Nice, reminded me of a Macca-type feel!
Thanks: that was very much what I had in mind when writing it.
Interesting note: while it originally was written with different lyrics as a Macca-style "character song," the rewritten lyrics (and the middle music segment) were written literally while I was on a walk. So all the references were literal, if not quite that extreme. The rain, the house into which I could clearly see, not wanting to walk to 56th street ... all factual. But no, I didn't crouch in someone's shrubs and peek in their windows!