echo you used on it. Don't know what else to say at the moment, but I really think it's good