This is my first time working with music editing software, I think I did a fine job. Not good or great, but serviceable. Some of my ideas were probably inspired by other mixes I've heard, I'm working on trying to give credit where it's due. All of my changes and reasonings are outlined in the description.
I'd love to hear your (gently worded) feedback!
I'm going a little out of order - I've uploaded Side 3 (The Elements) first. Everything else is completed though, except for Child is Father of the Man, which is giving me a lot of trouble.
Link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Dw20LgsWoI