Next song from me

[Rocker]

http://rapidshare.com/files/39881762/Lights_go_out_Version2_.mp3.html


I should tell you that it is not finished yet.
I doubled my lead-voice but was off at some points (I was in a hurry recording this, so I just sang it again, without hearing it back before that). Also the strings on my bass must be changed and it makes some noises.  I'd like to know what you think about the song. Of course it could've been done better in terms of singing and what I mentioned, but I'd be interested in some opinions.

[matt-zeus]

I like it, it sort of reminds me a littel bit of late period Velvet Underground for some reason, it has a bit of that Lou Reed feel. The mix is quite strange, but adds to the subject matter of the song. good piano!

[Rocker]

Thank you !

Originally I didn't plan on keeping the piano on the track. I just recorded piano and vocal as a demo to play the other parts and then erase piano and the first vocal. But it sounded too good to do that, so I let it stay there.
I now finished the song (it's just one small thing added) and already recorded a finished version onto which a friend of mine and I will add drums on sunday. I might upload that version when we are finished, but I haven't made my mind up yet.