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« on: January 03, 2015, 12:06:49 PM »

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« Reply #1 on: January 03, 2015, 01:24:36 PM »

Zach, man that was cool - I enjoyed that! Great bass work, too. Nice electric 12 and snare sounds.
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« Reply #2 on: January 03, 2015, 02:47:21 PM »

Zach, you know I've like all your work up until now, right? All positive comments. And take this as constructive criticism, OK? Are you looking for the truth here? I wouldn't B.S. ya.

Your presentation here seems like it's bordering on lifeless. Man, you guys need to ROCK this song. See if you can belt it out like Carl! You guys seem like you're all sitting around stoned when you're playing it and not really into it. Maybe you were stoned? The lead reminds me of the way Christian Love use to sing it. Drab. Lifeless. Almost boring. No color. This song is suppose to COOK, man! Check out the way Carl Wilson use to sing it on the videos. I know you can do that. Look at the way John Cowsill sings it. THAT'S the way ya do it!

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« Reply #3 on: January 03, 2015, 03:11:37 PM »

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« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2015, 12:11:35 AM »

You have to learn to smile while you sing.  That's the key Carl and now Brian use.
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« Reply #5 on: January 07, 2015, 12:18:03 AM »

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« Reply #6 on: February 20, 2015, 07:43:31 PM »

I'd say I liked the group playing, & the fact that you made it faster. Vocally-what everyone said, however, I think it was a good idea to split the vox. You should do it to other songs that feature a single lead.
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