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Post by: zachrwolfe on October 30, 2015, 08:11:44 AM


Title: Re: If I Fell (Beatles Cover)
Post by: feelsflow on October 30, 2015, 09:59:12 AM
Very nice on first listen.  It could use someone with more of a bass voice in the harmonies.  Or you can go lower than that, right?  I'll listen again.  Are you double tracking the lead?  Musically it's great.

-Will


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Post by: zachrwolfe on October 30, 2015, 10:24:38 AM


Title: Re: If I Fell (Beatles Cover)
Post by: feelsflow on October 30, 2015, 10:47:06 AM
Okay, gave it a couple more plays.  It's not the bass voice.  You are a little too high on two words: pain and vain.  Making them sound a bit strained.

Man, don't think I've ever been critical on any of your stuff.  I would like it more if you would put in an insert on those two words.  You do each word twice, both times going just a bit too high.  Otherwise you hit all the rest very well.

You're on the road to becoming a recording artist.  You should post some of your own writing.  What I've heard of it is very good.  I've been really busy the past three months, and haven't had as much time to listen to all the SoundCloud musicians.  Now that summer is over I will have more time indoors.  I've got a backlog on commenting on some of the other stuff I've been playing.  I'll get to it soon.  -Will


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Post by: zachrwolfe on October 30, 2015, 12:47:34 PM


Title: Re: If I Fell (Beatles Cover)
Post by: JK on October 30, 2015, 01:41:12 PM
Lovely, Zach. I'd say five out of five. And now your "Don't Worry, Baby" is playing. Followed by a version by The Bronze Bananas which with all due respect doesn't hold a candle to yours. Following in Will's footsteps, I must check out your own compositions. Man, you're one talented musician!


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Post by: zachrwolfe on October 31, 2015, 12:28:04 AM