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Title: "My Intentions"
Post by: the captain on May 05, 2008, 02:30:16 PM
I just posted "My Intentions," which is almost certainly one of very few songs ever to open with the line "Dance with me, you syphilitic tramp," at:

http://myspace.com/thebeaumondes

Not-tuned guitars and banjo along with some half-assed melodica and bass? Hell yeah.


Title: Re: \
Post by: Aegir on May 07, 2008, 05:53:51 PM
The vocal melody, too, is uninteresting and the vocals seem weak.

But the track is killer. I love the melodica lines. The guitar almost seems percussive.


Title: Re: \
Post by: the captain on May 08, 2008, 01:28:51 PM
I love the vocal melody, so I have to pass on that comment. In fact, it is in the same general vibe as another one I think you specifically noted not liking, the guitar-and-vocal waltz. I like both of those melodies a lot, thinking they well-fit a certain kind of traditional music vibe.  But I agree with you about the vocal performance. On one hand, I didnt want it sounding polished at all and so I didn't want to work hard on it (going for the aforementioned half-ass sound). But the result is just that it doesn't sound very good (as opposed to drunkenly charming). And the low part is out of my comfortable range. The more-centered guitar (the one playing arpeggios) was almost percussive, really plucked hard and also EQ'd oddly.


Title: Re: \
Post by: Aegir on May 11, 2008, 03:10:39 PM
Actually, I liked the waltz melody, just not the vocals.


Title: Re: \
Post by: the captain on May 11, 2008, 07:35:30 PM
Oh, my bad memory strikes again, then. As long as you found something to not like, though...  ;)