Feedback on my hip-hop band's new song?

[Letsgoawayforawhile]

Just wondering if I could get some feedback.
Thanks a million!

https://soundcloud.com/godspeedjoshua/sycamore

[seltaeb1012002]

Niiice.

Vocals sound on point. Performances are tight.

Only criticisms I have.. I feel like the verses should be more sparse, and choruses heavier. That's more of a personal thing, it could work either way.

I would've liked to hear a better transition into the 1st rap verse. Maybe just a melody line of some sort.

Also a hotter mix might give the recording more life.

I could hear a dope electro/pop remix to this.

Nice work, overall. Definitely a cool vibe.

[Letsgoawayforawhile]

Niiice.

Vocals sound on point. Performances are tight.

Only criticisms I have.. I feel like the verses should be more sparse, and choruses heavier. That's more of a personal thing, it could work either way.

I would've liked to hear a better transition into the 1st rap verse. Maybe just a melody line of some sort.

Also a hotter mix might give the recording more life.

I could hear a dope electro/pop remix to this.

Nice work, overall. Definitely a cool vibe.

Thanks for the feedback!
We're not totally done with it, so I'm sure I could still make some changes to it.
It's not mastered or really done being mixed either, so hopefully it turns out a little better at least.

[Letsgoawayforawhile]

Niiice.

Vocals sound on point. Performances are tight.

Only criticisms I have.. I feel like the verses should be more sparse, and choruses heavier. That's more of a personal thing, it could work either way.

I would've liked to hear a better transition into the 1st rap verse. Maybe just a melody line of some sort.

Also a hotter mix might give the recording more life.

I could hear a dope electro/pop remix to this.

Nice work, overall. Definitely a cool vibe.

Also, if you care to listen, here's another new one.
This one's still unfinished.
I still have to record another singing verse, and I still want to work on the background vocals.
https://soundcloud.com/godspeedjoshua/flesh-and-spirit