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« Reply #25 on: May 09, 2006, 12:00:22 PM »

edited that last sentence a little

'An aimless college graduate spends his last day in town with two high school friends, before leaving to join the family business, retreating from the harsh realities of the adult world dreaming of adventure and escape.'
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« Reply #26 on: May 09, 2006, 12:05:23 PM »

I want to see this film now.

Did you spend more time on making it than trying to write a one sentence summary?
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« Reply #27 on: May 09, 2006, 04:08:45 PM »

Okay....so he's leaving to join the family business...so CAN he be aimless?  He can leave reluctantly, he can join reluctantly...but he has an aim...
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« Reply #28 on: May 09, 2006, 07:59:22 PM »



Yes he's aimless since he has no direction and isn't sure what to do with his life so his parents are steering him into a steady job. He's just being practical because he still needs a job.
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« Reply #29 on: May 10, 2006, 12:03:34 PM »

Ah.  Gotcha.
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