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Non Smiley Smile Stuff => Smiley Smilers Who Make Music => Topic started by: wind chime on February 16, 2006, 03:19:42 AM



Title: My cover of "Fall Breaks & Back to Winter"
Post by: wind chime on February 16, 2006, 03:19:42 AM
Go to:

http://geocities.com/yerweb/wsm.html

Please listen and comment..it's for the Trace af Genius 2 project

Thanks a whole lotta bunch!


Title: Re: My cover of "Fall Breaks & Back to Winter"
Post by: Mitchell on February 16, 2006, 05:32:37 AM
It's cool. I'd like to hear more variation within the song, like sound effects or more instrumentation, to keep it interesting, since it's a fairly repetitive pattern. I like the ending for just that reason. The little surges of distortion are a neat touch, too.


Title: Re: My cover of "Fall Breaks & Back to Winter"
Post by: wind chime on February 16, 2006, 05:56:09 PM
Thanks for the critique Mitchell! It is still taking shape and I will add some more "variations" to keep it from getting monotonous...The original is also somewhat repetitive but I have put my own stamp on it...Yes the ending is my favourite part too...I might add another voice on the beginning parts to fill it in more...