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Title: another new song Post by: variable2 on July 29, 2010, 09:33:06 AM called 'used to be somebody'
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P3t1syBdGfg http://www.alastairottesen.com Title: Re: another new song Post by: the captain on July 29, 2010, 08:33:29 PM Nice. And that "bah bah bah" refrain ... going to flesh it out with lyrics? Perhaps oddly, I like it wordless. Piano sounds great.
Title: Re: another new song Post by: variable2 on July 30, 2010, 05:55:58 AM nah, not going to add lyrics, i like it the way it is
Title: Re: another new song Post by: hypehat on July 30, 2010, 06:16:25 AM That's a real sweet song. I too like the 'ba-ba's, don't you dare change them.
Title: Re: another new song Post by: Mr. Cohen on July 30, 2010, 06:57:59 PM You're the best songwriter on here, I think. You have a distinctive sound and your chord changes are very well done. They are timed just right, which can actually be the trickiest part of writing a truly good pop song. Your vocals are good and there's a sweet sense of melancholia in the melodies. However, I have two complaints about your videos:
1. You should make sure that your face is obscured by your all of the time, instead just most of the time. It adds a cool mystique. 2. Let your band members play more! What are you, Paul McCartney? Title: Re: another new song Post by: variable2 on July 30, 2010, 09:07:07 PM You're the best songwriter on here, I think. You have a distinctive sound and your chord changes are very well done. They are timed just right, which can actually be the trickiest part of writing a truly good pop song. Your vocals are good and there's a sweet sense of melancholia in the melodies. However, I have two complaints about your videos: 1. You should make sure that your face is obscured by your all of the time, instead just most of the time. It adds a cool mystique. 2. Let your band members play more! What are you, Paul McCartney? thanks 1. what? 2. what band members? |