New Recording: "Something Better"

[the captain]

From the same Tuesday drum session as the past two songs I've posted, I mostly re-did my existing song "Something Better" (which I am sure I had posted as an earlier demo at some point). The entire second portion is new as of today, and the vocal and bass on the first part are new.

I would love to know what you think. (I admit it, it drives me insane to see views and no comments.)

This is a quick mix.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/avifyz

[matt-zeus]

This is nice, I can hear some Todd Rundgren in there?! As well as the Caroline No melody!
Cool production, and nice guitar licks as well.
Like the change of pace in it too, sort of reminds me of a Kirsty Maccoll for some reason.
You'll have to forgive me for offering feedback through comparison to other artists, it's usually how I listen to stuff!

[the captain]

In an older version I actually sang the bit of Caroline No, but now I figure if you can't catch it without the extra help, well, the hell with you!

(P.S., I hate Todd Rundgren. So I appreciate you keeping that tradition alive.)