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Title: The return of our Beach Boys-inspired haiku, limerick & palindrome TOME...
Post by: rasmus skotte on October 20, 2015, 02:59:51 AM
Word level palindromes:

>SMiLE~y SMiLE<

>20/20<

>CALIFORNIA SAGA: California<


Title: Re: The return of our Beach Boys-inspired haiku, limerick & palindrome TOME...
Post by: doinnothin on October 20, 2015, 03:38:45 AM
Never heard of a word level palindrome, but:

Fun, Fun, Fun
Cindy Oh Cindy
Dance Dance Dance


Title: Re: The return of our Beach Boys-inspired haiku, limerick & palindrome TOME...
Post by: rasmus skotte on October 20, 2015, 04:01:43 AM
And a haiku-palindromic (5/7/5) TRIPtych-TRIP:

>AL's L.A.<                                                       [by RangeRoverA1/EttoksSumsar]

>'A Casual Look'(?)
Alan á la KOOL L.A.
(u.s.a./c a.)<
             ~
>LOVE-VOL.<                                                    [by Theydon Bois/Ettoks Sumsar]

>Parks says: "S.I.P.?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (á
la) pissy as skrap!"<
              ~
->>NO TO 'NO'<                                                [by CenturyDeprived/EttoksSumsar]

SMiLE mono mixes(?)
- a.k.a. sex I'm on, O'
M(e)L: "I'm SO not on!<-


Title: Re: The return of our Beach Boys-inspired haiku, limerick & palindrome TOME...
Post by: rasmus skotte on October 22, 2015, 06:46:56 AM
['Pet' dog in in-house sandbox 'drome:]

"Banana! - BANANA!!!  B-..."


Title: Re: The return of our Beach Boys-inspired haiku, limerick & palindrome TOME...
Post by: rasmus skotte on October 25, 2015, 02:50:21 AM
Somehow even the simplest and silliest Beach Boys-palindromes appear more 3-dimensional and classy i.m.h.o. when molded into haiku-dromes or - in the following case: senryu-palindromes (3/3/3)...

Jukka HAS tried his hand on a G.O.K. palindrome: >God Only Knows' wonka "L" no-dog<. I'll flip it over for my #2. (Sw*nky-L is for Louie!). So without 'furthur' a do(g), here comes the ->GODDAMMIT-I'M-MAD, DOG<- TRIPtych-TRIP:

          I
>Do step ON...

- SMiLE-kelims

"NO PetS"!? Od'...

        II
>'Sw*nky-L...

NO, dog! ~ God...

only-knows<

       III
>Banana!

BANANA!!!

Banana, B-...<