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Title: >L*O*V*E/P*A*R*K*S*s: Y*O! B*B*O*Y*S S*K*R*A*P*E-V*O*L.<
Post by: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 02:00:09 AM
     >NO TO 'NO'

>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<


     LOVE-VOL.

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<


       TUT-TUT

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<


        PARKS#SKRAP

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#


Title: Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
Post by: rasmus skotte on February 08, 2016, 04:27:56 AM
^^^That one was my 250'th post, and I'm quite happy with it...^^^
This could also be my very last one - NO, I won't promise anything! I mean why bother, giving it your best effort.
There is - and h a s been this thing: This guy (mice-elf) MUST be ignored for whatever reason (John excepted and very much appreciated)...


Title: Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
Post by: JK on February 08, 2016, 04:59:31 AM
^^^That one was my 250'th post, and I'm quite happy with it...^^^
This could also be my very last one - NO, I won't promise anything! I mean why bother, giving it your best effort.
There is - and h a s been this thing: This guy (mice-elf) MUST be ignored for whatever reason (John excepted and very much appreciated)...

Believe me, Rasmus, your haikudromes are a highpoint (or should that be hai-point?) for me when visiting this place. I think it's very likely that others are equally awestruck and appreciative but don't really know how to respond. I "mice-elf" would be most unhappy if you were to decamp.    


Title: Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
Post by: Smilin Ed H on February 09, 2016, 11:23:51 AM
     >NO TO 'NO'

>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<


     LOVE-VOL.

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<


       TUT-TUT

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<


        PARKS#SKRAP

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...


Title: Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
Post by: rasmus skotte on April 10, 2016, 11:58:27 PM
     >NO TO 'NO'

>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<


     LOVE-VOL.

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<


       TUT-TUT

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<


        PARKS#SKRAP

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...

[And the haiku-palindromic comic continues (new verses by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy):]

 KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok):
                     -V-
   ->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
       'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

   VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^
                    -VI-
             "S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-



Title: Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
Post by: rasmus skotte on April 19, 2016, 04:48:16 AM
     >NO TO 'NO'

>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<


     LOVE-VOL.

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<


       TUT-TUT

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<


        PARKS#SKRAP

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...

[And the haiku-palindromic comic continues (new verses by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy):]

 KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok):
                     -V-
   ->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
       'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

   VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^
                    -VI-
             "S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-


[Even mo' friendly poetry slammin' between Mike & Van Dyke. 'Tis Michael EDward Love's turn to draw:]

                     -VII-
    >'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<

    ->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
           Oo ** G..!   ED' won!"<-


Title: Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
Post by: rasmus skotte on April 20, 2016, 05:16:33 AM
     >NO TO 'NO'

>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<


     LOVE-VOL.

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<


       TUT-TUT

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<


        PARKS#SKRAP

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...

[And the haiku-palindromic comic continues (new verses by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy):]

 KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok):
                     -V-
   ->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
       'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

   VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^
                    -VI-
             "S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-


[Even mo' friendly poetry slammin' between Mike & Van Dyke. 'Tis Michael EDward Love's turn to draw:]

                     -VII-
    >'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<

    ->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
           Oo ** G..!   ED' won!"<-

                  -VIII-                                   {from RengaWagneR}
             'Navy~VAN':

     ->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek).   I'm ONE
       Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<-


Title: Re: Mike'n'Van Dyke's haiku~drome'd triptych-trip +1 (by cd,tb, jk x2 w/P'dB):
Post by: JK on April 20, 2016, 05:58:52 AM
                  -VIII-                                   {from RengaWagneR}
             'Navy~VAN':

     ->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek).   I'm ONE
       Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<-

Mike's quite the haikudrome star these days. (I hope Dr. Ah can help him.) 


Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on April 26, 2016, 12:47:44 AM
        >NO TO 'NO'
                 '
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<

               ²
       LOVE-VOL.

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<

             ³
       TUT-TUT

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<

                IV
        PARKS#SKRAP

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...

> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<:                {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                     -V-
   ->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
       'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

   VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^                        {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                    -VI-
             "S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-


                            7
 >'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<                          {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}

    ->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
           Oo ** G..!   ED' won!"<-

                      8                                  {by RengaWagneR}
             'Navy~VAN':

     ->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek).   I'm ONE
       Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<-
                                   9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"<              {by CenturyDeprived}

              ->"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
         D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s  (Skrap'd set!)?
                  Ate career   -   'n'  POT!..."<-



Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on May 06, 2016, 06:05:04 AM
        >NO TO 'NO'
                 '
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<

               ²
       LOVE-VOL.

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<

             ³
       TUT-TUT

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<

                IV
        PARKS#SKRAP

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...

> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<:                {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                     -V-
   ->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
       'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

   VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^                        {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                    -VI-
             "S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-


                            7
 >'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<                          {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}

    ->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
           Oo ** G..!   ED' won!"<-

                      8                                  {by RengaWagneR}
             'Navy~VAN':

     ->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek).   I'm ONE
       Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<-
                                   9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"<              {by CenturyDeprived}

              ->"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
         D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s  (Skrap'd set!)?
                  Ate career   -   'n'  POT!..."<-


[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse  indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)...  BY RengaWagneR:]

                       '°
               [Navy~VAN:]

->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE?  MATT>
           and ADAM J. - ay!"

                        ''
               [LOVE-vol.:]

          "Eli?         A DJ! :
         ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
          GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
                      '²
          Domenic!   'REG or >
       J. Dailey?   A.J./Ma/Dad/
       'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"

                   XIII
             [Navy-VAN:]

       "TODAY! (?)  NOT! No risk!
  Rap'd V.D.:  "I'd **** **** ****
** *** *** (** *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
                  XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
        Moo b*s IS hard!"<


Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
Post by: JK on May 06, 2016, 12:26:26 PM
        >NO TO 'NO'
                 '
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<

               ²
       LOVE-VOL.

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<

             ³
       TUT-TUT

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<

                IV
        PARKS#SKRAP

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...

> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<:                {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                     -V-
   ->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
       'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

   VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^                        {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                    -VI-
             "S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-


                            7
 >'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<                          {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}

    ->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
           Oo ** G..!   ED' won!"<-

                      8                                  {by RengaWagneR}
             'Navy~VAN':

     ->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek).   I'm ONE
       Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<-
                                   9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"<              {by CenturyDeprived}

              ->"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
         D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s  (Skrap'd set!)?
                  Ate career   -   'n'  POT!..."<-


[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse  indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)...  BY RengaWagneR:]

                       '°
               [Navy~VAN:]

->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE?  MATT>
           and ADAM J. - ay!"

                        ''
               [LOVE-vol.:]

          "Eli?         A DJ! :
         ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
          GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
                      '²
          Domenic!   'REG or >
       J. Dailey?   A.J./Ma/Dad/
       'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"

                   XIII
             [Navy-VAN:]

       "TODAY! (?)  NOT! No risk!
  Rap'd V.D.:  "I'd **** **** ****
** *** *** (** *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
                  XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
        Moo b*s IS hard!"<

You've been busy, R. Your name should be affixed to this----this is all your hard work, not mine. I'm just your messenger. :hat 


Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on May 07, 2016, 01:40:30 AM
For me, it's the other way around^^^! But as Long we're on the SAME page, I'm one happy camper ...


Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
Post by: JK on May 08, 2016, 03:40:24 AM
This was prompted by the heart-breaking film about Amy, which I watched last week:

> R.I.P. at SS (Anon.). Even Amy Winehouse, Jim, Rod... "La Péri" on noir EP, Al. Dormi, Jesu. O hen! I, Wyman, even on ass, tapir... <
 


Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on May 13, 2016, 01:17:57 AM
       >NO TO 'NO'
                 '
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<

               ²
       LOVE-VOL.

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<

             ³
       TUT-TUT

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<

                IV
        PARKS#SKRAP

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...

> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<:                {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                     -V-
   ->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
       'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

   VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^                        {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                    -VI-
             "S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-


                           7
 >'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<                          {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}

    ->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
           Oo ** G..!   ED' won!"<-

                      8                                  {by RengaWagneR}
             'Navy~VAN':

     ->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek).   I'm ONE
       Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<-
                                  9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"<              {by CenturyDeprived}

              ->"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
         D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s  (Skrap'd set!)?
                  Ate career   -   'n'  POT!..."<-


[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse  indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)...  BY RengaWagneR:]

                       '°
               [Navy~VAN:]

->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE?  MATT>
           and ADAM J. - ay!"

                        ''
               [LOVE-vol.:]

          "Eli?         A DJ! :
         ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
          GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
                      '²
          Domenic!   'REG or >
       J. Dailey?   A.J./Ma/Dad/
       'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"

                   XIII
             [Navy-VAN:]

       "TODAY! (?)  NOT! No risk!
  Rap'd V.D.:  "I'd **** **** ****
** *** *** (** *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
                  XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
        Moo b*s IS hard!"<

In the following session, our guys seem to be on friendlier terms? They even exchange their 'speech impairments' !? And naming dog breeds. Starting with the (in)famous in-house sandbox and Brian's Weimaraner-dog: Louie, "doing its Business" in there, together with a Renar(d)-Foxhound/sheepdog (pet-named "Ewes"). Did they really fly in sand from Brazilian Ipanema Beach? Finally, Mike & Kim: Receiving a piano from Van Dyke(!) which he'd gotten from his friend, former W.B.-Boss MO (Ostin) - the sandbox GRAND?                                                    [By RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

            {Navy-VAN:}
                  15
->->"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
       idyll: a Sand* IN!!"

           {MIKE/Kim:}
                16
        "A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" (ed.). "Dog-nip?
          Si Louie, ami-dog!"

                     17
     ->'Tis swonky L^^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
  - God ONLY Knows ...)  SIT!<-

            {Navy-VAN:}
                  18
       "God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")...   Net-Fox?"

            {MIKE/Kim:}
                 19
   - "O' BAN!!   I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! 'Mo'?"<-<-


Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on May 14, 2016, 01:40:00 AM
[Now, all the dogs are in there together, including Brian's beagle: 'Banana'. Van Dyke Parks is offered a recording contract (by ^MO Ostin^?) - and walks away! (Haiku-palindrome by RengaWagneR):]

                   ²°
           {Navy~VAN:}

   ->Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
     'Banana'!   "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed<-


Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on May 23, 2016, 12:24:10 AM
[2 more palindromic haiku-verses starring world famous storyteller: H.C. Andersen & BRI/an (NOT to be confused with B.R.I.: Brother Records Inc. here referred to as B.R. ENterprise). By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                      ²'
               Navy~VAN:
          (>and BB' dna)<

           ->"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
       E^Band = er ...  USA!"<-

                    ²²
            MIKE/Kim:

       ->"O.k.: Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO!  B.R.En*:
       Raw lot, I pack - O'!"<-



Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on May 25, 2016, 12:00:13 AM
        >NO TO 'NO'
                 '
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<

               ²
       LOVE-VOL.

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<

             ³
       TUT-TUT

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<

                IV
        PARKS#SKRAP

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...

> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<:                {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                     -V-
   ->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... o.k.! O.K.!!
       'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

   VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^                        {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                    -VI-
             "S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-


                            7
 >'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<                          {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}

    ->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
           Oo ** G..!   ED' won!"<-

                      8                                  {by RengaWagneR}
             'Navy~VAN':

     ->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek).   I'm ONE
       Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<-
                                   9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"<              {by CenturyDeprived}

              ->"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
         D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s  (Skrap'd set!)?
                  Ate career   -   'n'  POT!..."<-


[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse  indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)...  BY RengaWagneR:]

                       '°
               [Navy~VAN:]

->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE?  MATT>
           and ADAM J. - ay!"

                        ''
               [LOVE-vol.:]

          "Eli?         A DJ! :
         ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
          GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
                      '²
          Domenic!   'REG or >
       J. Dailey?   A.J./Ma/Dad/
       'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"

                   XIII
             [Navy-VAN:]

       "TODAY! (?)  NOT! No risk!
  Rap'd V.D.:  "I'd **** **** ****
** *** *** (** *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
                  XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
        Moo b*s IS hard!"<

In the following session, our guys seem to be on friendlier terms? They even exchange their 'speech impairments' !? And naming dog breeds. Starting with the (in)famous in-house sandbox and Brian's Weimaraner-dog: Louie, "doing its Business" in there, together with a Renar(d)-Foxhound/sheepdog (pet-named "Ewes"). Did they really fly in sand from Brazilian Ipanema Beach? Finally, Mike & Kim: Receiving a piano from Van Dyke(!) which he'd gotten from his friend, former W.B.-Boss MO (Ostin) - the sandbox GRAND?                                                    [By RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

            {Navy-VAN:}
                  15
->->"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
       idyll: a Sand* IN!!"

           {MIKE/Kim:}
                16
        "A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" (ed.). "Dog-nip?
          Si Louie, ami-dog!"

                     17
     ->'Tis swonky L^^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
  - God ONLY Knows ...)  SIT!<-

            {Navy-VAN:}
                  18
       "God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")...   Net-Fox?"

            {MIKE/Kim:}
                 19
   - "O' BAN!!   I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! 'Mo'?"<-<-

[Now, all the dogs are in there together, including Brian's beagle: 'Banana'. Van Dyke Parks is offered a recording contract (by ^MO Ostin^?) - and walks away! (Haiku-palindrome by RengaWagneR):]

                   ²°
           {Navy~VAN:}

   ->Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
     'Banana'!   "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed<-
[2 more palindromic haiku-verses starring world famous storyteller: H.C. Andersen & BRI/an (NOT to be confused with B.R.I.: Brother Records Inc. here referred to as B.R. ENterprise). By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                      ²'
               Navy~VAN:
          (>and BB' dna)<

           ->"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
       E^Band = er ...  USA!"<-

                    ²²
            MIKE/Kim:

       ->"O.k.: Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO!  B.R.En*:
       Raw lot, I pack - O'!"<-




Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on May 27, 2016, 12:04:48 AM
[Surf's up in the ORIGINAL VERSION was never completed/released! The same goes for another Brian/Parks-song (66/67): "Sunflower MAIDEN". Parks has long claimed to be the sole Brian-collaborator on Sail On, Sailor. No RAY K., no T.ALMER (or Rieley)? By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                   ²³
            Navy~VAN:

    ->"Star*One {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra'd!
      NO "Maiden"? O' rats!"<-

                  24
    >Parks' S*O*S skrap:<

   ->"N°: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!
  o' LIA*S!  NO lia'son ..."<-


Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on May 30, 2016, 12:43:14 AM
       >NO TO 'NO'
                 '
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<

               ²
       LOVE-VOL.

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<

             ³
       TUT-TUT

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<

                IV
        PARKS#SKRAP

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...

> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<:                {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                     -V-
   ->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... ok! OK!!
       'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

   VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^                        {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                    -VI-
             "S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-


                           7
 >'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<                          {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}

    ->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
           Oo ** G..!   ED' won!"<-

                      8                                  {by RengaWagneR}
             'Navy~VAN':

     ->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek).   I'm ONE
       Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<-
                                  9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"<              {by CenturyDeprived}

              ->"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
         D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s  (Skrap'd set!)?
                  Ate career   -   'n'  POT!..."<-


[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse  indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)...  BY RengaWagneR:]

                       '°
               [Navy~VAN:]

->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE?  MATT>
           and ADAM J. - ay!"

                        ''
               [LOVE-vol.:]

          "Eli?         A DJ! :
         ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
          GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
                      '²
          Domenic!   'REG or >
       J. Dailey?   A.J./Ma/Dad/
       'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"

                   XIII
             [Navy-VAN:]

       "TODAY! (?)  NOT! No risk!
  Rap'd V.D.:  "I'd **** **** ****
** *** *** (** *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
                  XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
        Moo b*s IS hard!"<

In the following session, our guys seem to be on friendlier terms? They even exchange their 'speech impairments' !? And naming dog breeds. Starting with the (in)famous in-house sandbox and Brian's Weimaraner-dog: Louie, "doing its Business" in there, together with a Renar(d)-Foxhound/sheepdog (pet-named "Ewes"). Did they really fly in sand from Brazilian Ipanema Beach? Finally, Mike & Kim: Receiving a piano from Van Dyke(!) which he'd gotten from his friend, former W.B.-Boss MO (Ostin) - the sandbox GRAND?                                                    [By RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

            {Navy-VAN:}
                  15
->->"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
       idyll: a Sand* IN!!"

           {MIKE/Kim:}
                16
        "A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" [ed.]! "Dog-nip?
          Si Louie, ami-dog!"

                     17
     ->'Tis swonky L^^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
  - God ONLY Knows ...)  SIT!<-

            {Navy-VAN:}
                  18
       "God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")...   Net-Fox?"

            {MIKE/Kim:}
                 19
   - "O' BAN!!   I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! Mo'?"<-<-

[Now, all the dogs are in there together, including Brian's beagle: 'Banana'. Van Dyke Parks is offered a recording contract (by ^MO Ostin^?) - and walks away! (Haiku-palindrome by RengaWagneR):]

                   ²°
           {Navy~VAN:}

   ->Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
     'Banana'!   "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed<-
[2 more palindromic haiku-verses starring world famous storyteller: H.C. Andersen & BRI/an (NOT to be confused with B.R.I.: Brother Records Inc. here referred to as B.R. ENterprise). By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                      ²'
               Navy~VAN:
          (>and BB' dna)<

           ->"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
       E^Band = er ...  USA!"<-

                    ²²
            MIKE/Kim:

       ->"OK! Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO!  B.R.En*:
       Raw lot, I pack - O'!"<-


[Surf's up in the ORIGINAL VERSION was never completed/released! The same goes for another Brian/Parks-song (66/67): "Sunflower MAIDEN". Parks has long claimed to be the sole Brian-collaborator on Sail On, Sailor. No RAY K., no T.ALMER (or Rieley)? By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                   ²³
            Navy~VAN:

    ->"Star*One {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra'd!
      NO "Maiden"? O' rats!"<-

                  24
    >Parks' S*O*S skrap:<

   ->"N°: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!-
  -o-LIA*S!  NO lia'son ..."<-

It's not clear what Mike means, using the word 'BACON'. Does he mock VDP for being a Francis Bacon-wannabe "gothic trip"? And/or does he simply claim the need for "makin' bacon" (earning money)? [by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                 *25*
            MIKE/Kim:

    ->"OK 'cornfield' in
o' CabinE., 'geni'! (BACON ?!).
 Idle I: F***'N ROCK - O!"<-

Let me use this special occasion to thank my fellow Smiley Smiler's: Theydon Bois (verse 2) & CenturyDeprived (1+9). But especially my SMiLEr-PAL & the main supplier: John k for making this possible! JK has written the rest of it all as main or sole palindromist (except verses 7,17 & 21 thru' 25)! This has grown into a winning formula: (VDP & Mike+haiku-verses+humour & multiplied by palindromix).
I.m.o., a superpalindrome is ONE continuous 'drome. By this definition, the SMiLE-WAKA-poem is still the longest one. But THIS Bull Session is by far the longest palindromic Beach Boys-(peri)ODE with its 25 verses, 75 lines & 425 syllables PERIOD! (one Haiku has 3 lines & 17 sylls).
When read backwards, the complete verses will appear in reversed order (a super-palindrome would deliver them in the same order as in forward-reading!). But even here one can enjoy a couple of super-dromes: Verses 5<->6, 10<->13 & 15<->19. John k is a true master ALSO in making those!!
I'd like to thank the MODs for letting us have our creative fun  within the confinement of THE SANDBOX! And finally & foremost: THANX to Mike Love & Van Dyke Parks for their endless inspirations!


Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD,TB,jk,rs):
Post by: JK on May 30, 2016, 01:55:15 AM
Let me use this special occasion to thank my fellow Smiley Smiler's: Theydon Bois (verse 2) & CenturyDeprived (1+9). But especially my SMiLEr-PAL & the main supplier: John k for making this possible! JK has written the rest of it all as main or sole palindromist (except verses 7,17 & 21 thru' 25)! This has grown into a winning formula: VDP & Mike+haiku-verses+humour+palindromes.
I.m.o., a superpalindrome is ONE continuous 'drome. By this definition, the SMiLE-WAKA-poem is still the longest one. But THIS Bull Session is by far the longest palindromic Beach Boys-(peri)ODE with ist 25 verses, 75 lines & 425 syllables PERIOD! (one Haiku has 3 lines & 17 sylls).
When read backwards, the verses will appear in reversed order (a super-palindrome would deliver them in the same order as in forward-reading!). But even here you'll see a couple of super-dromes: Verses 10<->13 & 15<->19. John k is a true master ALSO in making those!!
I'd like to thank the MODs for letting us have our creative fun  within the confinement of THE SANDBOX! And finally & foremost: THANX to Mike Love & Van Dyke Parks for their endless inspirations!

Thank you, Rasmus, for turning basics into songs, to quote Gary Numan. And for your kind words (again).

I have a new BB palindrome brewing. It may take a while----I've bitten off quite a lot this time...   


Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on June 11, 2016, 10:22:40 AM
       >NO TO 'NO'
                 '
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<

               ²
       LOVE-VOL.

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<

             ³
       TUT-TUT

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<

                IV
        PARKS#SKRAP

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...

> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<:                {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                     -V-
   ->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... ok! OK!!
       'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

   VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^                        {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                    -VI-
             "S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-


                           7
 >'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<                          {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}

    ->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
           Oo ** G..!   ED' won!"<-

                      8                                  {by RengaWagneR}
             'Navy~VAN':

     ->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek).   I'm ONE
       Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<-
                                  9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"<              {by CenturyDeprived}

              ->"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
         D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s  (Skrap'd set!)?
                  Ate career   -   'n'  POT!..."<-


[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse  indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)...  BY RengaWagneR:]

                       '°
               [Navy~VAN:]

->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE?  MATT>
           and ADAM J. - ay!"

                        ''
               [LOVE-vol.:]

          "Eli?         A DJ! :
         ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
          GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
                      '²
          Domenic!   'REG or >
       J. Dailey?   A.J./Ma/Dad/
       'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"

                   XIII
             [Navy-VAN:]

       "TODAY! (?)  NOT! No risk!
  Rap'd V.D.:  "I'd **** **** ****
** *** *** (** *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
                  XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
        Moo b*s IS hard!"<

In the following session, our guys seem to be on friendlier terms? They even exchange their 'speech impairments' !? And naming dog breeds. Starting with the (in)famous in-house sandbox and Brian's Weimaraner-dog: Louie, "doing its Business" in there, together with a Renar(d)-Foxhound/sheepdog (pet-named "Ewes"). Did they really fly in sand from Brazilian Ipanema Beach? Finally, Mike & Kim: Receiving a piano from Van Dyke(!) which he'd gotten from his friend, former W.B.-Boss MO (Ostin) - the sandbox GRAND?                                                    [By RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

            {Navy-VAN:}
                  15
->->"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
       idyll: a Sand* IN!!"

           {MIKE/Kim:}
                16
        "A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" [ed.]! "Dog-nip?
          Si Louie, ami-dog!"

                     17
     ->'Tis swonky L^^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
  - God ONLY Knows ...)  SIT!<-

            {Navy-VAN:}
                  18
       "God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")...   Net-Fox?"

            {MIKE/Kim:}
                 19
   - "O' BAN!!   I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! Mo'?"<-<-

[Now, all the dogs are in there together, including Brian's beagle: 'Banana'. Van Dyke Parks is offered a recording contract (by ^MO Ostin^?) - and walks away! (Haiku-palindrome by RengaWagneR):]

                   ²°
           {Navy~VAN:}

   ->Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
     'Banana'!   "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed<-
[2 more palindromic haiku-verses starring world famous storyteller: H.C. Andersen & BRI/an (NOT to be confused with B.R.I.: Brother Records Inc. here referred to as B.R. ENterprise). By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                      ²'
               Navy~VAN:
          (>and BB' dna)<

           ->"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
       E^Band = er ...  USA!"<-

                    ²²
            MIKE/Kim:

       ->"OK! Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO!  B.R.En*:
       Raw lot, I pack - O'!"<-


[Surf's up in the ORIGINAL VERSION was never completed/released! The same goes for another Brian/Parks-song (66/67): "Sunflower MAIDEN". Parks has long claimed to be the sole Brian-collaborator on Sail On, Sailor. No RAY K., no T.ALMER (or Rieley)? By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                   ²³
            Navy~VAN:

    ->"Star*One {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra'd!
      NO "Maiden"? O' rats!"<-

                  24
    >Parks' S*O*S skrap:<

   ->"N°: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!-
  -o-LIA*S!  NO lia'son ..."<-

It's not clear what Mike means, using the word 'BACON'. Does he mock VDP for being a Francis Bacon-wannabe "gothic trip"? And/or does he simply claim the need for "makin' bacon" (earning money)? [by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                 *25*
            MIKE/Kim:

    ->"OK 'cornfield' in
o' CabinE., 'geni'! (BACON ?!).
 Idle I: F***'N ROCK - O!"<-

M(ike) & D(yke)  "God's exes"?! - finally 'united (in *drome) under God'... By RengaWagneR (ACTUALLY using the word 'palindromes' IN a palindrome - DRUMROLL, please):

                     XXVI
                Mike & Dyke:

        ->->Pals! Eno/N*ro:
MONO! One last one: 'Palindromes>
            unite God's exes!'

                     XXVII

          Do get in! Use M'**
or D***, NIL ape!! Not sale, no?
 O NO mor*, NONE! {*slap*}<-<-



Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on June 14, 2016, 07:54:02 AM
       >NO TO 'NO'                                         [by CenturyDeprived:]
                 '
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<

               ²
       LOVE-VOL.                                             [by Theydon Bois:]

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<

             ³
       TUT-TUT                                                [by RengaWagneR:]

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<

                IV
        PARKS#SKRAP                                       [by RengaWagner & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...

> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<:                {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                     -V-
   ->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... ok! OK!!
       'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

   VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^                        {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                    -VI-
             "S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-


                           7
 >'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<                          {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}

    ->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
           Oo ** G..!   ED' won!"<-

                      8                                  {by RengaWagneR}
             'Navy~VAN':

     ->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek).   I'm ONE
       Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<-
                                  9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"<              {by CenturyDeprived}

              ->"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
         D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s  (Skrap'd set!)?
                  Ate career   -   'n'  POT!..."<-


[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse  indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)...  BY RengaWagneR:]

                       '°
               [Navy~VAN:]

->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE?  MATT>
           and ADAM J. - ay!"

                        ''
               [LOVE-vol.:]

          "Eli?         A DJ! :
         ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
          GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
                      '²
          Domenic!   'REG or >
       J. Dailey?   A.J./Ma/Dad/
       'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"

                   XIII
             [Navy-VAN:]

       "TODAY! (?)  NOT! No risk!
  Rap'd V.D.:  "I'd *°** **** °***
*° *** *°* ('* *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
                  XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!               [by RengaWagneR:]
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
        Moo b*s IS hard!"<

In the following session, our guys seem to be on friendlier terms? They even exchange their 'speech impairments' !? And naming dog breeds. Starting with the (in)famous in-house sandbox and Brian's Weimaraner-dog: Louie, "doing its Business" in there, together with a Renar(d)-Foxhound/sheepdog (pet-named "Ewes"). Did they really fly in sand from Brazilian Ipanema Beach? Finally, Mike & Kim: Receiving a piano from Van Dyke(!) which he'd gotten from his friend, former W.B.-Boss MO (Ostin) - the sandbox GRAND?                                                    [By RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

            {Navy-VAN:}
                  15
->->"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
       idyll: a Sand* IN!!"

           {MIKE/Kim:}
                16
        "A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" [ed.]! "Dog-nip?
          Si Louie, ami-dog!"

                     17
     ->'Tis swonky L^^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
  - God ONLY Knows ...)  SIT!<-

            {Navy-VAN:}
                  18
       "God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")...   Net-Fox?"

            {MIKE/Kim:}
                 19
   - "O' BAN!!   I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! Mo'?"<-<-

[Now, all the dogs are in there together, including Brian's beagle: 'Banana'. Van Dyke Parks is offered a recording contract (by ^MO Ostin^?) - and walks away! (Haiku-palindrome by RengaWagneR):]

                   ²°
           {Navy~VAN:}

   ->Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
     'Banana'!   "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed<-
[2 more palindromic haiku-verses starring world famous storyteller: H.C. Andersen & BRI/an (NOT to be confused with B.R.I.: Brother Records Inc. here referred to as B.R. ENterprise). By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                      ²'
               Navy~VAN:
          (>and BB' dna)<

           ->"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
       E^Band = er ...  USA!"<-

                    ²²
            MIKE/Kim:

       ->"OK! Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO!  B.R.En*:
       Raw lot, I pack - O'!"<-


[Surf's up in the ORIGINAL VERSION was never completed/released! The same goes for another Brian/Parks-song (66/67): "Sunflower MAIDEN". Parks has long claimed to be the sole Brian-collaborator on Sail On, Sailor. No RAY K., no T.ALMER (or Rieley)? By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                   ²³
            Navy~VAN:

    ->"Star*One {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra'd!
      NO "Maiden"? O' rats!"<-

                  24
    >Parks' S*O*S skrap:<

   ->"N°: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!-
  -o-LIA*S!  NO lia'son ..."<-

It's not clear what Mike means, using the word 'BACON'. Does he mock VDP for being a Francis Bacon-wannabe "gothic trip"? And/or does he simply claim the need for "makin' bacon" (earning money)? [by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                 *25*
            MIKE/Kim:

    ->"OK 'cornfield' in
o' CabinE., 'geni'! (BACON ?!).
 Idle I: F***'N ROCK - O!"<-

M(ike) & D(yke)  "God's exes"?! - finally 'united (in *drome) under God'... By RengaWagneR (ACTUALLY using the word 'palindromes' IN a palindrome - DRUMROLL, please):

                     XXVI
                Mike & Dyke:

        ->->Pals! Eno/N*ro:
MONO! One last one: 'Palindromes>
            unite God's exes!'

                     XXVII

          Do get in! Use M'**
or D***, NIL ape!! Not sale, no?
 O NO mor*, NONE! {*slap*}<-<-


HAL BLAINE, quoted as he boots the lyrical content of the 10 original Pet Sounds SONGS. Michael EDWARD Love couldn't agree more (Waiting For The Day excepted!) {By Eric Harshbarger:}

                    XXVIII
>L.A., EDWARDian aid? Raw deal!:<

       -> ->"Hal? A renegade!
Revered, HAL BLAINE'd: 'Era's TEN
        [nosy Hal boots TOO>

                    XXIX

      blah-y!] SONNETS are
    denial-blah'd er... EVER, Ed!'
            A general AH!"<-<-

                     ³°

    >Tony A/Navy~Van (a Y-not)<                           [Haiku-D(enny)-Rome(o)by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy]

->Tony/D.Parks: "PET SOUNDS
        as D*N*'*' U'~o' step!
     Skrap'd *°°**'* Y-not?"<-







Title: Re: BULL SESSION from THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE versus VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
Post by: JK on June 15, 2016, 02:23:50 PM
HAL BLAINE, quoted as he boots the lyrical content of the 10 original Pet Sounds SONGS. Michael EDWARD Love couldn't agree more (Waiting For The Day excepted!) {By Eric Harshbarger:}

I've located this Harshbarger person (http://www.ericharshbarger.org/cgi-bin/palindrome_viewer.cgi?00614). Most impressive!


Title: Re: BULL SESSION in THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE verseUS! VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on June 16, 2016, 12:09:26 AM
HAL BLAINE, quoted as he boots the lyrical content of the 10 original Pet Sounds SONGS. Michael EDWARD Love couldn't agree more (Waiting For The Day excepted!) {By Eric Harshbarger:}

I've located this Harshbarger person (http://www.ericharshbarger.org/cgi-bin/palindrome_viewer.cgi?00614). Most impressive!
How does someone who's a WILSONITE at heart, end up editing a multipart series dedicated to Mike Love & VDP?
Anywho, here goes Mike revisiting the BIG SUR Valley Park (God's echo chamber) with his wife: Kim. Thanx for the link, John! I've lifted one more from Mr. EH. (NOT a HALindrome but a VALLEYndrome!) [By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy/Eric Harshbarger:]

                   ³'
            MIKE/Kim
 >dB, re: verb "REVERB'd"<

->Mik' E: "Lov* Parks --- GOD!
Yell: A 'VAN' IN A VALLEY ((ALLEY))(((alley)))
Dogs' krap - " ^WOL", e' Kim!"<-


Title: Re: BULL SESSION in THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE verseUS! VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on June 20, 2016, 12:41:35 AM
Here we have develop'd this haiku-palindromic l o n g-Poem, which is unique and record breaking in but all aspects. John K's excellent work has formed the basis for verses 3,4,5/6,8,10/11/12/13,14,15/16/--/18/19,20 & 26/27! Without HIS input, Mike & VDP are left with precious little more to say (haiku-wise)!
Then it's just poetic justice that *RengaWagneR* should be *starring* in this final installment/episode {By RS/RWR:}
       >NO TO 'NO'                                         [by CenturyDeprived:]
                 '
>'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<<

               ²
       LOVE-VOL.                                             [by Theydon Bois:]

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"<

             ³
       TUT-TUT                                                [by RengaWagneR:]

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."<

                IV
        PARKS#SKRAP                                       [by RengaWagner & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!#
#M.E.Love=vole'M'#
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)#

Best post eva. And I say that in case Mikie's watching...

> KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)<:                {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                     -V-
   ->->"Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... ok! OK!!
       'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

   VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^                        {by RengaWagneR & SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}
                    -VI-
             "S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"<-<-


                           7
 >'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!<                          {by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy}

    ->"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
           Oo ** G..!   ED' won!"<-

                      8                                  {by RengaWagneR}
             'Navy~VAN':

     ->'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek).   I'm ONE
       Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<-
                                  9
>MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)"<              {by CenturyDeprived}

              ->"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
         D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s  (Skrap'd set!)?
                  Ate career   -   'n'  POT!..."<-


[Here comes 5 new verses, featuring the usual suspects together with AL's sons, DOMENIC (Priore), REGgie (Dunbar), , J(asper) DAILEY & MIKE's wife: KIM. Navy~VAN's verses (13+14) are somewhat x-rated; the *Quote* from a Wild Honey-song in the first one, shows that he's still obsessed with Mike's nudity or at least the keel of Mike (as per verse #4)! And the last verse  indicates Mike's obsession with his Cheerleaders (as once reported by AL!)...  BY RengaWagneR:]

                       '°
               [Navy~VAN:]

->->->->"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE?  MATT>
           and ADAM J. - ay!"

                        ''
               [LOVE-vol.:]

          "Eli?         A DJ! :
         ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
          GARY U.?=Guy-rag!
                      '²
          Domenic!   'REG or >
       J. Dailey?   A.J./Ma/Dad/
       'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"

                   XIII
             [Navy-VAN:]

       "TODAY! (?)  NOT! No risk!
  Rap'd V.D.:  "I'd *°** **** °***
*° *** *°* ('* *** ****)"!!"<-<-<-<-
                  XIV
>"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!               [by RengaWagneR:]
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
        Moo b*s IS hard!"<

In the following session, our guys seem to be on friendlier terms? They even exchange their 'speech impairments' !? And naming dog breeds. Starting with the (in)famous in-house sandbox and Brian's Weimaraner-dog: Louie, "doing its Business" in there, together with a Renar(d)-Foxhound/sheepdog (pet-named "Ewes"). Did they really fly in sand from Brazilian Ipanema Beach? Finally, Mike & Kim: Receiving a piano from Van Dyke(!) which he'd gotten from his friend, former W.B.-Boss MO (Ostin) - the sandbox GRAND?                                                    [By RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

            {Navy-VAN:}
                  15
->->"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
       idyll: a Sand* IN!!"

           {MIKE/Kim:}
                16
        "A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" [ed.]! "Dog-nip?
          Si Louie, ami-dog!"

                     17
     ->'Tis swonky L°^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
  - God ONLY Knows ...)  SIT!<-

            {Navy-VAN:}
                  18
       "God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")...   Net-Fox?"

            {MIKE/Kim:}
                 19
   - "O' BAN!!   I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! Mo'?"<-<-

[Now, all the dogs are in there together, including Brian's beagle: 'Banana'. Van Dyke Parks is offered a recording contract (by ^MO Ostin^?) - and walks away! (Haiku-palindrome by RengaWagneR):]

                   ²°
           {Navy~VAN:}

   ->Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
     'Banana'!   "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed<-
[2 more palindromic haiku-verses starring world famous storyteller: H.C. Andersen & BRI/an (NOT to be confused with B.R.I.: Brother Records Inc. here referred to as B.R. ENterprise). By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                      ²'
               Navy~VAN:
          (>and BB' dna)<

           ->"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
       E^Band = er ...  USA!"<-

                    ²²
            MIKE/Kim:

       ->"OK! Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO!  B.R.En*:
       Raw lot, I pack - O'!"<-


[Surf's up in the ORIGINAL VERSION was never completed/released! The same goes for another Brian/Parks-song (66/67): "Sunflower MAIDEN". Parks has long claimed to be the sole Brian-collaborator on Sail On, Sailor. No RAY K., no T.ALMER (or Rieley)? By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                   ²³
            Navy~VAN:

    ->"Star*One {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra'd!
      NO "Maiden"? O' rats!"<-

                  24
    >Parks' S*O*S skrap:<

   ->"N°: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!-
  -o-LIA*S!  NO lia'son ..."<-

Mike "It's OK" Love on his favorite aversion! [by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy:]

                 *25*
            MIKE/Kim:

    ->"OK 'cornfield' in
OK CabinE., 'geni'?: BACK ON!
        Idle I F'N ROCK-o!"<-

M(ike) & D(yke)  "God's exes"?! - finally 'united (in *drome) under God'... By RengaWagneR (ACTUALLY using the word 'palindromes' IN a palindrome - DRUMROLL, please):

                     XXVI
                Mike & Dyke:

        ->->Pals! Eno/N*ro:
MONO! One last one: 'Palindromes>
            unite God's exes!'

                     XXVII

          Do get in! Use M'**
or D***, NIL ape!! Not sale, no?
 O NO mor*, NONE! {*slap*}<-<-


HAL BLAINE, quoted as he boots the lyrical content of the 10 original Pet Sounds SONGS. Michael EDWARD Love couldn't agree more (Waiting For The Day excepted!) {By Eric Harshbarger:}

                    XXVIII
>L.A., EDWARDian aid? Raw deal!:<

       -> ->"Hal? A renegade!
Revered, HAL BLAINE'd: 'Era's TEN
        [nosy Hal boots TOO>

                    XXIX

      blah-y!] SONNETS are
    denial-blah'd er... EVER, Ed!'
            A general AH!"<-<-

                     ³°

    >Tony A/Navy~Van (a Y-not)<                           [Haiku-D(enny)-Rome(o)by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy]

->Tony/D.Parks: "PET SOUNDS
        as D*N*'*' U'~o' step!
     Skrap'd *°°**'* Y-not?"<-

HAL BLAINE, quoted as he boots the lyrical content of the 10 original Pet Sounds SONGS. Michael EDWARD Love couldn't agree more (Waiting For The Day excepted!) {By Eric Harshbarger:}

I've located this Harshbarger person (http://www.ericharshbarger.org/cgi-bin/palindrome_viewer.cgi?00614). Most impressive!
How does someone who's a WILSONITE at heart, end up editing a multipart series dedicated to Mike Love & VDP?
Anywho, here goes Mike revisiting the BIG SUR Valley Park (God's echo chamber) with his wife: Kim. Thanx for the link, John! I've lifted one more from Mr. EH. (NOT a HALindrome but a VALLEYndrome!) [By SMiLErPal'dromerBoy/Eric Harshbarger:]

                   ³'
            MIKE/Kim
 >dB, re: verb "REVERB'd"<

->Mik' E: "Lov* Parks --- GOD!
Yell: A 'VAN' IN A VALLEY ((ALLEY))(((alley)))
Dogs' krap - " ^WOL", e' Kim!"<-

                   ³²
           MIKE & DYKE:

    ->->"Find on*s PAL IN D'

ROtterdaM?  Ho-hum.  Raw's IN:

       'Ho', f'k'n 'ho', J°**!

                          ³³
        RengaWagneR = JOHN K ?

Föhn IS warm!  Uh~oh ... 'MAD' rettor'd!

       NIL ap*s ?    Nod*'n  IF !"<-<-

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Title: Re: BULL SESSION in THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE verseUS! VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
Post by: JK on June 20, 2016, 01:16:59 AM
Wow. I've been sent off (palindromically speaking) in fine style! If you've finished, perhaps you (or I) could line up all 33 verses in a single post, like I did with the best of my palindromes... 


Title: Re: BULL SESSION in THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE verseUS! VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on June 20, 2016, 01:28:17 AM
Sounds great, John! PLEASE do that and in YOUR normal formats: cursives/bold/fonts and all that jazz!


Title: Re: BULL SESSION in THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE verseUS! VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
Post by: JK on June 20, 2016, 02:10:23 AM
All verses by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy aka Rasmus Skotte

With help from (in order of appearance) CenturyDeprived, Theydon Bois, RengaWagneR aka john k and Eric Harshbarger


I
NO TO 'NO'
                                       
                
'SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"

II
LOVE-VOL
                                           

Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as skrap!"

III
TUT-TUT  
                                             

Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ******* ASK 'im .."

IV
PARKS#SKRAP  
                                   

debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!
M.E.Love=vole'M'
EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)

V
KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)
               

Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  ~ O M ~... ok! OK!!
'He'?:  * Male Ego!"

VI
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^
                       

"S.I.P. is (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama? ... I WON!"

VII                            
'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!


"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
word-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?;  B*i ?;  V.D.?
Oo ** G..! ED' won!"

VIII                                
'Navy~VAN


'Dog', so REharden,
o' Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)
                                   9
IX
MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)
     

"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
D.Parks' SMiLEr-prelim*s  (Skrap'd set!)?
Ate career   -   'n'  POT!..."

X
Navy~VAN


"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE?  MATT>
and ADAM J. - ay!"

XI                       ''
LOVE-vol.


"Eli?         A DJ! :
ROGER C., I Nemo'd!
GARY U.?=Guy-rag!

XII

Domenic!   'REG or >
J. Dailey?   A.J./Ma/Dad/
'Nat' (* tame vole). KIM !"

XIII
Navy-VAN


"TODAY! (?)  NOT! No risk!
Rap'd V.D.:  "I'd *°** **** °***
*° *** *°* ('* *** ****)"!!"

XIV

"D* 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!              
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
Moo b*s IS hard!"

XV
Navy-VAN
                 

"O' 'MONA'. Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
idyll: a Sand* IN!!"

XVI
MIKE/Kim


"A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" [ed.]! "Dog-nip?
Si Louie, ami-dog!"

XVII

'Tis swonky L^^'^ ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
- God ONLY Knows ...)  SIT!

XVIII            
Navy-VAN


"God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
Ami ("Ewes")...   Net-Fox?"

XIX
MIKE/Kim


"O' BAN!!   I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! A piano! Mo'?"

XX          
Navy~VAN


Defray 'Spot', deb'nair
'Banana'!   "Mi Manana -
Brian! ... BED?" 'Topsy' arfed

XXI
Navy~VAN
(and BB' dna)


"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo. B*' = H.C.A.!
E^Band = er ...  USA!"

XXII
MIKE/Kim


"OK! Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO!  B.R.En*:
Raw lot, I pack - O'!"

XXIII            
Navy~VAN


"Star*One {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra'd!
NO "Maiden"? O' rats!"

XXIV
Parks' S*O*S skrap


"N°: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!-
-o-LIA*S!  NO lia'son ..."

XXV            
MIKE/Kim


"OK 'cornfield' in
o' CabinE., 'geni'! (BACON ?!).
Idle I: F***'N ROCK - O!"

XXVI
Mike & Dyke


Pals! Eno/N*ro:
MONO! One last one: 'Palindromes
unite God's exes!'

XXVII

Do get in! Use M'**
or D***, NIL ape!! Not sale, no?
O NO mor*, NONE! {*slap*}

XXVIII
L.A., EDWARDian aid? Raw deal!


"Hal? A renegade!
Revered, HAL BLAINE'd: 'Era's TEN
[nosy Hal boots TOO

XXIX

blah-y!] SONNETS are
denial-blah'd er... EVER, Ed!'
A general AH!"

XXX
Tony A/Navy~Van (a Y-not)
                         

Tony/D.Parks: "PET SOUNDS
as D*N*'*' U'~o' step!
Skrap'd *°°**'* Y-not?"

XXXI
MIKE/Kim
dB, re: verb "REVERB'd"


Mik' E: "Lov* Parks --- GOD!
Yell: A 'VAN' IN A VALLEY ((ALLEY))(((alley)))
Dogs' krap - " ^WOL", e' Kim!"

XXXII
MIKE & DYKE


"Find on*s PAL IN D'
ROtterdaM?  Ho-hum.  Raw's IN:
'Ho', f'k'n 'ho', J°**!

XXXIII

RengaWagneR = JOHN K ?
Föhn IS warm!  Uh~oh ... 'MAD' rettor'd!
NIL ap*s ? Nod*'n  IF !"


Title: Re: BULL SESSION in THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE verseUS! VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on June 20, 2016, 02:17:23 AM
SMOOTH, John. I'd like to think of this as OUR Special (74th) birthday present to BRIAN DOUGLAS WILSON! Though not actually highlighted in the POEM, Brian is  still the invaluable MIDDLE MAN between the two AND their antics!


Title: Re: BULL SESSION in THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE verseUS! VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on June 20, 2016, 11:40:37 PM
All verses by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy aka Rasmus Skotte

With help from (in order of appearance) CenturyDeprived (1+9), Theydon Bois (2), RengaWagneR aka john k on the rest  (bar 'dedication', #o-0-o, 7,17,21-25 & 28-31) and Eric Harshbarger (28/29+31).

LOVE/PARKS: Skrape-Vol.                    {haiku-palindromic long-poem starring MIKE EDWARD LOVE & VAN DYKE PARKS and dedicated to the following fine folks

SEE COMPLETE UPDATED VERSION AT THE BOTTOM OF THIS PAGE !!


Title: Re: BULL SESSION in THE HAIKU-DROME: MIKE verseUS! VAN DYKE (by CD/TB/jk/rs):
Post by: rasmus skotte on June 23, 2016, 06:52:39 AM
Please use the ^^blue version^^ above, since that's the most complete one! HOW the video is done, is entirely up to your Imagination. As a live poetry slammin' /rap/a cartoon/comic book/stop-motion/stills/a haiku-song, sung or whatever!
The two LAST verses may be left out! Please SHOW a frame at some point in the video, mentioning the credits printed above. It's very important for me to give credit where it's due!
Finally, post a link to your masterpiece from HERE, please!!! (Interpretations if needed, can be found within the version shown furthest down on 'page one']

AND HAVE FUN WITH IT :) !!


Title: Re: YOUR summer challenge? MAKE A YOUTUBE-VIDEO out of the MIKE vs VDP-poem
Post by: rasmus skotte on July 19, 2016, 01:41:29 AM
Can't wait to see a video like this a-happening! ...
And just perhaps it will (?) somehow, someday - sooner or later ...


Title: Re: YOUR summer challenge? MAKE A YOUTUBE-VIDEO out of the MIKE vs VDP-poem
Post by: JK on July 19, 2016, 02:40:12 AM
Can't wait to see a video like this a-happening! ...
And just perhaps it will (?) somehow, someday - sooner or later ...

Rasmus, I've seen a vid of yours somewhere on YouTube. Are you up for this? As for me, I can barely spell viddeo (vidio?) let alone make one, lol... 


Title: Re: YOUR summer challenge? MAKE A YOUTUBE-VIDEO out of the MIKE vs VDP-poem
Post by: thorgil on July 19, 2016, 08:41:11 AM
I imagined a little exchange between fans, respectively, of Beatles/BBs and of Rhythm & Blues:

"Revol., Brian?"
"Na, I RB lover."


Title: Re: YOUR summer challenge? MAKE A YOUTUBE-VIDEO out of the MIKE vs VDP-poem
Post by: rasmus skotte on July 20, 2016, 07:14:25 AM
Can't wait to see a video like this a-happening! ...
And just perhaps it will (?) somehow, someday - sooner or later ...

Rasmus, I've seen a vid of yours somewhere on YouTube. Are you up for this? As for me, I can barely spell viddeo (vidio?) let alone make one, lol... 

No, sorry. I've made my share of Beach Boys videos & movies! ("Daftfilm")...


Title: Re: YOUR summer challenge? MAKE A YOUTUBE-VIDEO out of the MIKE vs VDP-poem
Post by: rasmus skotte on July 20, 2016, 07:30:20 AM
I imagined a little exchange between fans, respectively, of Beatles/BBs and of Rhythm & Blues:

"Revol., Brian?"
"Na, I RB lover."

Thanx Thorgil! A Little naughty extension, if you allow:

"Puti; 'Revolver', Brian?"
"Na, I: RB [Rev...]-lover!" [It Up]


Title: Re: YOUR summer challenge? MAKE A YOUTUBE-VIDEO out of the MIKE vs VDP-poem
Post by: JK on July 20, 2016, 07:49:15 AM
I imagined a little exchange between fans, respectively, of Beatles/BBs and of Rhythm & Blues:

"Revol., Brian?"
"Na, I RB lover."

Thanx Thorgil! A Little naughty extension, if you allow:

"Puti; 'Revolver', Brian?"
"Na, I: RB [Rev...]-lover!" [It Up]

Reminds me of one of my Love You 'dromes:

Al: "Let's Put it up Stella!"  :lol


Title: Re: YOUR summer challenge? MAKE A YOUTUBE-VIDEO out of the MIKE vs VDP-poem
Post by: rasmus skotte on August 05, 2016, 02:20:23 AM
Well, it doesn't NEED to a video. It could just as well be a comic book treatment based on paper and/or screen-work. I recall Andrew Hickey once doing a project like that! It could make a great item celebrating the upcoming *50* years anniversary of SMiLE/Good Vibrations. Perhaps I'm hoping too much - yet again ? Only time will tell ...


Title: Re: YOUR summer challenge? MAKE A YOUTUBE-VIDEO out of the MIKE vs VDP-poem
Post by: JK on August 05, 2016, 03:51:14 AM
Well, it doesn't NEED to a video. It could just as well be a comic book treatment based on paper and/or screen-work. I recall Andrew Hickey once doing a project like that! It could make a great item celebrating the upcoming *50* years anniversary of SMiLE/Good Vibrations. Perhaps I'm hoping too much - yet again ? Only time will tell ...

I'd love to help out, Rasmus, but I'm a simple soul and visuals of this kind are utterly beyond me...


Title: Re: YOUR summer challenge? MAKE A YOUTUBE-VIDEO out of the MIKE vs VDP-poem
Post by: rasmus skotte on August 05, 2016, 05:55:16 AM
Don't worry about it, jk! You've done more than enough  to make the project what it is already - which imo is too good a thing, NOT to be expanded into something else! And the talent(s) are out there,  to be sure!


Title: Re: YOUR summer challenge? MAKE A YOUTUBE-VIDEO out of the MIKE vs VDP-poem
Post by: rasmus skotte on August 06, 2016, 02:41:37 AM
[EDIT: I wasn`t happy with my verse 25. So I`ve simplified it to make it a bit stronger. Also on verse 30: D*N*** can now mean either "denial" (with reference to the preceding verse) OR still Dennis]


Title: Re: YOUR summer challenge? MAKE A YOUTUBE-VIDEO out of the MIKE vs VDP-poem
Post by: rasmus skotte on August 20, 2016, 02:07:50 AM
Overnite sensation! Just 'found' an outtake from the great LOVE/PARKS Poetry Album. The one verse about Mike calling Van Dyke's SMiLE lyrics: "Acid Alliterations"! (and thereby forming an AA all by himself [*=possible Diogenes-reference]):

>"PARKS' ACIDic Al-
literations ! No, it 'ARE'! ...
`till acid-I cask*rap!"


Title: Please, do NOT open until 26/12! Boxing Day present for SANDBOXers & outsiders:
Post by: rasmus skotte on September 26, 2016, 08:16:13 AM
ok


Title: Re: The LONGEST BEACH BOYS ODE in HISTORY! Starring MIKE & DYKE (page ² in trueblue)
Post by: rasmus skotte on October 13, 2016, 02:18:56 AM
Well, I thought that Mike once knew a lady named "Kim". Don't know where I pick'd that up(?) But it doesn't seem to fly, so I've corrected it ...

And another detail: the first words of verse 15 "O[h] MONA"--- I could only relate them to the Love You song-title. Now I discovered  those words as part of an U R My Sunshine/O.M.P. illustration by Frank Holmes - this MONA being Mona Lisa (which painting, Brian & Marilyn had a 'reproduction' of, printed on  drapes I guess - back in the SMiLE days): EVEN BETTER ! Talk about a 'work in progress' (?)...


Title: Re: The LONGEST BEACH BOYS ODE in HISTORY! Starring MIKE & DYKE (page ² in trueblue)
Post by: rasmus skotte on December 11, 2016, 05:37:23 AM
'Tis time for me to make amends: Those haikus I've written have NOTHING in common with the classical haikus from the old japanese masters (apart from the numbers and distribution of syllables!). We're talking BASHO (e.g his famous FROG-haiku), ISSA & BUSON. The best I can do is to quote three haiku+-palindromes, dedicated to each of them, as written by DEAN BLEHERT:

>Is "I" true to Basho?

Hero Frog ? I've vigor, for ... eh?

Oh saboteur - 'tis I<


>Was I  a s s i n i n e?

Meek? - Nay! O no, YANKEE men!

In   I s s a   I  saw<


>Eh? Bad-rap Buson at arts!

"Buson - no substrata ..."

No sub-par dab, he!<



Title: Re: The LONGEST BEACH BOYS ODE in HISTORY! Starring MIKE & DYKE (page ² in trueblue)
Post by: rasmus skotte on December 12, 2016, 03:54:12 AM
"Batman Faces Palindrome":

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N5F66JwLq90

This is how I would like my 'sardonic verses' visualized on video: Mike Love versus Van Dyke Parks. Only, in this version they would both appear good AND evil and BOTH be speaking palindromix! Anyone game for this stop/motion lego-like challenge?



Title: >L*O*V*E/P*A*R*K*S*s: Y*O! B*B*O*Y*S/ S*K*R*A*P*E-V*O*L.<
Post by: rasmus skotte on December 16, 2016, 12:53:51 AM

All verses by SMiLErPal'dromerBoy aka Rasmus Skotte

With help from (in order of appearance) CenturyDeprived (1+9), Theydon Bois (2), RengaWagneR aka john k on the rest  (bar 'dedication', 'antipasti', 7,17,21-25 & 28-31 & epilog), Eric Harshbarger (28/29+31) and Will Thomas (# °°),

>L*O*V*E/P*A*R*K*S*s: "Y*O  B*B*O*Y*S   S*K*R*A*P*E-V*O*L."<                    {haiku-palindromic long-poem starring MIKE EDWARD LOVE & VAN DYKE PARKS (and to quote Batman on this: they're "STILL-TALKING-IN-SENTENCES-THAT-ARE-SPELLED-THE-SAME-FORWARD-AND-BACKWARD"). Dedicated to the following fine folks:}

>Wolla, B*'^* DOUGLAS/
Yo B.BOYS/AL/G^** U. !!
(od*ball, o  W'**°*)<

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>a*n*t*i*p*a*s*t*i :      [it's a pit, NA?]<

o - 0 - o

°°
>Tao, BW ! (oh SO gone)
A gassy oBESE BOY's saga,
e': 'NO-go  Showboat'<

°'
>HEROES AND VILLAINS
U.S. N° I² , all !   "I -
(V.D.):  NA$E  OR --- eh?<

°²
>'Twas ol' India`s aid
'YOGI/GURU GIG !'  O Y ---
dia said: NIL/0 saw't !"<

°³
>PARKS: "ACIDic Al-
literations !? NO, 'it ARE'!...
'till ' acid-I'  cask-rap!<


I
>NO TO 'NO'
                                       
                
SMiLE mono mixes?
a.k.a. sex I'm on, O!"
M(e)L: " I'm SO not on!"<

II
LOVE-VOL
                                           

>Parks says: "S.I.P?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a
la) pissy as s/krap!"<

III
TUT-TUT  
                                             

>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-TUTs 'KRAP DVD'?!
I ****'** ASK 'im .."<

IV
PARKS#SKRAP  
                                   

>#debut-NUDE-us,MIKEe!
#M.E.Love(dr.?)dev.ole*M
#EEK,I'mSUED!(un-tubed)<

V
KOKOM'Over, Rev. OM!(ok-ok)
               

>Now, I AM 'a ham'!
(:U.S.).  °~ O M ~°... ok! OK!!
'He'?:  ^ Male EGO !"

VI
VD PARKS: "KRAP'd '-V-'^^
                       

"S.I.P.  IS (O
** Gee!) lam* eh! KOKOMO?
 Sumahama?? ... I WON!"<

VII                            
'Rev. EDward' 'DRAW'd ... EVER!


>"Now, de GOOD VIBRATIONS'
WORD-rows, N° I:) T.A---r ?; ² B*i ?; ³ V.D.?
Oo ** G--! ED' won!"<

VIII                                
'Navy~VAN


>'Dog', so REharden,
o Mike! ('Ego' geek). I'm ONE
Dr. AH!  (Eros-god)<
                                  
IX
MIKE'd: 'ONE DURRIE-'heir'?  Rude, NO! (De'k *im)
     

>"Top 'n' reer:  ACETATES?
D.Parks' "SMiLEr-prelim's"  (:Skrap'd set!)??
Ate career   -   ^n'  POT!..."<

X
Navy~VAN


>"Did V.D. PARKS iron
TONY A[dot]/MIKE LOVE?  MATT>
and ADAM J. - ay'!"

XI                      
LOVE-vol.


E.L./ I:         "a DJ ! :
ROGER C., I 'NEMOd'!
GARY U.?=Guy-rag!

XII

DOMENIC!   'REG* or >
J. Dailey?   A.J./Ma/Dad/
'Nat'(: ^ tame vole) KI~°M~ !"

XIII
Navy-VAN


"TODAY!" (?)  NOT! No risk!
Rap'd V.D.:  "I'd *°** **** °***
*° *** *°* ('* *** ****)"!!<

XIV

>"D° 'RAH-SIS-BOOM-BA' her ?!              
'Mac', I TORE ErotiCAM {rehab!}
Moo b*s IS hard!"<

XV
Navy-VAN
                 

>"O' MONA"! Ipanema's >
gargantuan "O" grades U.S.-
idyll: a Sand*°* IN!!

XVI
MIKE/°k I ^m


"A box of tense WEI-
MARANER ?... Nuts!" [Ed!] "Dog-nip?
Si Louie, ami-dog!"

XVII

'TIS swonky L°*'* ! NO,
dog!! (god-dammit-I'm-mad, dog
- God ONLY Knows ...)  SIT!

XVIII            
Navy-VAN


"God, I'm a-e-i-u-o~
lisping. Oddest! Un Renar'-,
ami (:"Ewes")...   Net-'FOX'?"

XIX
MIKE (°k I ^m)


"O BAN!!   I'd NASALLY
disused argonaut NAG-rags,
Amen! "A p'^n°"! Mo'?"<

XX          
Navy~VAN


>Defray 'Spot', deb°nair
'Banana'!   "Mi Manana -
Brian! ° BED ??" 'Topsy' arfed<

XXI
Navy~VAN
(and BB' dna)


>"A sure dna?
BEACH BOYS' ? Yo: B*' = H.C.A.!
E^Band = er ...  USA!"<

XXII
MIKE (°k I ^m)


>"OK! Capitol,
WarnerB. - o' Col. ? LOCO!  B.R.En*:
Raw lot, I pack - O!"<

XXIII            
Navy~VAN


>"STAR*ONE {"Diamond"
Art}: SURF'S UP=Opus frustra**d!
NO "Maiden"? O rats!"<

XXIV
Parks' S*O*S skrap


>"N°: SAIL ON, SAILOR!
Ray; Almer (re: M.L.)? a YARR!!-
-o-LIA*S!  NO lia'son ..."<

XXV            
MIKE (°k I ^m)


>"OK 'cornfield' in
OK CabinE., 'geni'?:  BACK ON!
Idle I F*n ROCK-o"<


XXVI
Mike OR Dyke


>Pals, eNO#  *drome!
No? One LAST one: 'PALINDROMES
UNITE GOD's EX'es!'

XXVII

Do get in! Use M'**
or D***, NIL ape!! Not sale, no?
One mor* DONE! {*slap*}<

XXVIII
L.A., EDWARDian aid? Raw deal!


>"Hal? A renegade!
Revered, HAL BLAINE'd: 'Era's TEN
[nosy Hal boots TOO

XXIX

blah-y!] SONNETS are
denial-blah'd er... EVER, Ed!'
A general AH!"<

XXX
Tony A/Navy~Van (a Y-not)
                         

>Tony/D.Parks: "PET SOUNDS
as D*n'^*/U'~o' step!
Skrap'd **°°*'** Y-not?"<

XXXI
MIKE (°k I ^m)
dB, re: verb "REVERB'd"


>Mike E: "l o v' 'parks' --- GOD!
Yell: A 'VAN' IN A VALLEY ((ALLEY))(((alley)))
Dogs' krap - " ^W.O.L", EEK!, I ^m!"<

XXXII
MIKE & DYKE


>"Find on*s PAL IN D'
ROtterdaM?  Ho-hum.  Raw's IN?:
'Ho', f'k'n 'ho', J°**!

XXXIII

RengaWagneR = JOHN K ?
Föhn IS warm!  Uh~oh ... 'MAD' rettor'd!
NIL a*ps ? Nod*'n  IF !"<

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>EPILOGUE.  U  GO  lip - e' !<
a.k.a.
>d*e*s*s*e*r*t*s:        (NON-stressed)<

>Dyke/Mik*AIKUS aka
war: *DROME*em or draw aka
suki'aki / ME, Kyd!<


#40{*9*}

>Of FOUR-0-NIN: L°*e !
'Lyricist'? [sic]  'I R'!   Y, L.?
"El Nino, R U OFF?"   O !<

>Loop~de~Loop~de~Loops:
Step~on  SMiLE~kelims!  (no~PetS)
 (spool, Ed!~pool Ed, POOL!)<

>{*FULFILLIN*NESS' NINT*N°
FINALE?  élan if  N°T'N=
in ^ss e*, n NILL: I  fluf*}<

                 o~0~o

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>{moi ? a dane: rasmus
skotte ~ na, netto k^s* sums?
- are nada!   I °~om~°}<
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Title: Re: BOXING DAY PRESENT for SANDBOXers & outsiders:
Post by: rasmus skotte on December 30, 2016, 03:33:01 AM
And so my SANDBOXing days are gone - henceforthwith. "Oh so gone". HAPPY 2017!!!

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rasmusskotte@hotmail.com