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Limerix, palindromes, slim haikus & slam Sliwo*s:
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Any kind form or shape - you're welcome to come! Also non-BB topics will do very nicely!
[Hopefully without me getting up people's noses this time around. I'll keep a low(er) profile to that end indeed ...]
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Re: 'A TEENAGE OPERA TO GOD' New haikus/limericks/palindromes...
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Brian DID mention "a Teenage SYMPHONY TO God" (=SMiLE), actually. But since there was some kind of libretto involved, why not call it an opera?
Exactly what did he have in mind? We only need to read his (revised) message backwards to find out - in the following haiku-palindrome: An opera á la 'The Tales of [E.T.A.] Hoffmann'?:
>'A Teenage Opera
To God? DO got "arepo"!
E.g.: an e-E.T.A.'<
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Re: New haikus/limericks/palindromes unite GODs sexes ...
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April 25, 2017, 06:21:15 AM »
Limerick-palindrome RE-devellopped from >Mr.K/SkRm<:
>Sex-e-PALINDROMES unite GODs EXes
An integral EVIL -- flexes
Ex-elf: LIVE LargE-t¤nin
AS "EXes" DO-GET-IN!
Use M.O.Rd. ~ nil APEXes!<
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Re: New haikus/limericks/palindromes unite GODs sexes ...
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What are you smoking?
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Re: New haikus/limericks/palindromes unite GODs sexes ...
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Quote from: SMiLE Brian on April 25, 2017, 06:27:35 AM
What are you smoking?
>A 'smok' - I ?
"Smokin", I ??
Komsi-komsa!!<
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Re: New haikus/limericks/palindromes unite GODs sexes ...
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Well played sir!
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And production aside, I’d so much rather hear a 14 year old David Marks shred some guitar on Chug-a-lug than hear a 51 year old Mike Love sing about bangin some chick in a swimming pool.-rab2591
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Re: New haikus/limericks/palindromes unite GODs sexes ...
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A haiku-palindRHYME dedicated to the late Merle Haggard (& to Beach Boys` version of his Muskogee-song):
>A smOKI' [smok'd] FROM
MUSKOKEE? EEK! Ok-SUM:
Morf'd? = `komSI-KOMsa' ...<
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Re: New haikus/limericks/palindromes unite GODs sexes ...
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Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 02, 2017, 06:52:10 AM
A haiku-palindRHYME dedicated to the late Merle Haggard (& to Beach Boys` version of his Muskogee-song):
>A smOKI' [smok'd] FROM
MUSKOKEE? EEK! Ok-SUM:
Morf'd? = `komSI-KOMsa' ...<
Is this 'haiku'? It isn't something I've been familiar with as haiku... it'd be fun if I could read it-can someone read it for me, though
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Re: New haikus/limericks/palindromes unite GODs sexes ...
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Quote from: Watamushi (Polly Poller) on May 02, 2017, 07:22:36 AM
Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 02, 2017, 06:52:10 AM
A haiku-palindRHYME dedicated to the late Merle Haggard (& to Beach Boys` version of his Muskogee-song):
>A smOKI' [smok'd] FROM
MUSKOKEE? EEK! Ok-SUM:
Morf'd? = `komSI-KOMsa' ...<
Is this 'haiku'? It isn't something I've been familiar with as haiku... it'd be fun if I could read it-can someone read it for me, though
Here's another one of them KRAPPY! Haiku+/palindromes, I'm afraid ...
And this is why I DIDN't want the move to THE SANDBOX (Brian's Dogs!):
>*Louie* - *Banana* ...
+ Sandbox; o *B*-DNAs !
A 'nana' be I: "U'~o' *L*. !"<
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Re: New haikus/limericks/palindromes unite GODs sexes ...
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Quote from: rasmus skotte on May 02, 2017, 06:52:10 AM
A haiku-palindRHYME dedicated to the late Merle Haggard (& to Beach Boys` version of his Muskogee-song):
>A smOKI' [smok'd] FROM
MUSKOKEE? EEK! Ok-SUM:
Morf'd? = `komSI-KOMsa' ...<
In the following utter madness, I'll try my darndest to prove MATHEMATICALLY! what a doubled or SQUARED Haiku-palindrhyme adds up to ...
[the topix being: On Top Of Old Smokey(SMiLE-era)/Smokey Joes Cafe(Party)/Okie From Muskogee(live)]
A rhymed haiku-palindrome (5/7/5 = 17 syllables) times two: equals ONE limerick-Palindrome (8/8/5/5/8 = 34 syllables).
An amorf'd, lowkey experiMENTAL haiku/limerick-palindrome:
>SEEK "Ol' Smoki" smok'd from 'a smoki';
smok'd from Musk-Okee/Reek-OK ...
Sum² :"Muskokee"
"Reek-Ok" sum-morf'd = KOMSI ?
- kom's AMORF'd, kom's I: kom's 'Lo-kees' !<
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Re: New haikus/limericks/palindromes unite GODs sexes ...
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Andy Paley deserves his own palindrome. Even his surname calls for one! After all those years of hard work he put into his collaboration with Brian, and relatively little OFFICIAL output to show for it; we can only speculate: Y??? (co-starring usual suspect, *Eugene Landy*)
[This one should be proof, that anyone can create a (haiku-)palindrome. It all grows out of that first line: the name with a suitable suffix! The rest is backward paddling and spelling, trying to make sense of it/add meaning to it all:]
(number one:)
>L/ANDY PALEYdrome !
"M.O.Rd." - Y? *E.L*, A.P.??
Y? DNA = L. !<
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Re: New haikus/limericks/palindromes unite GODs sexes ...
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Paleydrome #²:
>Naf'? - Aha!; *Rio
Grande* e', made Dame Edna:
"*RG*? OI! RAH!! (- a fan)"<
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Paleydrome #³ (Paley Bros.):
>SWEET INSANITY ...
P^LEY/P^ley: "Ye LP = YELPy!
Tin-as-nite, e' W'*S°*?"<
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Tanka-Paleydrome (Babewatch-edit):
>SWEET INSANITY?:
"PALEY /*DON(!) WAS* NEVER - er....
even saw no
'dye-LA-P.Y.T.'
in a s-NITe'e !" *W^s*<
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Paley'drome #°:
>SMS in air,
B: "Wall-of-Sound *n* U'-0's
- folla W! (Brianisms)"<
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Re: New haikus/limericks/palindromes unite GODs sexes ...
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Haiku+paley'drome #**** (belated birthday greeting from our Doctor Love:)
>SO, WILSON/SCHMILSON !
Dr.: "0 limerix-ire, Milord ?
No slim H^'C°S ?? NO Sliwo's
"<
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Quote from: rasmus skotte on June 24, 2017, 10:33:06 PM
Haiku+paley'drome #**** (belated birthday greeting from our Doctor Love:)
>SO, WILSON/SCHMILSON !
Dr.: "0 limerix-ire, Milord ?
No slim H^'C°S ?? NO Sliwo's
"<
W*A*R*N*I*N*G:
The following EXPANSION Shows what happens when a palindromer desperately wants to incorporate into one single limerick-palindrome IN WORDS his 3 main creative outlets, namely: limerick & haiku (palindromed) + Wilson & "FIRE" + "Dorian Gray" & Sliwovitz!
AND you have been warned ...
[the court-case against Dr. O'Limerix, dedicated to Oscar Wilde:]
>>E*/ RISE ! "DORIAN" POT-PAL 'ON FIRE'!
SO WILson/Schmalson: Dr. O'Limeriex/EIRE:
"Milord, NO Slam H^'C°S
+ N_O Sliwo's !
er.. IF, N_O LAP*TOP(!) 'n AIR, o DESIRE'... "<<
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Re: Your summer challenge: WRITE a poem/ode/anthem AND/OR get a tailormade one ...
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- from Dr.O'Limerix!!! See how simple it is (as an example) to make a palindrome poem, like how Mr. Was came to direct/produce IJWMFTT:
>Don Was ?
Saw nod !<
Or take a Mama Cass, and see where a name like that can lead to:
>L.A.-gym, eh ?
Class-act Mama 'Mt.' Cass
Alchemy gal !<
ENJOY ...
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The Oscar WILDEst limerix:
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New original limerick (as one would expect it from a dr. O'Limerix) written in the good olde "naughty-but-nice" tradition. So if if you are being a wee bit PRICKly about the subject, just don't read on! Improvements are welcome ...
(The OSCAR WILDEst limerix # I:)
O. Wilde once DID talk in gay Limerick
This whole town was quick to give him the schtick
They really were not hateful
and he wasn't ungrateful:
" Why, thanks all the same, but PLEASE GIMME Prick"...
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The Oscar WILDEst limerix:
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The OSCAR WILDEst limerix # II - by unknown:)
There once lived a man of superlative wit
There was never a pun that Wilde could not hit
He smacked down Churchill
left him in the lurch, ill
and completely destroyed him, the twit
Quote from: >dr.O'Limeriex/Eire("M'l°rd")< on June 27, 2017, 07:07:01 AM
[the OSCAR WILDEst limerix, the case against him. O'Limeriex for the defense (as a palindrome) :]
S h i f t y f a d e s t o "G r a y":
>>E*[1] RISE ! "DORIAN" POT-PAL 'ON FIRE'!
So, WIL's ON!/schmals on?: Dr. O'Limeriex/EIRE:
"Milord, NO slam H^'C°S
+ N_O Sliwo*s !
er.. IF; N_O LAP*TOP-'n-AIR-ode ~ SIRE... "<<
M'Lud, the judge's verdict - as a limerick-palindrome designed by >droll Mr.K!/SkRm(L'-Lord)<:
>"Sex, e' ? Palindromes unite GODs EXes !
An integral EVIL --- flexes;
Sex-elf - live LARGE*T¤nin ?
As EXes DO-GET-IN:
USE M.O.Rd. ! NIL apexes !!"<
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The Oscar WILDEst limerix:
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Historical limerick in 4 parts about the mock trial against Oscar Wilde (which - the case itself - was the real DISGRACE i.m.h.o.) BY ALEXANDER BARON ...
(OSCAR WILDEst limericks # IV:)
There once was a writer named Wilde,
whose sexual habits weren't mild,
In fact they'd appear
To be shockingly queer,
For a nobelman's son he defiled.
The Marquis, he sent Wilde a note:
'To the sodomite Oscar', he wrote,
Oscar Wilde sued for libel,
but soon got an eyeful,
And backed down against the old goat.
Shortly afterward came his arrest,
And poor Oscar was surely distressed
when sentenced to do
Hard labour for two,
Long years as Her Majesty's guest.
On release from his punishment place,
He departed in shame and all haste,
Thus, hard up and exiled
Did poor Oscar Wilde
Spend the rest of his life in disgrace.
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Re: Your summer challenge: WRITE a poem/ode/anthem AND/OR get a tailormade one ...
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Who really was instrumental in the "De-composing" of SMiLE? Just take the underscored(!) word from the opening line and read it from behind ...
(the >SMiLE-LIM*s<, #2 [the first one is to be found here down under]
Wils_o_n_a_t_a_s: DE-composing SMiLE Tones
"Schmilsson smart-ass" RE-osmosing style zones !
Choosing "Be Around" tapes
Oozing BRiAN soundscapes
NIL-non GRATAs: MILESTONESMILESTONESMiLEsTONES....
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Memorial GLEN CAMPBELL tanka-palindrome poem:
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Memorial tanka-palindrome dedicated to Glen Travis Campbell ("El GIGANTE/GRANDE", 1936-2017) - R.I.P. [G.I.D. ? = "Guess I'm Dumb"]:
>GLEN: a B*Boy (live) ~ B Y'...
Dig "G.I.D."! - (yo brats) "W*CREW"er!!
C°. + W. *S*T*A*R* -
(boy diggidy!) ~ Be wily,
o B.B.; an "El G......"<
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Re: Limerix, palindromes, slim haikus & slam Sliwo*s:
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Smart alec: VAN DYKE PARKS Serves Up a haiku+palindrome of his own:
>"Two-step to lamp-lite,
cellar tune"? "Nut" R Allec, e'!
... 'til' p.m. - A LOT !! [Pet So*-w't]<
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F/Anthems celebrating 50 years of SMILEY SMILE !!!!!
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>OO-doowop? O, voodoo !<
>>On " D.A." ~ Smiley ...
[Smile]: HaHaHa-HELI°Ms ?
Yel': "I'm SAD!" - no ...<<
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