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« on: April 18, 2017, 01:46:04 AM »

Any kind form or shape - you're welcome to come! Also non-BB topics will do very nicely!
[Hopefully without me getting up people's noses this time around. I'll keep a low(er) profile to that end indeed ...]
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #1 on: April 20, 2017, 12:11:03 PM »

Brian DID mention "a Teenage SYMPHONY TO God" (=SMiLE), actually. But since there was some kind of libretto involved, why not call it an opera?
Exactly what did he have in mind? We only need to read his (revised) message backwards to find out - in the following haiku-palindrome: An opera la 'The Tales of [E.T.A.] Hoffmann'?:

>'A Teenage Opera

To God? DO got "arepo"!

E.g.: an e-E.T.A.'<
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"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #2 on: April 25, 2017, 06:21:15 AM »

Limerick-palindrome RE-devellopped from >Mr.K/SkRm<:

>Sex-e-PALINDROMES unite GODs EXes

An integral EVIL -- flexes

Ex-elf: LIVE LargE-t^'nin

AS "EXes" DO-GET-IN!

Use M.O.Rd.  ~  nil APEXes!<
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"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #3 on: April 25, 2017, 06:27:35 AM »

What are you smoking? Cool Guy
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I don't see the point in punishing Brian's musical output solely because Mike wants to wow the President Elect with how long he can weeze "wheeeeeeen" into a microphone.- rab2591
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« Reply #4 on: April 28, 2017, 06:26:02 AM »

What are you smoking? Cool Guy

>A 'smok' - I ?

"Smokin", I ??

Komsi-komsa!!<
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"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #5 on: April 28, 2017, 11:17:45 AM »

Well played sir! LOL
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I don't see the point in punishing Brian's musical output solely because Mike wants to wow the President Elect with how long he can weeze "wheeeeeeen" into a microphone.- rab2591
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« Reply #6 on: May 02, 2017, 06:52:10 AM »

A haiku-palindRHYME dedicated to the late Merle Haggard (& to Beach Boys` version of his Muskogee-song):

>A smOKI' [smok'd] FROM

MUSKOKEE?  EEK!  Ok-SUM:

Morf'd? = `komSI-KOMsa' ...<
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #7 on: May 02, 2017, 07:22:36 AM »

A haiku-palindRHYME dedicated to the late Merle Haggard (& to Beach Boys` version of his Muskogee-song):

>A smOKI' [smok'd] FROM

MUSKOKEE?  EEK!  Ok-SUM:

Morf'd? = `komSI-KOMsa' ...<
Is this 'haiku'? It isn't something I've been familiar with as haiku... it'd be fun if I could read it-can someone read it for me, though Smiley
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« Reply #8 on: May 06, 2017, 01:25:24 AM »

A haiku-palindRHYME dedicated to the late Merle Haggard (& to Beach Boys` version of his Muskogee-song):

>A smOKI' [smok'd] FROM

MUSKOKEE?  EEK!  Ok-SUM:

Morf'd? = `komSI-KOMsa' ...<
Is this 'haiku'? It isn't something I've been familiar with as haiku... it'd be fun if I could read it-can someone read it for me, though Smiley

Here's another one of them KRAPPY! Haiku+/palindromes, I'm afraid ...
And this is why I DIDN't want the move to THE SANDBOX (Brian's Dogs!):

>*Louie* - *Banana* ...

+ Sandbox; o *B*-DNAs !

A 'nana' be I: "U'~o' *L*. !"<
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>>>Sex if 'dna-Vosse' nixes
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #9 on: May 09, 2017, 01:32:11 AM »

A haiku-palindRHYME dedicated to the late Merle Haggard (& to Beach Boys` version of his Muskogee-song):

>A smOKI' [smok'd] FROM

MUSKOKEE?  EEK!  Ok-SUM:

Morf'd? = `komSI-KOMsa' ...<
In the following utter madness, I'll try my darndest to prove MATHEMATICALLY! what a doubled or SQUARED Haiku-palindrhyme adds up to ...
[the topix being: On Top Of Old Smokey(SMiLE-era)/Smokey Joes Cafe(Party)/Okie From Muskogee(live)]
A rhymed haiku-palindrome (5/7/5 = 17 syllables) times two: equals ONE limerick-Palindrome (8/8/5/5/8 = 34 syllables).
An amorf'd, lowkey experiMENTAL haiku/limerick-palindrome:

>SEEK "Ol' Smoki" smok'd from 'a smoki';

smok'd   from Musk-Okee/Reek-OK ...

Sum :"Muskokee"

"Reek-Ok" sum-morf'd = KOMSI ?

- kom's AMORF'd, kom's I: kom's 'Lo-kees' !<
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #10 on: May 16, 2017, 01:21:54 AM »

Andy Paley deserves his own palindrome. Even his surname calls for one! After all those years of hard work he put into his collaboration with Brian, and relatively little OFFICIAL output to show for it; we can only speculate: Y??? (co-starring usual suspect, *Eugene Landy*)
[This one should be proof, that anyone can create a (haiku-)palindrome. It all grows out of that first line: the name with a suitable suffix! The rest is backward paddling and spelling, trying to make sense of it/add meaning to it all:]
(number one:)

>L/ANDY PALEY'drome !

"M.O.Rd." - Y?  *E.L*, A.P.??

Y?   DNA = L. !<
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #11 on: May 20, 2017, 01:17:45 AM »

          Paley'drome #:

>Naf'? - Aha!; *Rio
Grande* e', made Dame Edna:
"*RG*? OI! RAH!! (- a fan)"<
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M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #12 on: June 06, 2017, 07:03:17 AM »

Paley'drome # (Paley Bros.):

>SWEET INSANITY ...

P^LEY/P^ley: "Ye LP = YELPy!

Tin-as-nite, e' W'*S*?"<
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« Reply #13 on: June 08, 2017, 06:44:53 AM »

Tanka-Paley'drome (Babewatch-edit):

             >SWEET INSANITY?:
"PALEY /*DON(!) WAS* NEVER - er....
                 even saw no
                'dye-LA-P.Y.T.'
         in a s-NITe'e !"  *W^s*<
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M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #14 on: June 12, 2017, 04:38:05 AM »

Paley'drome #:

           >SMS in air,
B: "Wall-of-Sound *n* U'-0's
    - folla W! (Brianisms)"<
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« Reply #15 on: June 24, 2017, 10:33:06 PM »

Haiku+paley'drome #**** (belated birthday greeting from our Doctor Love:)

>SO, WILSON/SCHMILSON !

Dr.: "0 limerix-ire, Milord ?

No slim H^'CS ??  NO Sliwo's Huh"<
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« Reply #16 on: June 27, 2017, 07:07:01 AM »

Haiku+paley'drome #**** (belated birthday greeting from our Doctor Love:)

>SO, WILSON/SCHMILSON !

Dr.: "0 limerix-ire, Milord ?

No slim H^'CS ??  NO Sliwo's Huh"<
W*A*R*N*I*N*G:
The following EXPANSION Shows what happens when a palindromer desperately wants to incorporate into one single limerick-palindrome IN WORDS his 3 main creative outlets, namely: limerick & haiku (palindromed) + Wilson & "FIRE" + "Dorian Gray" & Sliwovitz!
AND you have been warned ...

[the court-case against Dr. O'Limerix, dedicated to Oscar Wilde:]

>>E*/ RISE !  "DORIAN" POT-PAL 'ON FIRE'!

SO WILson/Schmalson: Dr. O'Limeriex/EIRE:

               "Milord, NO Slam H^'CS

                + N_O Sliwo's !

er.. IF, N_O LAP*TOP(!) 'n AIR, o DESIRE'... "<<


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« Reply #17 on: June 28, 2017, 12:12:17 AM »

-  from Dr.O'Limerix!!!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  See how simple it is (as an example) to make a palindrome poem, like how Mr. Was came to direct/produce IJWMFTT:

>Don Was ?
Saw nod !<

Or take a  Mama Cass, and see where a name like that can lead to:

>L.A.-gym, eh ?
Class-act Mama 'Mt.' Cass
Alchemy gal !<

ENJOY ...

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« Reply #18 on: July 12, 2017, 04:30:16 AM »

New original limerick (as one would expect it from a dr. O'Limerix) written in the good olde "naughty-but-nice" tradition. So if if you are being a wee bit PRICKly about the subject, just don't read on! Improvements are welcome ...
(The OSCAR WILDEst limerix  # I:)

O. Wilde once DID talk in gay Limerick

This whole town was quick to give him the schtick

They really were not hateful

and he wasn't ungrateful:

" Why, thanks all the same, but PLEASE GIMME Prick"...
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« Reply #19 on: July 16, 2017, 05:29:04 AM »

The OSCAR WILDEst limerix # II - by unknown:)

There once lived a man of superlative wit
There was never a pun that Wilde could not hit
He smacked down Churchill
left him in the lurch, ill
and completely destroyed him, the twit



[the OSCAR WILDEst limerix, the case against him. O'Limeriex for the defense (as a palindrome) :]
S h i f t y    f a d e s     t o    "G r a y":
 
>>E*[1] RISE !  "DORIAN" POT-PAL 'ON FIRE'!

So, WIL's ON!/schmals on?: Dr. O'Limeriex/EIRE:

               "Milord, NO slam H^'CS

                + N_O Sliwo*s !

er.. IF;  N_O LAP*TOP-'n-AIR-ode  ~  SIRE... "<<

M'Lud, the judge's verdict - as a limerick-palindrome designed by >droll Mr.K!/SkRm(L'-Lord)<:


>"Sex, e' ? Palindromes unite GODs EXes !

   An integral EVIL --- flexes;

                 Sex-elf - live LARGE*T^'nin ?

                 As EXes DO-GET-IN:

  USE M.O.Rd. !    NIL apexes !!"<
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« Reply #20 on: July 23, 2017, 05:53:39 AM »

 Historical limerick in 4 parts about the mock trial against Oscar Wilde (which - the case itself - was the real DISGRACE i.m.h.o.) BY ALEXANDER BARON ...
(OSCAR WILDEst limericks # IV:)

There once was a writer named Wilde,
whose sexual habits weren't mild,
        In fact they'd appear
     To be shockingly  queer,
For a nobelman's son he defiled.

The Marquis, he sent Wilde a note:
'To the sodomite Oscar', he wrote,
    Oscar Wilde sued for libel,
      but soon got an eyeful,
And backed down against the old goat.

Shortly afterward came his arrest,
And poor Oscar was surely distressed
       when sentenced to do
        Hard labour for two,
Long years as Her Majesty's guest.

On release from his punishment place,
He departed in shame and all haste,
       Thus, hard up and exiled
         Did poor Oscar Wilde
Spend the rest of his life in disgrace.

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« Reply #21 on: July 28, 2017, 05:56:41 AM »

Who really was instrumental in  the "De-composing" of SMiLE? Just take the underscored(!) word from the opening line and read it from behind ...                                                                                                                                                                                               
  (the >SMiLE-LIM*s<, #2 [the first one is to be found here down under]Smiley


  Wils_o_n_a_t_a_s: DE-composing SMiLE Tones

"Schmilsson smart-ass" RE-osmosing style zones !

                          Choosing "Be Around" tapes

                          Oozing BRiAN soundscapes

NIL-non GRATAs: MILESTONESMILESTONESMiLEsTONES....
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« Reply #22 on: August 10, 2017, 06:29:52 AM »

Memorial tanka-palindrome dedicated to Glen Travis Campbell ("El GIGANTE/GRANDE", 1936-2017) -  R.I.P. [G.I.D. ? = "Guess I'm Dumb"]:

     >GLEN: a B*Boy (live) ~  B Y'...

Dig "G.I.D."! - (yo brats) "W*CREW"er!!

           C. + W.  *S*T*A*R* -

         (boy diggidy!)  ~  Be wily,

           o B.B.;  an  "El G......"<
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« Reply #23 on: August 17, 2017, 01:05:04 AM »

Smart alec: VAN DYKE PARKS Serves Up a haiku+palindrome of his own:


>"Two-step to lamp-lite,

cellar tune"?   "Nut" R Allec, e'!

... 'til' p.m.  -  A LOT !!            [Pet So*-w't]<
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