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« on: April 07, 2016, 12:10:11 AM »

'SOLAR SYSTEM' ("words of wisdom"?):

                      -I-
    >"No sleep, AL!  Let's draw ~

      PLANETS ... Aha!  'Stella By

          Starlite'  -  'TIL' ratsy

     ballets a-hasten, AL! (p-ward').

    'Stella' *-******' peels on ..."<

                     -II-
    >"Mods, I wonder ..(?)  RATS!

Sun-eve?  NUT!  Penn/rut/ass/ram"

    [Deified] Brianisms in AIR, 'B'?

    "Deified Mars, Saturn, Neptune,

  Venus starred  *** NO wisdom"<
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« Reply #1 on: April 12, 2016, 12:23:29 AM »

[Alternate Version with Brian stargazing in the mountains on top of  the 'American Alps' together with with AL as his mountain ward'n! The descent though will be like a "ratsy ballet"...:]

  'SOLAR SYSTEM' ("words of wisdom"?):

                       -I-
      >"No sleep, AL! Let's draw ~

        PLANETS ... Aha! 'Stella By

           Starlite'  -  'til' RATSY

       ballets a-hasten, ALP-ward'!

     'Stella' *-******' peels on ..."<

                           -II-
     >"Mods, I wonder ..(?)  RATS!

Sun-eve?  NUT!!  PEN(n)-RUT! AS(s)RAM?"

      [Deified] Brianisms in AIR, 'B'?
 
     "Deified Mars, Saturn, Neptune!

    Venus starred  *** NO wisdom"<

[7 years later (in 1984), AL had done his SAGA and a newer trilogy; Anna Lee was still 'a healer' and Brian's youngest daughter was having some health issues of her own. Dennis & Brian had done their last 'hamburger session' e.g.: "Oh Lord"! (by RengaWagneR):]


          >An 'AL' WAS Anna

      Lee's exam pupil - 's SAGA!

        (Anna Lee = Eel-Anna)

      A 'gas slip-up' maxes 'Eel'!

          Anna SAW 'Lana'<

                    -II-
       Do good --- ANNA will ...

A splay'd New Age moon and stars!

         Anna's 'RATS!'-DNA:

"NO Omega, Wendy --- ALPS!"

  'All I Wanna Do' ... 'O God'<

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« Reply #2 on: April 12, 2016, 03:02:37 AM »

The title of this topic is a feast in itself! To say nothing of the contents. I take my hat off to you, sir.

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« Reply #3 on: May 31, 2016, 12:57:18 AM »

Haiku-palindrome excerpted from John K's brand new LOVE YOU 'drome-cycle introduced in his "John K's Palindrome Topic". KUDOS, jk! [starring Al, supernatural force: Manitou & Flemish painter: Q(uentin) METSYS ('Rolling About Laughing'):]

  >AL: "'Let's Put' it up: STELLA!"<

       ->Dart sued a Manitou,
      Q METSYS' RAL: "O 'Solar
System' quotin' Amadeus {Trad.}"<-

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« Reply #4 on: May 31, 2016, 01:16:32 AM »

Haiku-palindrome excerpted from John K's brand new LOVE YOU 'drome-cycle introduced in his "John K's Palindrome Topic". KUDOS, jk! [starring Al, supernatural force: Manitou & Flemish painter: Q(uentin) METSYS ('Rolling About Laughing'):]

  >AL: "'Let's Put' it up: STELLA!"<

       ->Dart sued a Manitou,
      Q METSYS' RAL: "O 'Solar
System' quotin' Amadeus {Trad.}"<-

Thanks, Rasmus! I forgot to mention that Dart is Thurston Dart the musicologist (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thurston_Dart). Another loose end tied up. Cool Guy
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« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2016, 02:16:19 AM »

More Brianisms: this time dedicated to the late RICCI Martin , NOT to be confused with RICKY Martin! (What a drag it must have been for Ricci with a namesake like that; in the SAME business as himself and with that much success to HIS name! - I guess)...
Featuring Ricci and his mentor: 'AGA CARL'/AL (as per usual)/Michael Vosse/Stephen Desper (~sd) and the endless number: Pi(-in-the sky as it were). {Tanka-palindrome by john k & rasmus s:}

>Y, Carl = Aga! ---  Brian:
"A sure Vosse made ends look Pi !
RICCI, R.I.P.
Kool ~sd !   'Need a mess' OVER
us - an airbag, Al ! RACY"<
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« Reply #6 on: October 19, 2016, 03:17:04 AM »

[Alternate Version with Brian stargazing in the mountains on top of  the 'American Alps' together with with AL as his mountain ward'n! The descent though will be like a "ratsy ballet"...:]

  'SOLAR SYSTEM' ("words of wisdom"?):

                       -I-
      >"No sleep, AL! Let's draw ~

        PLANETS ... Aha! 'Stella By

           Starlite'  -  'til' RATSY

       ballets a-hasten, ALP-ward'!

     'Stella' *-******' peels on ..."<

                           -II-
     >"Mods, I wonder ..(?)  RATS!

Sun-eve?  NUT!!  PEN(n)-RUT! AS(s)RAM?"

      [Deified] Brianisms in AIR, 'B'?
 
     "Deified Mars, Saturn, Neptune!

    Venus starred  *** NO wisdom"<

[7 years later (in 1984), AL had done his SAGA and a newer trilogy; Anna Lee was still 'a healer' and Brian's youngest daughter was having some health issues of her own. Dennis & Brian had done their last 'hamburger session' e.g.: "Oh Lord"! (by RengaWagneR):]


          >An 'AL' WAS Anna

      Lee's exam pupil - 's SAGA!

        (Anna Lee = Eel-Anna)

      A 'gas slip-up' maxes 'Eel'!

          Anna SAW 'Lana'<

                    -II-
       Do good --- ANNA will ...

A splay'd New Age moon and stars!

         Anna's 'RATS!'-DNA:

"NO Omega, Wendy --- ALPS!"

  'All I Wanna Do' ... 'O God'<


Here's (very interesting) an actual transcript from Al's analysis, as performed by psycho-analyst: Lana! [Waka-palindrome by Carl Lexicon:]

>"Analyst, I dream ...

Goddesses, bona fide tales

of U.F.O.s!

Elated, I fan-obsessed -

dogma ! Er ... ditsy, Lana?"<

Brian at his health foods store after midnight in early 1970, wearing his bathrobe while entertaining some late callers: Pet Sounds-lyricist Tony Asher & Pet Sounds strings conductor Sid Sharp, who ask if they could do another album like that(?):

>At one°; Radiant
Radish: "Uh-huh! 'Sid-art'? Na,
I dare ... No, T.A.<
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