I think you have all the materials at hand now to assemble a book, Julia. It is now just a question of how to organize for the reader.
Im extremely flattered you think this would make a good book. I was just gonna cross-post to my blog

I'm open to suggestions but I thought of it as a journal, writing about my interpretation of SMiLE as I went. It started with me revisiting the topic after Brian's passing--browsing the Wiki article to see how it's changed, rereading Carlin...and then I realized I didn't know when Brian and Van actually teamed up so I googled it and found the Internet Archive copy of the Badman book, which was how this started. Then I wanted to read other books/articles where the most interesting tidbits from the wiki were sourced from and after a certain point it became "I guess Im gonna weigh ALL the evidence and try to be as well-read on the subject as possible."
The person who might have more concrete timeline details than what is extant elsewhere is Durrie Parks, who has some tantalizing quotes in David Leaf's SMiLE book. (Did you notice the fact that the Parkses actually moved into the spare bedroom at Laurel Way for an unspecified period of time? The question that arises is when did they depart? It seems that too much familiarity and proximity resulted in some escalating friction...)
Yes, I did! That might be the single most shocking revelation of the new book! It literally changes everything and because of it, I'm willing to believe theories that otherwise would've seemed absurd to me--like juggler's speculation that CIFOTM was a Brian-Dennis collab. It makes no sense an entire song would be left unfinished when they had infinite access to each other. It's so insane no other source mentions it--you'd think Vosse would have a throwaway line about it or something. Anderle, when he speaks of the relationship fracturing, you'd imagine would bring it up. Just goes to show there's so much we don't know and cannot know.
That said, the key point amidst the riches of your latest synthesis from Vosse's piece (and I agree that it is by far the best snapshot of the period that's available to us) is that a path to a 1967 SMiLE was possible had certain things been avoided.
The multiple versions that could constitute a released version should (IMO) be what a book leads toward, where they are discussed as potential real-life decision points for the different track listings. Some of the early intentions might have dropped out as the project moved toward completion (assuming Brian masters the HV situation). For me the best solution he had was to create a single and an album suite where HV connected with various parts of the Americana material. I think that's kind of where he got to in March, but at that time he was burned out--the same heebie-jeebies that plagued him with GV had kicked in. SMiLE only happens if he gets past that--which I think would have been possible if MOLC hadn't thrown things sideways, leading to the December contretemps.
I'd like that. From the first, it's always been my goal to challenge what I perceived then (and confirmed now) to be widespread inaccurate assumptions about the album. I had the gut feeling in 2013 after playing around with mixes and landing on my preferred Americana/Innocence structure that this was the true SMiLE. While I'm less dogmatic on that now, I still think Priore's Americana/Elements model is not only a flawed presentation but (now confirmed) completely unproven. Even in his own books, he doesn't justify it in the slightest, his conclusions don't come from an examination of the evidence (be it testimony, context clues, chords/instrument analysis, lyrical themes, etc) they're just pulled from thin air and rationalized with lies--like that ridiculous secret conversation in the 80s. A conversation which, I now have on good authority, ended with Brian yelling words to the effect of "get this guy out of my fucking house!"
I did not enter into this deep dive with the goal of decrying Priore--in fact I wanted to learn the truth whatever it was, and if there were good reasons his ideas had taken hold I was ready to acknowledge the facts and relegate my SMiLE sequence to the "I prefer this, even if it's inaccurate" category. However, the more I learned the clearer it became Priore has no business being held up as an authority on the subject. He's a blatant liar and has been given a wildly outsized role in the fandom. It's high time some other framework for organizing the music took precedence, and I've suggested several alternatives in these many posts. It need not be a SMiLE of two themes, but of flats/sharps or whatever else.
What you suggest is very reasonable--it does seem like there was a distinction between "this could be/was a Hero fragment" and "everything else" when looking at key signatures. There is, I now admit, a good case that Wonderful and even CIFOTM were perhaps the narrator of Heroes reflecting on his child(ren)'s upbringings rather than a generic Innocence suite. I'm not sure if I personally prefer the new sequences that could emerge from this over my old theories but there's enough evidence to justify it and it's worth trying.
If that hurdle is cleared and Brian sets The Elements aside, then track order variants will also hinge on Capitol's desire for GV to be on the record. I think you have plenty of room in a book (possibly a chapter called "So Just Would a 1967 SMiLE Have Looked Like?") to cover all the variants, including those w/o GV...though you do need to consider how to rank the likelihood for each as part of the assessment. (There is still room for personal preference/advocacy, however--that writing flavor is part of what will sweep the reader along and make this into what will be the eternally freshest take on "what might have been."
I can dig this. I do think there's SOMETHING to the master #s for example. It shouldn't be considered the end all be all of evidence but I think changes in the master for Heroes for example may signal changes in its structure--from a series of OMP variations to Barnyard-Heroes to Cantina-Heroes etc. We'll never know for sure but there had to be different "Eras" of each song.
BTW, Cam's comment does not make sense to me at all. (I couldn't find it there, so there might be more context to it, but remember that Cam was the originator of the notion that the master #s were the key to everything.) The escalating pushback from the band in December and the disastrous-in-retrospect edict from Anderle that they needed a single clearly made things more fraught for Brian, but the amount of studio wizardry expended on HV in early 67 puts the lie to the idea that Brian had totally soured on elaborate production. HV gobbled up so much time that he had little left over to revisit/resolve other tracks that were in various states of completion--it sure looks like March is that point in time...which dovetails with the departure of Vosse and Anderle. And that is when the transition to Smiley really begins...
I agree. The first quote was here (
https://endlessharmony.boards.net/thread/880/tale-leavings-cabinessence-incident?page=6&scrollTo=100231) which paints a very different picture than what he followed up with here (
https://endlessharmony.boards.net/thread/880/tale-leavings-cabinessence-incident?page=6&scrollTo=100243). The first post implied Brian didn't think the music was good anymore upon listening to it sober for the first time (since he'd been high nonstop for 4 months apparently) the latter clarifies that he was scared of the Fire tape and the negative vibes it represented--that drugs had strung him out too much and were no longer aiding the creative process. That's a significant difference and admittedly it goes to show how editiorialized quotes and reactions can give different impressions than what was originally said. (Another reason I encourage everyone to read the original sources too--this thread is just me trying to suss out what's important in each one and use that data to construct an overriding picture of what happened and what SMiLE was/would've been. I'm not trying to render the sources obsolete I'm trying to weigh the various accounts to get a "big picture.")
I dont think Brian soured on big production (or Wrecking Crew production anyway) until March '67. That's when suddenly a bunch of songs are just Brian on piano, maybe with Carl on another instrument. I think Smiley represents Brian's attempt to preserve the basic themes, tone, humor, sound effects and psychedelia of SMiLE without the Wrecking Crew productions, modular editing, recording hours of tape just to tediously hunt for highlights after, excising the band from the creative process and grand "symphony to God" aspirations. SMiLE is somewhere between the Pet Sounds lush orchestral and Smiley stoned party aesthetics--it's up to the listener/mixer where they place it along that spectrum.