I know you'll come up with something NICE for the occasion.
Yes, this is nicer (I suppose)
and more cryptic (which shouldn't worry VDP none):
<Dork said V.D. Parks tut-tuts krap DVD. I ask Rod>Well, John. You really nailed it BIGTIME, imOHO. I only needed to fill out some blanx! And you all know the drill from there... I can't help but obsessing when it comes to re-shaping John's splendid 'dromes (or anyone's!) into neat little haiku-palindromes.
For this one I wanted Mike into the action, making it HIS reply to Parks' tut-toting Summer In Paradise (and in his perplexity, referring to that as a DVD instead of a L.P./CD).
MIKE & Van DYKE over THE TOP. See how they even rhyme together! I'm finding them MOAN-spirited rather than mean- ditto:
>LOVE-VOL. < [haiku-palindrome by Theydon & P'dromer Bois]
>Parks says: "S.I.P.?
Alas, a Love-vol. as (a..
la) pissy as skrap!"<
>TUT-TUT< [haiku-palindrome by JOHN King TUT (& hai{ku}jack'd by P'dromer Boy)]
>Mik' said: "V.D. Parks?
Tut-tut-tuts 'KRAP' DVD?!
I ******* ASK 'im ..."<
[Beware of hidden meaning when reversing last line, adding the 'd' (take that - Beatles)]
And speaking of obsessing; could it be that Parks has been doing just THAT (almost being one of them KOKOMbOVERS?) ever since he helped writing
he's Goin' Bald?
Such 'insight' oughta make them both donate hundreds! I know I would if I had that kind of money... Let's give them the benefit of the doubt during this weekend!