After writing what I felt were rather slow and dull songs, I decided to take the risk and try writing a rock song. Nothing hard rock, but more pop/rock, I suppose. I never really branched into rock in general because I never felt I could do it, so this is really nothing more than an attempt to write a "single," if you will. Of course, it still sounds nothing like a rock song, but, nonetheless, it's still a very basic demo, and the lyrics will be replaced, as it's nothing more than me making stuff up (I don't even know what the title means), and the vocals will definitely be redone (and vocals like mine should not be singing a rock track, even I know that), but this is just a basic start with me doing everything that you hear on the track. So why post it? Well, I am definitely curious on feedback about the song itself. Is it good, is it horrible, does it have potential? If so, what would you do?
Thoughts are greatly appreciated. Thanks!
Edit:
http://www.icompositions.com/music/song.php?sid=103443