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« Reply #25 on: June 20, 2016, 01:16:59 AM »

Wow. I've been sent off (palindromically speaking) in fine style! If you've finished, perhaps you (or I) could line up all 33 verses in a single post, like I did with the best of my palindromes... 
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« Reply #26 on: June 20, 2016, 01:28:17 AM »

Sounds great, John! PLEASE do that and in YOUR normal formats: cursives/bold/fonts and all that jazz!
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« Reply #27 on: June 20, 2016, 02:10:23 AM »

All verses by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy aka Rasmus Skotte

With help from (in order of appearance) CenturyDeprived, Theydon Bois, RengaWagneR aka john k and Eric Harshbarger


I
NO TO 'NO'
                                       
                
'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"

II
LOVE-VOL
                                           

Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"

III
TUT-TUT  
                                             

Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."

IV
PARKS#SKRAP  
                                   

debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!
M.E.Love=vole'M'
EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)

V
KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)
               

Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... ok! OK!!
'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

VI
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^
                       

"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"

VII                            
'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!


"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"

VIII                                
'Navy~VAN


'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)
                                   9
IX
MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)
     

"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s  (Skrap'd set!)?
Ate career   -   'n'  POT!..."

X
Navy~VAN


"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE?  MATT>
and ADAM J. - ay!"

XI                       ''
LOVE-vol.


"Eli?         A DJ! :
ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
GARY U.?=Guy-rag!

XII

Domenic!   'REG or >
J. Dailey?   A.J./Ma/Dad/
'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"

XIII
Navy-VAN


"TODAY! (?)  NOT! No risk!
Rap'd V.D.:  "I'd *** **** ***
* *** ** ('* *** ****)"!!"

XIV

"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!              
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
Moo b*s IS hard!"

XV
Navy-VAN
                 

"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
idyll: a Sand* IN!!"

XVI
MIKE/Kim


"A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" [ed.]! "Dog-nip?
Si Louie, ami-dog!"

XVII

'Tis swonky L^^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
- God ONLY Knows ...)  SIT!

XVIII            
Navy-VAN


"God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")...   Net-Fox?"

XIX
MIKE/Kim


"O' BAN!!   I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! Mo'?"

XX          
Navy~VAN


Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
'Banana'!   "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed

XXI
Navy~VAN
(and BB' dna)


"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
E^Band = er ...  USA!"

XXII
MIKE/Kim


"OK! Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO!  B.R.En*:
Raw lot, I pack - O'!"

XXIII            
Navy~VAN


"Star*One {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra'd!
NO "Maiden"? O' rats!"

XXIV
Parks' S*O*S skrap


"N: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!-
-o-LIA*S!  NO lia'son ..."

XXV            
MIKE/Kim


"OK 'cornfield' in
o' CabinE., 'geni'! (BACON ?!).
Idle I: F***'N ROCK - O!"

XXVI
Mike & Dyke


Pals! Eno/N*ro:
MONO! One last one: 'Palindromes
unite God's exes!'

XXVII

Do get in! Use M'**
or D***, NIL ape!! Not sale, no?
O NO mor*, NONE! {*slap*}

XXVIII
L.A., EDWARDian aid? Raw deal!


"Hal? A renegade!
Revered, HAL BLAINE'd: 'Era's TEN
[nosy Hal boots TOO

XXIX

blah-y!] SONNETS are
denial-blah'd er... EVER, Ed!'
A general AH!"

XXX
Tony A/Navy~Van (a Y-not)
                         

Tony/D.Parks: "PET SOUNDS
as D*N*'*' U'~o' step!
Skrap'd ***'* Y-not?"

XXXI
MIKE/Kim
dB, re: verb "REVERB'd"


Mik' E: "Lov* Parks --- GOD!
Yell: A 'VAN' IN A VALLEY ((ALLEY))(((alley)))
Dogs' krap - " ^WOL", e' Kim!"

XXXII
MIKE & DYKE


"Find on*s PAL IN D'
ROtterdaM?  Ho-hum.  Raw's IN:
'Ho', f'k'n 'ho', J**!

XXXIII

RengaWagneR = JOHN K ?
Fhn IS warm!  Uh~oh ... 'MAD' rettor'd!
NIL ap*s ? Nod*'n  IF !"
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« Reply #28 on: June 20, 2016, 02:17:23 AM »

SMOOTH, John. I'd like to think of this as OUR Special (74th) birthday present to BRIAN DOUGLAS WILSON! Though not actually highlighted in the POEM, Brian is  still the invaluable MIDDLE MAN between the two AND their antics!
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« Reply #29 on: June 20, 2016, 11:40:37 PM »

All verses by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy aka Rasmus Skotte

With help from (in order of appearance) CenturyDeprived (1+9), Theydon Bois (2), RengaWagneR aka john k on the rest  (bar 'dedication', #o-0-o, 7,17,21-25 & 28-31) and Eric Harshbarger (28/29+31).

LOVE/PARKS: Skrape-Vol.                    {haiku-palindromic long-poem starring MIKE EDWARD LOVE & VAN DYKE PARKS and dedicated to the following fine folks

SEE COMPLETE UPDATED VERSION AT THE BOTTOM OF THIS PAGE !!
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« Reply #30 on: June 23, 2016, 06:52:39 AM »

Please use the ^^blue version^^ above, since that's the most complete one! HOW the video is done, is entirely up to your Imagination. As a live poetry slammin' /rap/a cartoon/comic book/stop-motion/stills/a haiku-song, sung or whatever!
The two LAST verses may be left out! Please SHOW a frame at some point in the video, mentioning the credits printed above. It's very important for me to give credit where it's due!
Finally, post a link to your masterpiece from HERE, please!!! (Interpretations if needed, can be found within the version shown furthest down on 'page one']

AND HAVE FUN WITH IT Smiley !!
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« Reply #31 on: July 19, 2016, 01:41:29 AM »

Can't wait to see a video like this a-happening! ...
And just perhaps it will (?) somehow, someday - sooner or later ...
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« Reply #32 on: July 19, 2016, 02:40:12 AM »

Can't wait to see a video like this a-happening! ...
And just perhaps it will (?) somehow, someday - sooner or later ...

Rasmus, I've seen a vid of yours somewhere on YouTube. Are you up for this? As for me, I can barely spell viddeo (vidio?) let alone make one, lol... 
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« Reply #33 on: July 19, 2016, 08:41:11 AM »

I imagined a little exchange between fans, respectively, of Beatles/BBs and of Rhythm & Blues:

"Revol., Brian?"
"Na, I RB lover."
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« Reply #34 on: July 20, 2016, 07:14:25 AM »

Can't wait to see a video like this a-happening! ...
And just perhaps it will (?) somehow, someday - sooner or later ...

Rasmus, I've seen a vid of yours somewhere on YouTube. Are you up for this? As for me, I can barely spell viddeo (vidio?) let alone make one, lol... 

No, sorry. I've made my share of Beach Boys videos & movies! ("Daftfilm")...
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« Reply #35 on: July 20, 2016, 07:30:20 AM »

I imagined a little exchange between fans, respectively, of Beatles/BBs and of Rhythm & Blues:

"Revol., Brian?"
"Na, I RB lover."

Thanx Thorgil! A Little naughty extension, if you allow:

"Puti; 'Revolver', Brian?"
"Na, I: RB [Rev...]-lover!" [It Up]
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« Reply #36 on: July 20, 2016, 07:49:15 AM »

I imagined a little exchange between fans, respectively, of Beatles/BBs and of Rhythm & Blues:

"Revol., Brian?"
"Na, I RB lover."

Thanx Thorgil! A Little naughty extension, if you allow:

"Puti; 'Revolver', Brian?"
"Na, I: RB [Rev...]-lover!" [It Up]

Reminds me of one of my Love You 'dromes:

Al: "Let's Put it up Stella!"  LOL
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« Reply #37 on: August 05, 2016, 02:20:23 AM »

Well, it doesn't NEED to a video. It could just as well be a comic book treatment based on paper and/or screen-work. I recall Andrew Hickey once doing a project like that! It could make a great item celebrating the upcoming *50* years anniversary of SMiLE/Good Vibrations. Perhaps I'm hoping too much - yet again ? Only time will tell ...
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« Reply #38 on: August 05, 2016, 03:51:14 AM »

Well, it doesn't NEED to a video. It could just as well be a comic book treatment based on paper and/or screen-work. I recall Andrew Hickey once doing a project like that! It could make a great item celebrating the upcoming *50* years anniversary of SMiLE/Good Vibrations. Perhaps I'm hoping too much - yet again ? Only time will tell ...

I'd love to help out, Rasmus, but I'm a simple soul and visuals of this kind are utterly beyond me...
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« Reply #39 on: August 05, 2016, 05:55:16 AM »

Don't worry about it, jk! You've done more than enough  to make the project what it is already - which imo is too good a thing, NOT to be expanded into something else! And the talent(s) are out there,  to be sure!
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« Reply #40 on: August 06, 2016, 02:41:37 AM »

[EDIT: I wasn`t happy with my verse 25. So I`ve simplified it to make it a bit stronger. Also on verse 30: D*N*** can now mean either "denial" (with reference to the preceding verse) OR still Dennis]
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« Reply #41 on: August 20, 2016, 02:07:50 AM »

Overnite sensation! Just 'found' an outtake from the great LOVE/PARKS Poetry Album. The one verse about Mike calling Van Dyke's SMiLE lyrics: "Acid Alliterations"! (and thereby forming an AA all by himself [*=possible Diogenes-reference]):

>"PARKS' ACIDic Al-
literations ! No, it 'ARE'! ...
`till acid-I cask*rap!"
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« Reply #42 on: September 26, 2016, 08:16:13 AM »

ok
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« Reply #43 on: October 13, 2016, 02:18:56 AM »

Well, I thought that Mike once knew a lady named "Kim". Don't know where I pick'd that up(?) But it doesn't seem to fly, so I've corrected it ...

And another detail: the first words of verse 15 "O[h] MONA"--- I could only relate them to the Love You song-title. Now I discovered  those words as part of an U R My Sunshine/O.M.P. illustration by Frank Holmes - this MONA being Mona Lisa (which painting, Brian & Marilyn had a 'reproduction' of, printed on  drapes I guess - back in the SMiLE days): EVEN BETTER ! Talk about a 'work in progress' (?)...
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« Reply #44 on: December 11, 2016, 05:37:23 AM »

'Tis time for me to make amends: Those haikus I've written have NOTHING in common with the classical haikus from the old japanese masters (apart from the numbers and distribution of syllables!). We're talking BASHO (e.g his famous FROG-haiku), ISSA & BUSON. The best I can do is to quote three haiku+-palindromes, dedicated to each of them, as written by DEAN BLEHERT:

>Is "I" true to Basho?

Hero Frog ? I've vigor, for ... eh?

Oh saboteur - 'tis I<


>Was I  a s s i n i n e?

Meek? - Nay! O no, YANKEE men!

In   I s s a   I  saw<


>Eh? Bad-rap Buson at arts!

"Buson - no substrata ..."

No sub-par dab, he!<

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« Reply #45 on: December 12, 2016, 03:54:12 AM »

"Batman Faces Palindrome":

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N5F66JwLq90

This is how I would like my 'sardonic verses' visualized on video: Mike Love versus Van Dyke Parks. Only, in this version they would both appear good AND evil and BOTH be speaking palindromix! Anyone game for this stop/motion lego-like challenge?

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« Reply #46 on: December 16, 2016, 12:53:51 AM »


All verses by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy aka Rasmus Skotte

With help from (in order of appearance) CenturyDeprived (1+9), Theydon Bois (2), RengaWagneR aka john k on the rest  (bar 'dedication', 'antipasti', 7,17,21-25 & 28-31 & epilog), Eric Harshbarger (28/29+31) and Will Thomas (# ),

>L*O*V*E/P*A*R*K*S*s: "Y*O  B*B*O*Y*S   S*K*R*A*P*E-V*O*L."<                    {haiku-palindromic long-poem starring MIKE EDWARD LOVE & VAN DYKE PARKS (and to quote Batman on this: they're "STILL-TALKING-IN-SENTENCES-THAT-ARE-SPELLED-THE-SAME-FORWARD-AND-BACKWARD"). Dedicated to the following fine folks:}

>Wolla, B*'^* DOUGLAS/
Yo B.BOYS/AL/G^** U. !!
(od*ball, o  W'***)<

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

>a*n*t*i*p*a*s*t*i :      [it's a pit, NA?]<

o - 0 - o


>Tao, BW ! (oh SO gone)
A gassy oBESE BOY's saga,
e': 'NO-go  Showboat'<

'
>HEROES AND VILLAINS
U.S. N I , all !   "I -
(V.D.):  NA$E  OR --- eh?<


>'Twas ol' India`s aid
'YOGI/GURU GIG !'  O Y ---
dia said: NIL/0 saw't !"<


>PARKS: "ACIDic Al-
literations !? NO, 'it ARE'!...
'till ' acid-I'  cask-rap!<


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>NO TO 'NO'
                                       
                
SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O!"
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<

II
LOVE-VOL
                                           

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as s/krap!"<

III
TUT-TUT  
                                             

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ****'** ASK 'im .."<

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PARKS#SKRAP  
                                   

>#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!
#M.E.Love(dr.?)dev.ole*M
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)<

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>Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... ok! OK!!
'He'?:  ^ Male EGO !"

VI
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^
                       

"S.I.P.  IS (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama?? ... I WON!"<

VII                            
'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!


>"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
WORD-rows, N I:) T.A---r ?; B*i ?; V.D.?
Oo ** G--! ED' won!"<

VIII                                
'Navy~VAN


>'Dog', so REharden,
o Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<
                                  
IX
MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)
     

>"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
D.Parks' "SMiLEr-prelim's"  (:Skrap'd set!)??
Ate career   -   ^n'  POT!..."<

X
Navy~VAN


>"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE?  MATT>
and ADAM J. - ay'!"

XI                      
LOVE-vol.


E.L./ I:         "a DJ ! :
ROGER C., I 'NEMOd'!
GARY U.?=Guy-rag!

XII

DOMENIC!   'REG* or >
J. Dailey?   A.J./Ma/Dad/
'Nat'(: ^ tame vole) KI~M~ !"

XIII
Navy-VAN


"TODAY!" (?)  NOT! No risk!
Rap'd V.D.:  "I'd *** **** ***
* *** ** ('* *** ****)"!!<

XIV

>"D 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!              
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
Moo b*s IS hard!"<

XV
Navy-VAN
                 

>"O' MONA"! Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
idyll: a Sand** IN!!

XVI
MIKE/k I ^m


"A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" [Ed!] "Dog-nip?
Si Louie, ami-dog!"

XVII

'TIS swonky L*'* ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
- God ONLY Knows ...)  SIT!

XVIII            
Navy-VAN


"God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
ami (:"Ewes")...   Net-'FOX'?"

XIX
MIKE (k I ^m)


"O BAN!!   I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! "A p'^n"! Mo'?"<

XX          
Navy~VAN


>Defray 'Spot', debnair
'Banana'!   "Mi Manana -
Brian! BED ??" 'Topsy' arfed<

XXI
Navy~VAN
(and BB' dna)


>"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo: B*' = H.C.A.!
E^Band = er ...  USA!"<

XXII
MIKE (k I ^m)


>"OK! Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO!  B.R.En*:
Raw lot, I pack - O!"<

XXIII            
Navy~VAN


>"STAR*ONE {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra**d!
NO "Maiden"? O rats!"<

XXIV
Parks' S*O*S skrap


>"N: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!-
-o-LIA*S!  NO lia'son ..."<

XXV            
MIKE (k I ^m)


>"OK 'cornfield' in
OK CabinE., 'geni'?:  BACK ON!
Idle I F*n ROCK-o"<


XXVI
Mike OR Dyke


>Pals, eNO#  *drome!
No? One LAST one: 'PALINDROMES
UNITE GOD's EX'es!'

XXVII

Do get in! Use M'**
or D***, NIL ape!! Not sale, no?
One mor* DONE! {*slap*}<

XXVIII
L.A., EDWARDian aid? Raw deal!


>"Hal? A renegade!
Revered, HAL BLAINE'd: 'Era's TEN
[nosy Hal boots TOO

XXIX

blah-y!] SONNETS are
denial-blah'd er... EVER, Ed!'
A general AH!"<

XXX
Tony A/Navy~Van (a Y-not)
                         

>Tony/D.Parks: "PET SOUNDS
as D*n'^*/U'~o' step!
Skrap'd ***'** Y-not?"<

XXXI
MIKE (k I ^m)
dB, re: verb "REVERB'd"


>Mike E: "l o v' 'parks' --- GOD!
Yell: A 'VAN' IN A VALLEY ((ALLEY))(((alley)))
Dogs' krap - " ^W.O.L", EEK!, I ^m!"<

XXXII
MIKE & DYKE


>"Find on*s PAL IN D'
ROtterdaM?  Ho-hum.  Raw's IN?:
'Ho', f'k'n 'ho', J**!

XXXIII

RengaWagneR = JOHN K ?
Fhn IS warm!  Uh~oh ... 'MAD' rettor'd!
NIL a*ps ? Nod*'n  IF !"<

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>EPILOGUE.  U  GO  lip - e' !<
a.k.a.
>d*e*s*s*e*r*t*s:        (NON-stressed)<

>Dyke/Mik*AIKUS aka
war: *DROME*em or draw aka
suki'aki / ME, Kyd!<


#40{*9*}

>Of FOUR-0-NIN: L*e !
'Lyricist'? [sic]  'I R'!   Y, L.?
"El Nino, R U OFF?"   O !<

>Loop~de~Loop~de~Loops:
Step~on  SMiLE~kelims!  (no~PetS)
 (spool, Ed!~pool Ed, POOL!)<

>{*FULFILLIN*NESS' NINT*N
FINALE?  lan if  NT'N=
in ^ss e*, n NILL: I  fluf*}<

                 o~0~o

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skotte ~ na, netto k^s* sums?
- are nada!   I ~om~}<
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a.k.A sex I'm on, O!"
M(E)L: 'I'm SO not on - no ...
"sexiness"! (o, Van D.  fixes)'<<<
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« Reply #47 on: December 30, 2016, 03:33:01 AM »

And so my SANDBOXing days are gone - henceforthwith. "Oh so gone". HAPPY 2017!!!

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