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« on: April 01, 2016, 01:44:11 AM »

John k': 'HOLLAND'-renga Palindrome-poem.
"Kim=klm. "Urn" is a reminder that the WILSONS are partly dutch and have ancestors buried there! The first 7 names in verse II indicates albums with famous singers and songwriters to bring along for inspiration: Kris K/Lee H/Fred A/Art G. "Wolf" means a 'lieder'-LP with Hugo WOLF or WOLF Biermann & K.C.=Karen Carpenter. "Egg-urb" is Brugge (=Bruges) reversed,  which means that Carl wanted Al to take a reseach trip not only to 'The Ned's/Holland' but also to Belgium! 'JACK' is Mr. Rieley]

                             -I-
               >"Evade kim/Ryanair!

           Be curbed ... Urn, alas in Ned's!

                   (U.K.-Capitol-)>

           plot;  I pack (U.S): DENNIS,

ALAN, 'rude BRUCE', BRIAN (ayr), MIKE, DAVE"<

                          -II-
           >"Boston! 'Tis 'Kris', 'Wolf',

          'Lee', 'Fred', 'Art', 'K.C.'!  (A.J. >

             nips to BAAMBRUGGE;

      'Egg-urb'!) 'MA'!!, 'A bot'. Spin JACK:

'TRADER', 'Feel Flows'; irks it not? {*sob*}"<
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« Reply #1 on: May 09, 2016, 12:30:37 AM »

[a.k.a. John k': 'HOLLAND'-renga Palindrome-poem.
"Kim=klm. "Urn" is a reminder that the WILSONS are partly dutch and have ancestors buried there! The first 7 names in verse II indicates albums with famous singers and songwriters to bring along for inspriration: Kris K/Lee H/Fred A/Art G. "Wolf" means a 'lieder'-LP with Hugo WOLF or WOLF Biermann & K.C.=Karen Carpenter. "Egg-urb" is Brugge (=Bruges) reversed,  which means that Carl wanted Al to take a reseach trip not only to 'The Ned's/Holland' but also to Belgium! 'JACK' is Mr. Rieley]

                             -I-
               >"Evade kim/Ryanair!

           Be curbed ... Urn, alas in Ned's!

                   (U.K.-Capitol-)>

           plot;  I pack (U.S): DENNIS,

ALAN, 'rude BRUCE', BRIAN (ayr), MIKE, DAVE"<

                          -II-
           >"Boston! 'Tis 'Kris', 'Wolf',

          'Lee', 'Fred', 'Art', 'K.C.'!  (A.J. >

             nips to BAAMBRUGGE;

      'Egg-urb'!) 'MA'!!, 'A bot'. Spin JACK:

'TRADER', 'Feel Flows'; irks it not? {*sob*}"<
[And finally: The fairytale gets its own renga-palindrome. For HOLLAND, Brian 'Aesop' Wilson authored Mt. Vernon & Fairway. He designed the EP-cover himself! Originally he wanted Marilyn (pet-named 'Soppy-lop' = Puppy-Love?) to buy him an airbrush for the coloring. When that didn't happen, he had to make do with his daughters' crayons! In his fairytale-synopsis, the Pied Piper was in the shape of a Sea Polyp! After the inclusion af South Africans Blondie & Ricky, a third  african was considered: Kenyan-born singer-songwriter Ayub Ogada. To test him, Brian had him taste a sample (of sea polyps)!
In order to keep Dennis 'Canaries' Wilson IN Holland, you'd have to sit on him! HOLLAND was conceived as a double LP including SMiLE! When that wasn't forthcoming, the plan was to place the Fairy Tale AND CALIFORNIA SAGA (Incl. Big Sur) on disc 2.
And making this DUAL Album  into a DELUXE BOXSET titled: "MARTYR-RUM"!]

             >Re: 'PI-- PIPER'<                                                                                  {by RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBOY}

                         '
         ->MURRY tramples a >

cruet? No, CARL!     AUDREE NEVA?

       - sinned NOT!       ** is ME ...

           Sets a tad ago: "Buy an >

   airbrush, 'Soppy-Lop'!    Aesop >

                        ²
           met a:)      e-Radio

       (re: Pi-- Piper. O' I dare!)

        A (tempo-)SEA POLYP!

        (= posh --- SUR BRIAN)

        Ayub Ogada tastes 'em!

                     ³
           "SIT ON Dennis!!"

A VENEER, DUAL, RACONTEUR

   CASE-LP: "MARTYR-RUM"<-
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« Reply #2 on: May 09, 2016, 02:38:04 AM »

[And finally: The fairytale gets its own renga-palindrome. For HOLLAND, Brian 'Aesop' Wilson authored Mt. Vernon & Fairway. He designed the EP-cover himself! Originally he wanted Marilyn (pet-named 'Soppy-lop' = Puppy-Love?) to buy him an airbrush for the coloring. When that didn't happen, he had to make do with his daughters' crayons! In his fairytale-synopsis, the Pied Piper was in the shape of a Sea Polyp! After the inclusion af South Africans Blondie & Ricky, a third  african was considered: Kenyan-born singer-songwriter Ayub Ogada. To test him, Brian had him taste a sample (of sea polyps)!
In order to keep Dennis 'Canaries' Wilson IN Holland, you'd have to sit on him! HOLLAND was conceived as a double LP including SMiLE! When that wasn't forthcoming, the plan was to place the Fairy Tale AND CALIFORNIA SAGA (Incl. Big Sur) on disc 2.
And making this DUAL Album  into a DELUXE BOXSET titled: "MARTYR-RUM"!]

             >Re: 'PI-- PIPER'<                                                                                  {by RengaWagneR w/ SMiLErPal'dromerBOY}

                         '
         ->MURRY tramples a >

cruet? No, CARL!     AUDREE NEVA?

       - sinned NOT!       ** is ME ...

           Sets a tad ago: "Buy an >

   airbrush, 'Soppy-Lop'!    Aesop >

                        ²
           met a:)      e-Radio

       (re: Pi-- Piper. O' I dare!)

        A (tempo-)SEA POLYP!

        (= posh --- SUR BRIAN)

        Ayub Ogada tastes 'em!

                     ³
           "SIT ON Dennis!!"

A VENEER, DUAL, RACONTEUR

   CASE-LP: "MARTYR-RUM"<-

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« Reply #3 on: May 14, 2016, 02:25:20 AM »

[This Haiku-Palindrome by Bean Bag Features Dennis 'Canaries' Wilson and 'HOLLAND'-photographer RUSS (Mackie: Rieley's assistant and former singer/teen idol?) in NED's/Holland or (Denny) not so much!:]

        ->"*n' if RUSS  is IN

'Ned*," {'Dennis and Edna sinned?'}

        "Dennis IS surfin'!"<-
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« Reply #4 on: August 23, 2016, 01:41:29 AM »

The CAST from the following feature: CARL's sons JONAH & JUSTIN/guitarist colleague RON Wood/TRADER-lyricist JACK RIELEY (though Carl - like the rest of us - struggled to spell his name correctly!)/ a PLEYEL piano (upon which TRADER was composed(?)/Pet Sounds collaborators TONY Asher & SID Sharp/keyboard WIZ: DARYL Dragon/actor ELI Wallach/& G.I. corporals: (palindromic'ly named) >Radar< O'REILLY & Oliver NORTH! [Renga-palindrome by john k:]

>DARYL: "Lie right, RON!
I hung a red artefactoid!
I SEE PLEYEL (Eire), LO!"
JACK RILEY elpees dissed, O Reiley?
NOT S, W or N - it's 'U'!

JONAH's eye: Rielly.
Diss idyll (Eire), yes? Ha, NO!
JUSTIN rows TONY
ELI erodes SID (see Pleyel):
"Irk/cajole Rieley elpees ...

(Idiot cafe TRADER!)"
A gnu: "Hi NORTH {G.I.}
REILLY ----- RAD!"<

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

And finally a fast  haiku-drome 'for the road'! The mid-line should read: "Otherwise known as a kind of *AD*" OR if one is more PRO product placement: "a kick-off *AD*" vis-a-vis " "a knock-out *AD*":

>'Aye, CARL! LITTLE HONDA ...
O.k.a. a K. o. *AD*!?'
"NO! Hel'!!   T'T, I'll race ya!"<
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« Reply #5 on: November 06, 2016, 02:16:27 AM »

Renga-palindrome by JOHN K. Starring Dave Marks/Sid Sharp/Al/Mike & his harpist sister, Maureen (or is it just Dave's microphone turned off?)/The Wilson Bros. & Carl's former father-in-law: OTTO POP Hinsche/former Warner boss, Mo Ostin (who rejected HOLLANDs first line-up)/Keanu Reeves/Oprah (having back pains, like Carl) & dutch town, Zwolle.]

>EEK, image-mono! No MEGA-MIKE, e'?<

                     °
>>>Y AL, Racine-veneer?
U, a mellow Z, taping
ELO (Lynne). DAVIDs
unit-solo? - tip a crew!
OTTO, no MEGA-MIKE!

                   '
Esoteric SID SHARP!
One's Selmer-amp as an air-
bag, as lacunae.

                   ²
°k, re: d'ART ~ TRADER!
"Keanu/CAL.SAGA/BRIAN,
asap! Ma/R.E.M.
Lessen Oprah's disc !  Ire to
seek image!  MO (not TOWER-

                   ³
CAPITOL) OSTIN/U.S.-
diva: DENNY (lol !). E.g.:
nip at Zwolle, MAUREEN!
                    ~
Even I, CARL. Ay'!"<<<



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