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FatherOfTheMan Sr101
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« on: September 02, 2012, 02:35:44 PM »

I've been dealing with a pretty bad emotional problem for a few years, and I was talking to my friend about it and he said:
"Dude, your texting me a beautiful novel here, write these stories!"

So I'm telling my story, completely free, in a short novella. It'll be out really soon, I'm hoping that it'll help me in the future.
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« Reply #1 on: September 02, 2012, 10:18:03 PM »

If you're interested to see my in depth look at the effects of teenage relationships on a person's overall emotions, Check this out.

Be sure to pay attention to how I changed, and how I didn't... It can have a lot more meaning then it seems if you read it correctly...

http://www.sendspace.com/file/wq6549
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« Reply #2 on: September 03, 2012, 12:28:56 AM »

Hey,
I know criticism can be hard, but this feels more like a private journal than it does a real story or book. I would say keep writing, keep growing up, you'll get a lot better eventually.
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