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Title: Feedback on my hip-hop band's new song? Post by: Letsgoawayforawhile on April 15, 2013, 07:23:44 PM Just wondering if I could get some feedback.
Thanks a million! https://soundcloud.com/godspeedjoshua/sycamore Title: Re: Feedback on my hip-hop band's new song? Post by: seltaeb1012002 on April 15, 2013, 07:42:59 PM Niiice.
Vocals sound on point. Performances are tight. Only criticisms I have.. I feel like the verses should be more sparse, and choruses heavier. That's more of a personal thing, it could work either way. I would've liked to hear a better transition into the 1st rap verse. Maybe just a melody line of some sort. Also a hotter mix might give the recording more life. I could hear a dope electro/pop remix to this. Nice work, overall. Definitely a cool vibe. Title: Re: Feedback on my hip-hop band's new song? Post by: Letsgoawayforawhile on April 16, 2013, 04:32:30 AM Niiice. Vocals sound on point. Performances are tight. Only criticisms I have.. I feel like the verses should be more sparse, and choruses heavier. That's more of a personal thing, it could work either way. I would've liked to hear a better transition into the 1st rap verse. Maybe just a melody line of some sort. Also a hotter mix might give the recording more life. I could hear a dope electro/pop remix to this. Nice work, overall. Definitely a cool vibe. Thanks for the feedback! We're not totally done with it, so I'm sure I could still make some changes to it. It's not mastered or really done being mixed either, so hopefully it turns out a little better at least. Title: Re: Feedback on my hip-hop band's new song? Post by: Letsgoawayforawhile on April 16, 2013, 04:38:11 AM Niiice. Vocals sound on point. Performances are tight. Only criticisms I have.. I feel like the verses should be more sparse, and choruses heavier. That's more of a personal thing, it could work either way. I would've liked to hear a better transition into the 1st rap verse. Maybe just a melody line of some sort. Also a hotter mix might give the recording more life. I could hear a dope electro/pop remix to this. Nice work, overall. Definitely a cool vibe. Also, if you care to listen, here's another new one. This one's still unfinished. I still have to record another singing verse, and I still want to work on the background vocals. https://soundcloud.com/godspeedjoshua/flesh-and-spirit |