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>L*O*V*E/P*A*R*K*S*s: Y*O! B*B*O*Y*S S*K*R*A*P*E-V*O*L.<
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on:
February 08, 2016, 02:00:09 AM »
>NO TO 'NO'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
LOVE-VOL.
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
TUT-TUT
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
PARKS#SKRAP
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
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Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
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February 08, 2016, 04:27:56 AM »
^^^That one was my 250'th post, and I'm quite happy with it...^^^
This could also be my very last one - NO, I won't promise anything! I mean why bother, giving it your best effort.
There is - and h a s been this thing: This guy (mice-elf) MUST be ignored for whatever reason (John excepted and very much appreciated)...
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Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
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Reply #2 on:
February 08, 2016, 04:59:31 AM »
Quote from: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 04:27:56 AM
^^^That one was my 250'th post, and I'm quite happy with it...^^^
This could also be my very last one - NO, I won't promise anything! I mean why bother, giving it your best effort.
There is - and h a s been this thing: This guy (mice-elf) MUST be ignored for whatever reason (John excepted and very much appreciated)...
Believe me, Rasmus, your haikudromes are a highpoint (or should that be
hai
-point?) for me when visiting this place. I think it's very likely that others are equally awestruck and appreciative but don't really know how to respond. I "mice-elf" would be most unhappy if you were to decamp.
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Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
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Reply #3 on:
February 09, 2016, 11:23:51 AM »
Quote from: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 02:00:09 AM
>NO TO 'NO'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
LOVE-VOL.
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
TUT-TUT
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
PARKS#SKRAP
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
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Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
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April 10, 2016, 11:58:27 PM »
Quote from: Smilin Ed H on February 09, 2016, 11:23:51 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 02:00:09 AM
>NO TO 'NO'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
LOVE-VOL.
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
TUT-TUT
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
PARKS#SKRAP
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
[And the haiku-palindromic comic continues (new verses by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy):]
KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok):
-V-
->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.). ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
'He'?: * Male Ego!"
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^
-VI-
"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-
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Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
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Reply #5 on:
April 19, 2016, 04:48:16 AM »
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 10, 2016, 11:58:27 PM
Quote from: Smilin Ed H on February 09, 2016, 11:23:51 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 02:00:09 AM
>NO TO 'NO'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
LOVE-VOL.
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
TUT-TUT
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
PARKS#SKRAP
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
[And the haiku-palindromic comic continues (new verses by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy):]
KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok):
-V-
->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.). ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
'He'?: * Male Ego!"
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^
-VI-
"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-
[Even mo' friendly poetry slammin' between Mike & Van Dyke. 'Tis Michael EDward Love's turn to draw:]
-VII-
>'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<
->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?; B*i ?; V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"<-
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Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
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Reply #6 on:
April 20, 2016, 05:16:33 AM »
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 19, 2016, 04:48:16 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 10, 2016, 11:58:27 PM
Quote from: Smilin Ed H on February 09, 2016, 11:23:51 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 02:00:09 AM
>NO TO 'NO'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
LOVE-VOL.
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
TUT-TUT
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
PARKS#SKRAP
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
[And the haiku-palindromic comic continues (new verses by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy):]
KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok):
-V-
->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.). ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
'He'?: * Male Ego!"
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^
-VI-
"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-
[Even mo' friendly poetry slammin' between Mike & Van Dyke. 'Tis Michael EDward Love's turn to draw:]
-VII-
>'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<
->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?; B*i ?; V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"<-
-VIII- {from RengaWagneR}
'Navy~VAN':
->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH! (Eros-god)<-
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Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
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Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 20, 2016, 05:16:33 AM
-VIII- {from RengaWagneR}
'Navy~VAN':
->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH! (Eros-god)<-
Mike's quite the haikudrome star these days. (I hope Dr. Ah can help him.)
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Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
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April 26, 2016, 12:47:44 AM »
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 20, 2016, 05:16:33 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 19, 2016, 04:48:16 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 10, 2016, 11:58:27 PM
Quote from: Smilin Ed H on February 09, 2016, 11:23:51 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 02:00:09 AM
>NO TO 'NO'
'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
²
LOVE-VOL.
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
³
TUT-TUT
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
IV
PARKS#SKRAP
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<: {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-V-
->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.). ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
'He'?: * Male Ego!"
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^ {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-VI-
"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-
7
>'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!< {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?; B*i ?; V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"<-
8 {by RengaWagneR}
'Navy~VAN':
->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH! (Eros-god)<-
9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'? Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"< {by CenturyDeprived}
->"Top 'n' reer: ACETATES?
D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s (Skrap'd set!)?
Ate career - 'n' POT!..."<-
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Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
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Reply #9 on:
May 06, 2016, 06:05:04 AM »
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 26, 2016, 12:47:44 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 20, 2016, 05:16:33 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 19, 2016, 04:48:16 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 10, 2016, 11:58:27 PM
Quote from: Smilin Ed H on February 09, 2016, 11:23:51 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 02:00:09 AM
>NO TO 'NO'
'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
²
LOVE-VOL.
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
³
TUT-TUT
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
IV
PARKS#SKRAP
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<: {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-V-
->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.). ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
'He'?: * Male Ego!"
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^ {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-VI-
"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-
7
>'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!< {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?; B*i ?; V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"<-
8 {by RengaWagneR}
'Navy~VAN':
->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH! (Eros-god)<-
9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'? Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"< {by CenturyDeprived}
->"Top 'n' reer: ACETATES?
D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s (Skrap'd set!)?
Ate career - 'n' POT!..."<-
[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)... BY RengaWagneR:]
'°
[Navy~VAN:]
->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE? MATT>
and ADAM J. - ay!"
''
[LOVE-vol.:]
"Eli? A DJ! :
ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
'²
Domenic! 'REG or >
J. Dailey? A.J./Ma/Dad/
'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"
XIII
[Navy-VAN:]
"TODAY! (?) NOT! No risk!
Rap'd V.D.: "I'd **** **** ****
** *** *** (** *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
Moo b*s IS hard!"<
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Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
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Reply #10 on:
May 06, 2016, 12:26:26 PM »
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 06, 2016, 06:05:04 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 26, 2016, 12:47:44 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 20, 2016, 05:16:33 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 19, 2016, 04:48:16 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 10, 2016, 11:58:27 PM
Quote from: Smilin Ed H on February 09, 2016, 11:23:51 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 02:00:09 AM
>NO TO 'NO'
'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
²
LOVE-VOL.
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
³
TUT-TUT
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
IV
PARKS#SKRAP
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<: {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-V-
->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.). ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
'He'?: * Male Ego!"
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^ {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-VI-
"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-
7
>'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!< {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?; B*i ?; V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"<-
8 {by RengaWagneR}
'Navy~VAN':
->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH! (Eros-god)<-
9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'? Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"< {by CenturyDeprived}
->"Top 'n' reer: ACETATES?
D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s (Skrap'd set!)?
Ate career - 'n' POT!..."<-
[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)... BY RengaWagneR:]
'°
[Navy~VAN:]
->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE? MATT>
and ADAM J. - ay!"
''
[LOVE-vol.:]
"Eli? A DJ! :
ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
'²
Domenic! 'REG or >
J. Dailey? A.J./Ma/Dad/
'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"
XIII
[Navy-VAN:]
"TODAY! (?) NOT! No risk!
Rap'd V.D.: "I'd **** **** ****
** *** *** (** *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
Moo b*s IS hard!"<
You've been busy, R. Your name should be affixed to this----this is all your hard work, not mine. I'm just your messenger.
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Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
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For me, it's the other way around^^^! But as Long we're on the SAME page, I'm one happy camper ...
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This was prompted by the heart-breaking film about Amy, which I watched last week:
> R.I.P. at SS (Anon.). Even Amy Winehouse, Jim, Rod... "La Péri" on
noir
EP, Al. Dormi, Jesu. O hen! I, Wyman, even on ass, tapir... <
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Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
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Reply #13 on:
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Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 06, 2016, 06:05:04 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 26, 2016, 12:47:44 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 20, 2016, 05:16:33 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 19, 2016, 04:48:16 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 10, 2016, 11:58:27 PM
Quote from: Smilin Ed H on February 09, 2016, 11:23:51 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 02:00:09 AM
>NO TO 'NO'
'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
²
LOVE-VOL.
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
³
TUT-TUT
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
IV
PARKS#SKRAP
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<: {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-V-
->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.). ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
'He'?: * Male Ego!"
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^ {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-VI-
"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-
7
>'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!< {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?; B*i ?; V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"<-
8 {by RengaWagneR}
'Navy~VAN':
->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH! (Eros-god)<-
9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'? Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"< {by CenturyDeprived}
->"Top 'n' reer: ACETATES?
D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s (Skrap'd set!)?
Ate career - 'n' POT!..."<-
[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)... BY RengaWagneR:]
'°
[Navy~VAN:]
->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE? MATT>
and ADAM J. - ay!"
''
[LOVE-vol.:]
"Eli? A DJ! :
ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
'²
Domenic! 'REG or >
J. Dailey? A.J./Ma/Dad/
'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"
XIII
[Navy-VAN:]
"TODAY! (?) NOT! No risk!
Rap'd V.D.: "I'd **** **** ****
** *** *** (** *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
Moo b*s IS hard!"<
In the following session, our guys seem to be on friendlier terms? They even exchange their 'speech impairments' !? And naming dog breeds. Starting with the (in)famous in-house sandbox and Brian's Weimaraner-dog: Louie, "doing its Business" in there, together with a Renar(d)-Foxhound/sheepdog (pet-named "Ewes"). Did they really fly in sand from Brazilian Ipanema Beach? Finally, Mike & Kim: Receiving a piano from Van Dyke(!) which he'd gotten from his friend, former W.B.-Boss MO (Ostin) - the sandbox GRAND? [By RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
{Navy-VAN:}
15
->->"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
idyll: a Sand* IN!!"
{MIKE/Kim:}
16
"A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" (ed.). "Dog-nip?
Si Louie, ami-dog!"
17
->'Tis swonky L^^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
- God ONLY Knows ...) SIT!<-
{Navy-VAN:}
18
"God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")... Net-Fox?"
{MIKE/Kim:}
19
- "O' BAN!! I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! 'Mo'?"<-<-
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[Now, all the dogs are in there together, including Brian's beagle: 'Banana'. Van Dyke Parks is offered a recording contract (by ^MO Ostin^?) - and walks away! (Haiku-palindrome by RengaWagneR):]
²°
{Navy~VAN:}
->Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
'Banana'! "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed<-
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[2 more palindromic haiku-verses starring world famous storyteller: H.C. Andersen & BRI/an (NOT to be confused with B.R.I.: Brother Records Inc. here referred to as B.R. ENterprise). By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
²'
Navy~VAN:
(>and BB' dna)<
->"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
E^Band = er ... USA!"<-
²²
MIKE/Kim:
->"O.k.: Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO! B.R.En*:
Raw lot, I pack - O'!"<-
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Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 13, 2016, 01:17:57 AM
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Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 26, 2016, 12:47:44 AM
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Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 10, 2016, 11:58:27 PM
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>NO TO 'NO'
'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
²
LOVE-VOL.
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
³
TUT-TUT
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
IV
PARKS#SKRAP
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<: {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-V-
->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.). ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
'He'?: * Male Ego!"
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^ {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-VI-
"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-
7
>'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!< {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?; B*i ?; V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"<-
8 {by RengaWagneR}
'Navy~VAN':
->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH! (Eros-god)<-
9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'? Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"< {by CenturyDeprived}
->"Top 'n' reer: ACETATES?
D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s (Skrap'd set!)?
Ate career - 'n' POT!..."<-
[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)... BY RengaWagneR:]
'°
[Navy~VAN:]
->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE? MATT>
and ADAM J. - ay!"
''
[LOVE-vol.:]
"Eli? A DJ! :
ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
'²
Domenic! 'REG or >
J. Dailey? A.J./Ma/Dad/
'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"
XIII
[Navy-VAN:]
"TODAY! (?) NOT! No risk!
Rap'd V.D.: "I'd **** **** ****
** *** *** (** *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
Moo b*s IS hard!"<
In the following session, our guys seem to be on friendlier terms? They even exchange their 'speech impairments' !? And naming dog breeds. Starting with the (in)famous in-house sandbox and Brian's Weimaraner-dog: Louie, "doing its Business" in there, together with a Renar(d)-Foxhound/sheepdog (pet-named "Ewes"). Did they really fly in sand from Brazilian Ipanema Beach? Finally, Mike & Kim: Receiving a piano from Van Dyke(!) which he'd gotten from his friend, former W.B.-Boss MO (Ostin) - the sandbox GRAND? [By RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
{Navy-VAN:}
15
->->"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
idyll: a Sand* IN!!"
{MIKE/Kim:}
16
"A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" (ed.). "Dog-nip?
Si Louie, ami-dog!"
17
->'Tis swonky L^^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
- God ONLY Knows ...) SIT!<-
{Navy-VAN:}
18
"God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")... Net-Fox?"
{MIKE/Kim:}
19
- "O' BAN!! I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! 'Mo'?"<-<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 14, 2016, 01:40:00 AM
[Now, all the dogs are in there together, including Brian's beagle: 'Banana'. Van Dyke Parks is offered a recording contract (by ^MO Ostin^?) - and walks away! (Haiku-palindrome by RengaWagneR):]
²°
{Navy~VAN:}
->Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
'Banana'! "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 23, 2016, 12:24:10 AM
[2 more palindromic haiku-verses starring world famous storyteller: H.C. Andersen & BRI/an (NOT to be confused with B.R.I.: Brother Records Inc. here referred to as B.R. ENterprise). By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
²'
Navy~VAN:
(>and BB' dna)<
->"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
E^Band = er ... USA!"<-
²²
MIKE/Kim:
->"O.k.: Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO! B.R.En*:
Raw lot, I pack - O'!"<-
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[Surf's up in the ORIGINAL VERSION was never completed/released! The same goes for another Brian/Parks-song (66/67): "Sunflower MAIDEN". Parks has long claimed to be the sole Brian-collaborator on Sail On, Sailor. No RAY K., no T.ALMER (or Rieley)? By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
²³
Navy~VAN:
->"Star*One {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra'd!
NO "Maiden"? O' rats!"<-
24
>Parks' S*O*S skrap:<
->"N°: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!
o' LIA*S! NO lia'son ..."<-
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May 30, 2016, 12:43:14 AM »
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 25, 2016, 12:00:13 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 13, 2016, 01:17:57 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 06, 2016, 06:05:04 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 26, 2016, 12:47:44 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 20, 2016, 05:16:33 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 19, 2016, 04:48:16 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on April 10, 2016, 11:58:27 PM
Quote from: Smilin Ed H on February 09, 2016, 11:23:51 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 02:00:09 AM
>NO TO 'NO'
'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
²
LOVE-VOL.
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
³
TUT-TUT
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
IV
PARKS#SKRAP
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<: {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-V-
->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.). ~ O M ~... ok! OK!!
'He'?: * Male Ego!"
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^ {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-VI-
"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-
7
>'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!< {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?; B*i ?; V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"<-
8 {by RengaWagneR}
'Navy~VAN':
->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH! (Eros-god)<-
9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'? Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"< {by CenturyDeprived}
->"Top 'n' reer: ACETATES?
D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s (Skrap'd set!)?
Ate career - 'n' POT!..."<-
[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)... BY RengaWagneR:]
'°
[Navy~VAN:]
->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE? MATT>
and ADAM J. - ay!"
''
[LOVE-vol.:]
"Eli? A DJ! :
ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
'²
Domenic! 'REG or >
J. Dailey? A.J./Ma/Dad/
'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"
XIII
[Navy-VAN:]
"TODAY! (?) NOT! No risk!
Rap'd V.D.: "I'd **** **** ****
** *** *** (** *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
Moo b*s IS hard!"<
In the following session, our guys seem to be on friendlier terms? They even exchange their 'speech impairments' !? And naming dog breeds. Starting with the (in)famous in-house sandbox and Brian's Weimaraner-dog: Louie, "doing its Business" in there, together with a Renar(d)-Foxhound/sheepdog (pet-named "Ewes"). Did they really fly in sand from Brazilian Ipanema Beach? Finally, Mike & Kim: Receiving a piano from Van Dyke(!) which he'd gotten from his friend, former W.B.-Boss MO (Ostin) - the sandbox GRAND? [By RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
{Navy-VAN:}
15
->->"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
idyll: a Sand* IN!!"
{MIKE/Kim:}
16
"A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" [ed.]! "Dog-nip?
Si Louie, ami-dog!"
17
->'Tis swonky L^^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
- God ONLY Knows ...) SIT!<-
{Navy-VAN:}
18
"God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")... Net-Fox?"
{MIKE/Kim:}
19
- "O' BAN!! I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! Mo'?"<-<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 14, 2016, 01:40:00 AM
[Now, all the dogs are in there together, including Brian's beagle: 'Banana'. Van Dyke Parks is offered a recording contract (by ^MO Ostin^?) - and walks away! (Haiku-palindrome by RengaWagneR):]
²°
{Navy~VAN:}
->Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
'Banana'! "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 23, 2016, 12:24:10 AM
[2 more palindromic haiku-verses starring world famous storyteller: H.C. Andersen & BRI/an (NOT to be confused with B.R.I.: Brother Records Inc. here referred to as B.R. ENterprise). By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
²'
Navy~VAN:
(>and BB' dna)<
->"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
E^Band = er ... USA!"<-
²²
MIKE/Kim:
->"OK! Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO! B.R.En*:
Raw lot, I pack - O'!"<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 27, 2016, 12:04:48 AM
[Surf's up in the ORIGINAL VERSION was never completed/released! The same goes for another Brian/Parks-song (66/67): "Sunflower MAIDEN". Parks has long claimed to be the sole Brian-collaborator on Sail On, Sailor. No RAY K., no T.ALMER (or Rieley)? By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
²³
Navy~VAN:
->"Star*One {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra'd!
NO "Maiden"? O' rats!"<-
24
>Parks' S*O*S skrap:<
->"N°: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!-
-o-LIA*S! NO lia'son ..."<-
It's not clear what Mike means, using the word 'BACON'. Does he mock VDP for being a Francis Bacon-wannabe "gothic trip"? And/or does he simply claim the need for "makin' bacon" (earning money)? [by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
*25*
MIKE/Kim:
->"OK 'cornfield' in
o' CabinE., 'geni'! (BACON ?!).
Idle I: F***'N ROCK - O!"<-
Let me use this special occasion to thank my fellow Smiley Smiler's: Theydon Bois (verse 2) & CenturyDeprived (1+9). But especially my SMiLEr-PAL & the main supplier: John k for making this possible! JK has written the rest of it all as main or sole palindromist (except verses 7,17 & 21 thru' 25)! This has grown into a winning formula: (VDP & Mike+haiku-verses+humour & multiplied by palindromix).
I.m.o., a superpalindrome is ONE continuous 'drome. By this definition, the SMiLE-WAKA-poem is still the longest one. But THIS Bull Session is by far the longest palindromic Beach Boys-(peri)ODE with its 25 verses, 75 lines & 425 syllables PERIOD! (one Haiku has 3 lines & 17 sylls).
When read backwards, the complete verses will appear in reversed order (a super-palindrome would deliver them in the same order as in forward-reading!). But even here one can enjoy a couple of super-dromes: Verses 5<->6, 10<->13 & 15<->19. John k is a true master ALSO in making those!!
I'd like to thank the MODs for letting us have our creative fun within the confinement of THE SANDBOX! And finally & foremost: THANX to Mike Love & Van Dyke Parks for their endless inspirations!
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Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
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Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 30, 2016, 12:43:14 AM
Let me use this special occasion to thank my fellow Smiley Smiler's: Theydon Bois (verse 2) & CenturyDeprived (1+9). But especially my SMiLEr-PAL & the main supplier: John k for making this possible! JK has written the rest of it all as main or sole palindromist (except verses 7,17 & 21 thru' 25)! This has grown into a winning formula: VDP & Mike+haiku-verses+humour+palindromes.
I.m.o., a superpalindrome is ONE continuous 'drome. By this definition, the SMiLE-WAKA-poem is still the longest one. But THIS Bull Session is by far the longest palindromic Beach Boys-(peri)ODE with ist 25 verses, 75 lines & 425 syllables PERIOD! (one Haiku has 3 lines & 17 sylls).
When read backwards, the verses will appear in reversed order (a super-palindrome would deliver them in the same order as in forward-reading!). But even here you'll see a couple of super-dromes: Verses 10<->13 & 15<->19. John k is a true master ALSO in making those!!
I'd like to thank the MODs for letting us have our creative fun within the confinement of THE SANDBOX! And finally & foremost: THANX to Mike Love & Van Dyke Parks for their endless inspirations!
Thank
you
, Rasmus, for turning basics into songs, to quote Gary Numan. And for your kind words (again).
I have a new BB palindrome brewing. It may take a while----I've bitten off quite a lot this time...
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Quote from: Smilin Ed H on February 09, 2016, 11:23:51 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 02:00:09 AM
>NO TO 'NO'
'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
²
LOVE-VOL.
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
³
TUT-TUT
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
IV
PARKS#SKRAP
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<: {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-V-
->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.). ~ O M ~... ok! OK!!
'He'?: * Male Ego!"
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^ {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-VI-
"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-
7
>'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!< {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?; B*i ?; V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"<-
8 {by RengaWagneR}
'Navy~VAN':
->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH! (Eros-god)<-
9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'? Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"< {by CenturyDeprived}
->"Top 'n' reer: ACETATES?
D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s (Skrap'd set!)?
Ate career - 'n' POT!..."<-
[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)... BY RengaWagneR:]
'°
[Navy~VAN:]
->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE? MATT>
and ADAM J. - ay!"
''
[LOVE-vol.:]
"Eli? A DJ! :
ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
'²
Domenic! 'REG or >
J. Dailey? A.J./Ma/Dad/
'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"
XIII
[Navy-VAN:]
"TODAY! (?) NOT! No risk!
Rap'd V.D.: "I'd **** **** ****
** *** *** (** *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
Moo b*s IS hard!"<
In the following session, our guys seem to be on friendlier terms? They even exchange their 'speech impairments' !? And naming dog breeds. Starting with the (in)famous in-house sandbox and Brian's Weimaraner-dog: Louie, "doing its Business" in there, together with a Renar(d)-Foxhound/sheepdog (pet-named "Ewes"). Did they really fly in sand from Brazilian Ipanema Beach? Finally, Mike & Kim: Receiving a piano from Van Dyke(!) which he'd gotten from his friend, former W.B.-Boss MO (Ostin) - the sandbox GRAND? [By RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
{Navy-VAN:}
15
->->"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
idyll: a Sand* IN!!"
{MIKE/Kim:}
16
"A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" [ed.]! "Dog-nip?
Si Louie, ami-dog!"
17
->'Tis swonky L^^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
- God ONLY Knows ...) SIT!<-
{Navy-VAN:}
18
"God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")... Net-Fox?"
{MIKE/Kim:}
19
- "O' BAN!! I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! Mo'?"<-<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 14, 2016, 01:40:00 AM
[Now, all the dogs are in there together, including Brian's beagle: 'Banana'. Van Dyke Parks is offered a recording contract (by ^MO Ostin^?) - and walks away! (Haiku-palindrome by RengaWagneR):]
²°
{Navy~VAN:}
->Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
'Banana'! "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 23, 2016, 12:24:10 AM
[2 more palindromic haiku-verses starring world famous storyteller: H.C. Andersen & BRI/an (NOT to be confused with B.R.I.: Brother Records Inc. here referred to as B.R. ENterprise). By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
²'
Navy~VAN:
(>and BB' dna)<
->"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
E^Band = er ... USA!"<-
²²
MIKE/Kim:
->"OK! Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO! B.R.En*:
Raw lot, I pack - O'!"<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 27, 2016, 12:04:48 AM
[Surf's up in the ORIGINAL VERSION was never completed/released! The same goes for another Brian/Parks-song (66/67): "Sunflower MAIDEN". Parks has long claimed to be the sole Brian-collaborator on Sail On, Sailor. No RAY K., no T.ALMER (or Rieley)? By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
²³
Navy~VAN:
->"Star*One {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra'd!
NO "Maiden"? O' rats!"<-
24
>Parks' S*O*S skrap:<
->"N°: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!-
-o-LIA*S! NO lia'son ..."<-
It's not clear what Mike means, using the word 'BACON'. Does he mock VDP for being a Francis Bacon-wannabe "gothic trip"? And/or does he simply claim the need for "makin' bacon" (earning money)? [by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
*25*
MIKE/Kim:
->"OK 'cornfield' in
o' CabinE., 'geni'! (BACON ?!).
Idle I: F***'N ROCK - O!"<-
M(ike) & D(yke) "God's exes"?! - finally 'united (in *drome) under God'... By RengaWagneR (ACTUALLY using the word 'palindromes' IN a palindrome - DRUMROLL, please):
XXVI
Mike & Dyke:
->->Pals! Eno/N*ro:
MONO! One last one: 'Palindromes>
unite God's exes!'
XXVII
Do get in! Use M'**
or D***, NIL ape!! Not sale, no?
O NO mor*, NONE! {*slap*}<-<-
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Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
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>NO TO 'NO' [by CenturyDeprived:]
'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
²
LOVE-VOL. [by Theydon Bois:]
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
³
TUT-TUT [by RengaWagneR:]
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
IV
PARKS#SKRAP [by RengaWagner & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<: {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-V-
->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.). ~ O M ~... ok! OK!!
'He'?: * Male Ego!"
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^ {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-VI-
"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-
7
>'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!< {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?; B*i ?; V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"<-
8 {by RengaWagneR}
'Navy~VAN':
->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH! (Eros-god)<-
9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'? Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"< {by CenturyDeprived}
->"Top 'n' reer: ACETATES?
D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s (Skrap'd set!)?
Ate career - 'n' POT!..."<-
[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)... BY RengaWagneR:]
'°
[Navy~VAN:]
->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE? MATT>
and ADAM J. - ay!"
''
[LOVE-vol.:]
"Eli? A DJ! :
ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
'²
Domenic! 'REG or >
J. Dailey? A.J./Ma/Dad/
'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"
XIII
[Navy-VAN:]
"TODAY! (?) NOT! No risk!
Rap'd V.D.: "I'd *°** **** °***
*° *** *°* ('* *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?! [by RengaWagneR:]
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
Moo b*s IS hard!"<
In the following session, our guys seem to be on friendlier terms? They even exchange their 'speech impairments' !? And naming dog breeds. Starting with the (in)famous in-house sandbox and Brian's Weimaraner-dog: Louie, "doing its Business" in there, together with a Renar(d)-Foxhound/sheepdog (pet-named "Ewes"). Did they really fly in sand from Brazilian Ipanema Beach? Finally, Mike & Kim: Receiving a piano from Van Dyke(!) which he'd gotten from his friend, former W.B.-Boss MO (Ostin) - the sandbox GRAND? [By RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
{Navy-VAN:}
15
->->"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
idyll: a Sand* IN!!"
{MIKE/Kim:}
16
"A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" [ed.]! "Dog-nip?
Si Louie, ami-dog!"
17
->'Tis swonky L^^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
- God ONLY Knows ...) SIT!<-
{Navy-VAN:}
18
"God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")... Net-Fox?"
{MIKE/Kim:}
19
- "O' BAN!! I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! Mo'?"<-<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 14, 2016, 01:40:00 AM
[Now, all the dogs are in there together, including Brian's beagle: 'Banana'. Van Dyke Parks is offered a recording contract (by ^MO Ostin^?) - and walks away! (Haiku-palindrome by RengaWagneR):]
²°
{Navy~VAN:}
->Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
'Banana'! "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 23, 2016, 12:24:10 AM
[2 more palindromic haiku-verses starring world famous storyteller: H.C. Andersen & BRI/an (NOT to be confused with B.R.I.: Brother Records Inc. here referred to as B.R. ENterprise). By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
²'
Navy~VAN:
(>and BB' dna)<
->"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
E^Band = er ... USA!"<-
²²
MIKE/Kim:
->"OK! Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO! B.R.En*:
Raw lot, I pack - O'!"<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 27, 2016, 12:04:48 AM
[Surf's up in the ORIGINAL VERSION was never completed/released! The same goes for another Brian/Parks-song (66/67): "Sunflower MAIDEN". Parks has long claimed to be the sole Brian-collaborator on Sail On, Sailor. No RAY K., no T.ALMER (or Rieley)? By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
²³
Navy~VAN:
->"Star*One {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra'd!
NO "Maiden"? O' rats!"<-
24
>Parks' S*O*S skrap:<
->"N°: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!-
-o-LIA*S! NO lia'son ..."<-
It's not clear what Mike means, using the word 'BACON'. Does he mock VDP for being a Francis Bacon-wannabe "gothic trip"? And/or does he simply claim the need for "makin' bacon" (earning money)? [by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
*25*
MIKE/Kim:
->"OK 'cornfield' in
o' CabinE., 'geni'! (BACON ?!).
Idle I: F***'N ROCK - O!"<-
M(ike) & D(yke) "God's exes"?! - finally 'united (in *drome) under God'... By RengaWagneR (ACTUALLY using the word 'palindromes' IN a palindrome - DRUMROLL, please):
XXVI
Mike & Dyke:
->->Pals! Eno/N*ro:
MONO! One last one: 'Palindromes>
unite God's exes!'
XXVII
Do get in! Use M'**
or D***, NIL ape!! Not sale, no?
O NO mor*, NONE! {*slap*}<-<-
HAL BLAINE, quoted as he boots the lyrical content of the 10 original Pet Sounds SONGS. Michael EDWARD Love couldn't agree more (Waiting For The Day excepted!) {By Eric Harshbarger:}
XXVIII
>L.A., EDWARDian aid? Raw deal!:<
-> ->"Hal? A renegade!
Revered, HAL BLAINE'd: 'Era's TEN
[nosy Hal boots TOO>
XXIX
blah-y!] SONNETS are
denial-blah'd er... EVER, Ed!'
A general AH!"<-<-
³°
>Tony A/Navy~Van (a Y-not)< [Haiku-D(enny)-Rome(o)by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy]
->Tony/D.Parks: "PET SOUNDS
as D*N*'*' U'~o' step!
Skrap'd *°°**'* Y-not?"<-
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Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
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Reply #22 on:
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Quote from: rasmus skotte on June 14, 2016, 07:54:02 AM
HAL BLAINE, quoted as he boots the lyrical content of the 10 original Pet Sounds SONGS. Michael EDWARD Love couldn't agree more (Waiting For The Day excepted!) {By Eric Harshbarger:}
I've located this Harshbarger person (
http://www.ericharshbarger.org/cgi-bin/palindrome_viewer.cgi?00614
). Most impressive!
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Re: BULL SESSION in THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE verseUS! VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
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Reply #23 on:
June 16, 2016, 12:09:26 AM »
Quote from: john k on June 15, 2016, 02:23:50 PM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on June 14, 2016, 07:54:02 AM
HAL BLAINE, quoted as he boots the lyrical content of the 10 original Pet Sounds SONGS. Michael EDWARD Love couldn't agree more (Waiting For The Day excepted!) {By Eric Harshbarger:}
I've located this Harshbarger person (
http://www.ericharshbarger.org/cgi-bin/palindrome_viewer.cgi?00614
). Most impressive!
How does someone who's a WILSONITE at heart, end up editing a multipart series dedicated to Mike Love & VDP?
Anywho, here goes Mike revisiting the BIG SUR Valley Park (God's echo chamber) with his wife: Kim. Thanx for the link, John! I've lifted one more from Mr. EH. (NOT a HALindrome but a VALLEYndrome!) [By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy/Eric Harshbarger:]
³'
MIKE/Kim
>dB, re: verb "REVERB'd"<
->Mik' E: "Lov* Parks --- GOD!
Yell: A 'VAN' IN A VALLEY ((ALLEY))(((alley)))
Dogs' krap - " ^WOL", e' Kim!"<-
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Re: BULL SESSION in THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE verseUS! VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
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Here we have develop'd this haiku-palindromic l o n g-Poem, which is unique and record breaking in but all aspects. John K's excellent work has formed the basis for verses 3,4,5/6,8,10/11/12/13,14,15/16/--/18/19,20 & 26/27! Without HIS input, Mike & VDP are left with precious little more to say (haiku-wise)!
Then it's just poetic justice that *RengaWagneR* should be *starring* in this final installment/episode {By RS/RWR:}
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>NO TO 'NO' [by CenturyDeprived:]
'
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<
²
LOVE-VOL. [by Theydon Bois:]
>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<
³
TUT-TUT [by RengaWagneR:]
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<
IV
PARKS#SKRAP [by RengaWagner & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#
Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...
> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<: {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-V-
->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.). ~ O M ~... ok! OK!!
'He'?: * Male Ego!"
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^ {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
-VI-
"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-
7
>'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!< {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?; B*i ?; V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"<-
8 {by RengaWagneR}
'Navy~VAN':
->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH! (Eros-god)<-
9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'? Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"< {by CenturyDeprived}
->"Top 'n' reer: ACETATES?
D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s (Skrap'd set!)?
Ate career - 'n' POT!..."<-
[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)... BY RengaWagneR:]
'°
[Navy~VAN:]
->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE? MATT>
and ADAM J. - ay!"
''
[LOVE-vol.:]
"Eli? A DJ! :
ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
'²
Domenic! 'REG or >
J. Dailey? A.J./Ma/Dad/
'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"
XIII
[Navy-VAN:]
"TODAY! (?) NOT! No risk!
Rap'd V.D.: "I'd *°** **** °***
*° *** *°* ('* *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?! [by RengaWagneR:]
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
Moo b*s IS hard!"<
In the following session, our guys seem to be on friendlier terms? They even exchange their 'speech impairments' !? And naming dog breeds. Starting with the (in)famous in-house sandbox and Brian's Weimaraner-dog: Louie, "doing its Business" in there, together with a Renar(d)-Foxhound/sheepdog (pet-named "Ewes"). Did they really fly in sand from Brazilian Ipanema Beach? Finally, Mike & Kim: Receiving a piano from Van Dyke(!) which he'd gotten from his friend, former W.B.-Boss MO (Ostin) - the sandbox GRAND? [By RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
{Navy-VAN:}
15
->->"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
idyll: a Sand* IN!!"
{MIKE/Kim:}
16
"A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" [ed.]! "Dog-nip?
Si Louie, ami-dog!"
17
->'Tis swonky L°^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
- God ONLY Knows ...) SIT!<-
{Navy-VAN:}
18
"God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")... Net-Fox?"
{MIKE/Kim:}
19
- "O' BAN!! I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! Mo'?"<-<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 14, 2016, 01:40:00 AM
[Now, all the dogs are in there together, including Brian's beagle: 'Banana'. Van Dyke Parks is offered a recording contract (by ^MO Ostin^?) - and walks away! (Haiku-palindrome by RengaWagneR):]
²°
{Navy~VAN:}
->Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
'Banana'! "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 23, 2016, 12:24:10 AM
[2 more palindromic haiku-verses starring world famous storyteller: H.C. Andersen & BRI/an (NOT to be confused with B.R.I.: Brother Records Inc. here referred to as B.R. ENterprise). By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
²'
Navy~VAN:
(>and BB' dna)<
->"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
E^Band = er ... USA!"<-
²²
MIKE/Kim:
->"OK! Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO! B.R.En*:
Raw lot, I pack - O'!"<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 27, 2016, 12:04:48 AM
[Surf's up in the ORIGINAL VERSION was never completed/released! The same goes for another Brian/Parks-song (66/67): "Sunflower MAIDEN". Parks has long claimed to be the sole Brian-collaborator on Sail On, Sailor. No RAY K., no T.ALMER (or Rieley)? By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
²³
Navy~VAN:
->"Star*One {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra'd!
NO "Maiden"? O' rats!"<-
24
>Parks' S*O*S skrap:<
->"N°: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!-
-o-LIA*S! NO lia'son ..."<-
Mike "It's OK" Love on his favorite aversion! [by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]
*25*
MIKE/Kim:
->"OK 'cornfield' in
OK CabinE., 'geni'?: BACK ON!
Idle I F'N ROCK-o!"<-
M(ike) & D(yke) "God's exes"?! - finally 'united (in *drome) under God'... By RengaWagneR (ACTUALLY using the word 'palindromes' IN a palindrome - DRUMROLL, please):
XXVI
Mike & Dyke:
->->Pals! Eno/N*ro:
MONO! One last one: 'Palindromes>
unite God's exes!'
XXVII
Do get in! Use M'**
or D***, NIL ape!! Not sale, no?
O NO mor*, NONE! {*slap*}<-<-
HAL BLAINE, quoted as he boots the lyrical content of the 10 original Pet Sounds SONGS. Michael EDWARD Love couldn't agree more (Waiting For The Day excepted!) {By Eric Harshbarger:}
XXVIII
>L.A., EDWARDian aid? Raw deal!:<
-> ->"Hal? A renegade!
Revered, HAL BLAINE'd: 'Era's TEN
[nosy Hal boots TOO>
XXIX
blah-y!] SONNETS are
denial-blah'd er... EVER, Ed!'
A general AH!"<-<-
³°
>Tony A/Navy~Van (a Y-not)< [Haiku-D(enny)-Rome(o)by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy]
->Tony/D.Parks: "PET SOUNDS
as D*N*'*' U'~o' step!
Skrap'd *°°**'* Y-not?"<-
Quote from: rasmus skotte on June 16, 2016, 12:09:26 AM
Quote from: john k on June 15, 2016, 02:23:50 PM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on June 14, 2016, 07:54:02 AM
HAL BLAINE, quoted as he boots the lyrical content of the 10 original Pet Sounds SONGS. Michael EDWARD Love couldn't agree more (Waiting For The Day excepted!) {By Eric Harshbarger:}
I've located this Harshbarger person (
http://www.ericharshbarger.org/cgi-bin/palindrome_viewer.cgi?00614
). Most impressive!
How does someone who's a WILSONITE at heart, end up editing a multipart series dedicated to Mike Love & VDP?
Anywho, here goes Mike revisiting the BIG SUR Valley Park (God's echo chamber) with his wife: Kim. Thanx for the link, John! I've lifted one more from Mr. EH. (NOT a HALindrome but a VALLEYndrome!) [By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy/Eric Harshbarger:]
³'
MIKE/Kim
>dB, re: verb "REVERB'd"<
->Mik' E: "Lov* Parks --- GOD!
Yell: A 'VAN' IN A VALLEY ((ALLEY))(((alley)))
Dogs' krap - " ^WOL", e' Kim!"<-
³²
MIKE & DYKE:
->->"Find on*s PAL IN D'
ROtterdaM? Ho-hum. Raw's IN:
'Ho', f'k'n 'ho', J°**!
³³
RengaWagneR = JOHN K ?
Föhn IS warm! Uh~oh ... 'MAD' rettor'd!
NIL ap*s ? Nod*'n IF !"<-<-
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