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« Reply #25 on: September 18, 2017, 01:16:19 AM »

This haiku-palindrome is for my former partner-in-crime, Mister K. When that "Tapatalk" took over the other Beach Boys-forum, alas the  huge collection of Mr.K-dromes was wiped out. [This Topic-talkie however, is ALWAYS open ...:=}]


>T^PAlinDROMATIKS:

EEK!  ^la TAPATALKee;

% skit, amor'd = NIL apt !<
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>>>Sex if 'dna-Vosse' nixes
on NO ton-o-SMiLE mono mixes
a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #26 on: September 21, 2017, 11:42:20 PM »

This haiku-palindrome is for my former partner-in-crime, Mister K. When that "Tapatalk" took over the other Beach Boys-forum, alas the  huge collection of Mr.K-dromes was wiped out. [This Topic-talkie however, is ALWAYS open ...:=}]


>T^PAlinDROMATIKS:

EEK!  ^la TAPATALKee;

% skit, amor'd - NIL apt !<
The latest - and now only Mr.K-'drome left over there (and perhaps the last one of his - for quite awhile?); and what a great one it is, deserving the full royal treatment. Which in this case would be the double decker red-bus limousine among all 'dromes: THE TWIN LIMERICK-PALINDROME!
Starring great poets galore: G. TRAKL, Phil CODY, E. BADU, H.C. Andersen, A.E. HOUSMAN & Garfunkel himself (who knew?). Also featuring violin-virtuoso YEHUDI Menuhin, Harvard professor PUTNAM + WEB-search machinese: BAIDU.
TWOfer LIMDROME poems from ART Garfunkel, (g)host-written by MISTER ^K! (as adapted by yours truly Doc:)

                     D*U*D

>>>Dud: "G. Trakl at a pat  (non-U);

has Cody any *H.C.A.*?   E. Badu !(?)"

                bus-red I p**

                ^s  a Yehudi

A bot-nod:  "Ol, Putnam's  U!"

                          ~

O heads-LSD: A.E. Housman, Tupelo'd

On to Baidu: HEY, a "spider-Subud"!

                  A BEACHy?   Nay Doc's ...

                  - a Hun on Tapatalk !

-ART G^_ _ _ _ _ _ _            (:dud)<<<
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #27 on: September 26, 2017, 02:55:43 AM »

        >GMO?  Sued !    So ...

LIMDROME*em  OR  do Milos'

         ^*^DEUS  -  OMG !<
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>>>Sex if 'dna-Vosse' nixes
on NO ton-o-SMiLE mono mixes
a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #28 on: October 04, 2017, 02:41:55 AM »

In a world SADLY gone mad, the same goes for limo-drome #6 [Doctor's order:]

                      >> MM (a raw tone:)

          "LIMO-DROME*em or do (Mi**) L**, DAM !"                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ME? "LIMO-DROME*em OR DO (MI**)  L**, MA^M !"
                                         Limo-drome'em
                                    OR do (Mi**) L**-em??
[MAD:]  "LIMO-DROME*em or DO MI, L*e  -- NOT WAR/AMM!!"<<
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>>>Sex if 'dna-Vosse' nixes
on NO ton-o-SMiLE mono mixes
a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #29 on: October 05, 2017, 01:52:59 AM »



                      >> MM (a raw tone:)

          "LIMO-DROME*em or do (Mi**L**,DAM !"                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             ME? "LIMO-DROME*em OR DO (MI**)  L**, MA^M !"
                                         Limo-drome'em
                                    OR do (Mi**) L**-em??
[MAD:]  "LIMO-DROME*em or DO MI, L*e  -- NOT WAR/AMM!!"<<
And this is how it can be done (made rediculously simple:)

a) First on: write a single palindrome (a message/paragraph of 6 to 8 syllables) which read the same from both directions
b) Repete your palindrome 4 times: First as line 1, second time as line 2, third time as lines 3 & 4 (split into 2 halves) and fourth time as line 5
c) Add a rhyming word onto the end of line 1, that meaningfully can be mirrored as the first word in the last line (spelled backward)
d) Add 2 more end-word rhymes onto lines 2 & 5 respectively, thereby completing the triplet of the limerick
e) The rhyming end word  of the second line must be a palindrome in itself (as the middle word in the whole limerick-palindrome)
f) Your palindromic paragraph (split in two) forms the third & fouth lines. Complete the needed  limerick-couplet by adding a word onto the of line 4, which rhymes with the existing end-word from line 3 (a new word onto the 4th line that can be mirrored as a meaningful  opening  word in front of line 2 (backward spelled)
g) FINALLY: a new end word must be added on to the last line (rhyming with the first 2 lines). This last word needs to be mirrored as the meaningful new opening word (spelled backward) onto the opening line
h) Post your effort here (good or bad, halfbaked or whatever)...
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #30 on: October 11, 2017, 02:06:32 AM »

U don't need to be like a T.S. Eliot doing milestones, to make limo-drome! Even a silly word like "limo-dromisms" (& its U-turn) can get U started [in this example I only had to write the core palindrome twice due to the abbreviations with each letter counting as a syllable:]

>Use no T.S.E.-limodromisms - huh!
sms: "i.m.o.  R   *DO  MILESTONES*  U~o !"!
"Use no TSE-limo ...
/DROMISMS"  - HUH??
SMS:  IMO  R  DO-MILESTONES   U!<


And this is how it can be done (made rediculously simple:)

a) First on: write a single palindrome (a message/paragraph of 6 to 8 syllables) which read the same from both directions
b) Repete your palindrome 4 times: First as line 1, second time as line 2, third time as lines 3 & 4 (split into 2 halves) and fourth time as line 5
c) Add a rhyming word onto the end of line 1, that meaningfully can be mirrored as the first word in the last line (spelled backward)
d) Add 2 more end-word rhymes onto lines 2 & 5 respectively, thereby completing the triplet of the limerick
e) The rhyming end word  of the second line must be a palindrome in itself (as the middle word in the whole limerick-palindrome)
f) Your palindromic paragraph (split in two) forms the third & fouth lines. Complete the needed  limerick-couplet by adding a word onto the of line 4, which rhymes with the existing end-word from line 3 (a new word onto the 4th line that can be mirrored as a meaningful  opening  word in front of line 2 (backward spelled)
g) FINALLY: a new end word must be added on to the last line (rhyming with the first 2 lines). This last word needs to be mirrored as the meaningful new opening word (spelled backward) onto the opening line
h) Post your effort here (good or bad, halfbaked or whatever)...
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #31 on: October 11, 2017, 11:39:14 PM »

Earlier on - as (my) luck would have it - I had to face the fact, that Oscar Wilde did neither a limerick NOR a palindrome EVER! With T.S. Eliot, luckily,  it's different. He's been there, done that - at least one palindrome poem under his belt:

>"To I, Lester"

A cotton eve,
O, trap ! Eden !
O, television sad as night.
I  wonder if senile sirs tell war days,

  Words selfless drowsy ...
A drawl lets rise lines fired
              [No !]

With gin:
Sad as "no" is,
I've let one depart.
O, eve--
Not to care ....

--T.S. Eliot<


And a limeRISQUE Eliot-poem from 1916:

King Bolo's big black bassturd kween
Her taste was kalm & klassic
An as for anything obscene
She said it made her ass sick

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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #32 on: October 13, 2017, 02:40:27 AM »

Without sounding too limodromatic about it, I'd say that T.S. Eliot has created an absolute masterpiece, incorporating (like he does) both a title AND his own signature into the palindrome poem!
The following limerick-version comes with only one original TSE-rhyme (O/No!) and two half-rhymes (war days/drows^y + depart/ELIot), including its own GIN-infused PUNCHlines added. CHEERS! Limo+-drome poem from T.S. Eliot (as limeRICKTIFIED by Dr.O'Smiley

            >>"To I, Lester"

    A cotton eve, O trap ! Eden ! O,
television sad as night. I wonder if {yo*}
           senile sirs tell war days
           words selfless, drowsy
A drawl lets rise lines {OY!} fired  [No!]
                           ~
With gin:  sad as "no" is, I've let one depart.
O, eve--  Not to care ...          --T.S. Eliot<<
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #33 on: October 15, 2017, 01:42:49 AM »

A Thomas Eliot-limodrome-poem originally written by Alastair Reid:

      >>T. Eliot, top YAP-bard

notes PUTRID! aka tang emanating, IS sad.

        I'd assign it a name: "GNAT"

           a.k.a. "dirt upset

         on  drab pay-pot-toilet!"<<



 
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M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #34 on: October 17, 2017, 02:44:45 AM »

In case anyone wonders about the CAPTION gone missing:

>"WAS it ELIOTs toilet I saw?"<

Yes, it was. But U  DIDn't see the next palindrome!:

>"T. Eliot NIXES sex in toilet!"<

Guilty as charged: American/Brit Author T.S. Eliot makes me all PALINDROMISTy-eyed!
The following limerick, however - written by W.H. Auden plays with popular confusion that "The Mill On The Floss" was written by T.S. Eliot, when in fact  it was by his english (female!) namesake: GEORGE Eliot. Small wonder that Thomas is "at a loss":

 T.S. Eliot is quite at a loss
when clubwomen bustle across
        at literary teas
        crying - "WHAT, if you please
did you mean by The Mill On The Floss?"
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #35 on: October 19, 2017, 01:22:30 AM »

God Only Knows where limo-drome # 10 will be coming from? (he asked NOT-knowingly)...
With the following HAIKU-drome, I'd like to nominate TS "Lester" Eliot for his palindromic*ly irresistible name AND for his own palindrome!:

          >SET on a LIMo---

*dromist, huh?  T.S.: "I*m ... O!!

         R  do-mi-la  notes?"<
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #36 on: October 20, 2017, 02:28:14 AM »

Everyone loves that album! Even TS Eliot does in his poets paradise:

     >O, I'd ...  U! - T.S.E.!!!

"WILD HONEY?   Bri-R.^B., YE^!

       No HD;  LIVE/studio!"<
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>>>Sex if 'dna-Vosse' nixes
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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