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Title: Susie Cincinnati new vocals + backing track!
Post by: Don't Back Down on March 15, 2006, 08:52:29 AM
http://s52.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2C7CDZ5CIPVAZ1JGAZ1QH6IJ2U

Thanks to Barry for providing the backing track. He has to finish the end of the song, but here's what we have going on so far.

Not final vocals, but gives you all an idea.

idigworms asked me to overdub a sax solo after the slide guitar solo on his "Little Bird" submission and we want to know what you all think:

http://s52.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2IWD43TXUAUYF2I989V5NRQWAF

Thanks for listening!

-OMP


Title: Re: Susie Cincinnati new vocals + backing track!
Post by: PMcC on March 15, 2006, 03:44:34 PM
OMP, ....the vocals need more work. Is the instrumental even in your key? you are singing so low on this one as to almost miss the notes completely. Did you discuss with Barry what key would be comfortable for your vocal?, because he could have easily transposed it on his keyboard. I was looking for some harmony, and didn't hear it, but I realize it's an early take. But something must be done about the song not being in your key for this song to work the way it's supposed to...this is just constructive criticism, my opinion, and stuff like that


Title: Re: Susie Cincinnati new vocals + backing track!
Post by: Don't Back Down on March 15, 2006, 04:28:43 PM
No worries man. Here is a redo on the vocals:

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1VPIT7XW7X30K32TSGH3FNUENY

Let me know how that sounds if it works better with the track

Thanks for the feedback!

The backing vocals need to be worked on again due to the backing track being a tad faster