Thank you for the kind words FOTM...
Regarding the reverb on the drums: I have been using GarageBand and the latest version does not have the option to add reverb to MIDI drum tracks. Strange, I know. I've since downloaded Logic Pro X but have not had a chance to mess with the reverb in Logic.
Reverb on the vocals: there is a touch of reverb on the second vocal track (which is lower in the mix).
Volume of vocals: I've taken your advice, and Rab's, and Swedish Frog's, and have increased the volume some on the vocals. After I play around with the reverb and add a few other things I will upload a link to the revised version. Any further comments are greatly appreciated.
Harmony: I wouldn't know where to begin. Zach once posted links to some harmony tutorials on Youtube, but I lost the links before I could listen. If you want to give it a shot and I will see if I can duplicate it, that would be great.
Bass: I don't have a bass line and have no idea how to come up with one. Again, if you want to give it a shot please do. I'll PM the chords to you ('cause the four chords I use are top secret).
Thanks for your comments regarding the story/lyrics. Its not Bob Dylan but I like them anyway, I'm glad someone else does too.
EoL