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[barto]

Hey guys would love to hear your thoughts on my 2 new tracks (first official release)! Brian obviously my biggest inspiration!

A. Moon Queen
B. Singularity 2045 {Journey To The Weird}

darnomite.bandcamp.com

Let me know if you like!!! Trying to make modern spiritual edit music

[barto]

Would sincerely appreciate any feedback especially on harmonies! 

[joehink]

Great harmonies on Moon Queen!

[barto]

Thank you!

[feelsflow]

Both tracks sound very good.  Very Beach Boys-y.  Who would have expected another Beach Boys fan around here?!?  Welcome to the forum.  I liked "Moon Queen" best of the two.  The vocals are somewhat buried in the mix on both, making it hard to understand all the words.  If you get a chance, add a lyric sheet to the bandcamp site.  -Will

[barto]

Thanks a lot for the feedback Will. I'm adding the lyrics to bandcamp right now!

[orange22]

d@rn- very mellow and more than a bit trippy, which is right in my sweet spot. On Moon Queen I'm really digging the outro, it could go on a lot longer. Cool arrangement on Singularity 2045, I like the harmonies on the "chorus" (if you will), and especially how the break in the middle goes in a different section. Oh and now the outro again is going back to that, and could go on another minute + for me!

[barto]

Hey guys just posted a new track- Celebrate Love Tonight....lots of harmonies in this one. check the end for some moving lines in a 4 part

https://darnomite.bandcamp.com/celebrate-love-tonight

[Empire Of Love]

Hey guys just posted a new track- Celebrate Love Tonight....lots of harmonies in this one. check the end for some moving lines in a 4 part

https://soundcloud.com/jonahlustig/celebrate-love-tonight

I like it, definite potential.  Some slight Love You-ness to it.  Post more once you've written and recorded more.

Thanks for sharing.

EoL

[orange22]

Yes. Really like the prominent, classical use of organ and harpsichord alongside the more modern production elements. Outro round is nice too, and harmonies sound nice on the instrumental version.

P.S. instrumental versions for the win.

[barto]

New song is a suite about the town I've lived in a few years now...Pasadena, CA. Has pretty much 2 sections, the second beginning around 2:28.

As always would love to hear your thoughts. Best wishes to all.

https://soundcloud.com/jonahlustig/pasadena

[orange22]

Jonah, I'm really liking this. Great stereo imagery. The blend of electronic with more traditional pop (that chromatic piano) is something I'm trying to do myself a bit.