Maybe some work needs to be done for the vocals imo.
Thanks. Somebody else said something about vocals, too, suggesting that I do harmonies the whole way through. But I think it was just a polite way to say the leads are pretty weak. I am going to at least rerecord them as-is, and maybe rearrange them somewhat, too. I am not quite sure how yet, but it's no rush anyway. (Maybe next time I won't drink while doing the vocals. Or maybe I'll drink more. We'll see which works better.)
I appreciate the comments, and am glad you like the track. It was tricky, in that I didn't use my drummer. Instead I copied the sound of his kick from a different song and manually inserted it where I wanted it. The shaker sound is my going "tch" with my mouth. 'fraid I''m a bit limited percussively. But I thought it turned out OK. The elec guitar and organ, in particular, i enjoyed.